| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: aikochan On: June 16, 2003 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is completely awesome! and ive been reading it slowly cuz i was hoping you'd have some more chapters done before i finished reading them all. pllllleeaasssee continue this a.s.a.p!! i cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2003 07:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great chap! That and the fact that I got thru to MMO so quickly like the good old days ^_^. Anyhoo, I loved the martial arts lesson and the fact that Trunks thought the family crest was an anchor :D. I love it when he pisses off his daddy like that. Did Veg really see Bulma? For someone who supposedly didn't care he took off like a bullet :P. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Again great job and Congrats for getting the gold. You deserve it ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: June 03, 2003 01:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! Bulma taking off into space was a nice twist. Vegeta and Trunks are cute together. Please post again soon. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 02, 2003 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!! And I actually got in to review!!! I love the way the plot is building... I can't wait to see where you take this!
And congrats on the gold!!!! Remind me never to make you angry.... |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 19:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. I wonder where you got some of those stances, Ember? ;) I loved this chapter, because we get to see lots of interaction between Vegeta and Trunks.
Even though Vegeta may seem like he's coming across as tough on his son, I think you've also shown his devotion to Trunks (Jeez, he brought the kid, after all!), and obviously he's still very devoted to Bulma!
Congratulations on your Gold Medal, BTW! I knew you would do well, Kiddo! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: June 02, 2003 19:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
THank God u updated and Congrats on ur Medal!!!!
Loved the chapy!! it was funny and loved the tecnical martial arts stuff very very cool!
DId he really saw Bulma!!!!!??? Im dying here !!!
so update sooNN!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 30, 2003 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, that was very interesting. It seems Veggie has some a major guilt trip named Bulma. I loved his pov but I must say I'm concerned as to why Bulma is in the condition she's in. Is it disease or foe? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chap to find out. As always, great job ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: May 15, 2003 06:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
One moe thing i believed vegeta was real thatshow much of his character ithink you got right. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu On: May 15, 2003 06:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
I hope you read this. I love the story and you hve Vegeta down to T, but, yes a but,sorry, don't you think if he's changed he might care a little more for Bulma. Sorry thats probably my thinking. I promise not a flame just a question, I know your hinting that he issorta going after bulma, but if you could find a double meaning one that would be cool. Sorry i hate when my mind works cause then I do this and soe people ge mad and I don't mean to do that. Wahhhhhhhhhh.
Would you mind if I used an Idea from you. I can't remember what it is but when I Have time i will e-mail you if ican and ask you. I saw something that gabe me an idea to add something to a story. Its not stealing anything you did but I t mad a twist for a story my friend is writing and it would be awsome to add. If not thats fine too. It just got me thinking and considering its 10 mins to 5:00 in the morning, i am insomniac at the age of 17 I hate that, my mind loves to think it seems. Well sorry this is long, please if you want to comment and help me understand how you portray Vegeta that would be cool. My e-mail is zerianyu@yahoo.com
If not thats cool too, butyou do write really well and I Just had a question if ya answer it yay, if not it wasn't that important and i wasted your time that simple. Well at least let me know if I can use my ides when i remember it please. well gotta go my dad fids out i have been on this late he will skin me alive and i mean that lmost literaly I would be holding my ears for the next 24 hours. Ahhhhhhhhhh i rambled, well hae to erase and this has got to be my longest review in the history of my life. Ahhh welllllll such is that, i din't think it le people write this much to tell ya the truth i am that bored i guess. Well please let me now if ya can. One thing in some paragraphs a word was left out, mostly in the ealier chapters not so much noe, but thought that would help sorry that was a pointlesss review consider thats all i wrote to help you on the story sorry to bable but that seems to be my hobby. If things are spelled wrong ,well they say that way, i don't re read over my reiews and as you can see I hate to earae so i leave it here in hopse you will get back to me , mabey we can discuss dbz if yawant i don't know your choice afre all now i am wasting your time. If you read this all I applaud you you are a great writer that likes to know what peolple think and i hope you stay that way if not well then ya don't *smiles* I can be annoying and i am now bye. yes thats is fianlly my fingers are cramping and i on;ly wrote one review shows you how much i type huh. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Veggie is either incredibly stupid or just full of himself. I'm sure Bulma didn't leave so that he could go after her. I think it has to do with saving her company in some bizarre way. She has been gone a long time and that gives me cause to worry, after all she has no way of defending herself like Veggie would. So he wants to take Trunks into space? It would be interesting to see if their paths cross. Damn, this fice rocks and so do you! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! LMAO! She...she took...she's nuts...holy shit! I love how you had me believing that she was talking about Veggie's trip to Trunks, when in fact she was saying goodbye to her kid. My Kami. If Earth is nuts space will be crazier. I don't think Bulma has given a thought about what she's getting herself into. WOW that was some chap. You're such a genius!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that idiot O_O. Bulma appologized and he threw it back in her face and accused her of deceit! I think monkey boy is waaay too paranoid. Bulma doesn't need his help in getting CC back on track, which by the way it wouldn't be in the red if it wasn't for him. Dumb fuck!! Again another fantastic chap Ember. I don't know how you do it ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah CC's right about Veggie's concessions and the fact that he's possessive by nature, but I see Bulma's point of view also that Veg doesn't see or refuses to see how his actions hurt her and Cap Corp. That sweet lifestyle he enjoys is courtesy of the Briefs and not anything that he's done. Anyhoo, I'm curious to see how Bulma is gonna use the info she found in the puter. Great update Ember :D. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta my dear you can be such an asshole! All that's happened has been his fault, due to his temper. Great way of describing their feelings and I do think that at this point its best if they put some distance between them. So now that CC is on its way to financial ruin, I can't wait to see what Bulma's gonna do about it. Great job as always Ember ^_^. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, does anyone besides me want to kick Bulma's ass? Sorry... but I think that if she gets into trouble out there... well, she deserves whatever she gets.
Vegeta is taking Trunks to train in space, huh? Well, that ought to be ver interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Another great chapter... |
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