| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 10, 2003 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job don't forget to update!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 15:40 EDT
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Uh oh. Things are looking a little tense. Hopefully he'll get to her before that other guy does. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 03, 2003 16:57 EDT
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That was exciting! Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next installment. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o
I would not WANT to be Bulma right now...
Great chappie |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 17:52 EDT
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*sobs wildly* How could you tease me like that?? *Wails* It's just SO MEAN!!! *Sniffles* The title clearly says The Commanders Ball... and there was NO sign of my precious honey lamb - let alone any interesting body parts... *cries again*
Ahh well - despite your callous toying with my delicate emotions, I really enjoyed this chapter... I can't wait until B and V are re-united... O.o
*spork, spork*
(let's see if my first attempt at HTML tags works...) |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:26 EDT
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Yep...I was right anothe Awesome chapter!!!
Vegeta went a little overboard...don't you think? He should have just burned it into the wall with his ki...Hahahaha!!! Vegeta's so funny...he has control then he just loses it...wonder how the onna will react to this latest display of 'temper'...especially if she has made friends with the Commander...that assuming this Faylorn character doesn't get to her first...let's hope Vegeta makes it to her first...
The suspence is building...I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I've been really busy the last fews weeks, but know that I will always read and review this story...
Waiting............................................................................................................................................................................................. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 16:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well!!! You've done it again...another excellent chapter...actually two {I'm a little behind} I haven't read 13 yet, but I know your work and it Awesome!!!!
Vegeta seems to have Tunnel Vision...focus only on getting to Bulma, he forgot his son...hahaha!!! I can laugh, but it's really isn't funny, but then again it is...hahahaha!!!
The Prince of all Saiyans is so wrapped up in getting to his mate that he forgets about his son. I would say that Bulma has a pretty good hold on our Prince...I wonder if 'she' realizes it...???
At least Trunks was all right when Vegeta made it back and was having fun like a kid should.
I wonder how my copies of Bulma are running around out there? I'm assuming the look alike was a robot of some sort. You may have explained and I just missed it....hahahahaha!!!
Someone has been asking questions about any remaining Saiyans especially the one that destroyed Frezia...the plot thickens...who is he and what does he want?
This was an Excellent chapter...I loved the way Vegeta discovered a little more...the hold Bulma has on him...he truly does love her...
Moving on the chapter 13...I hope he has his cape to go with his Royal armor...
Waiting...................................................................................................................................................................................... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2003 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. Vegeta was sooo IC that I had to laugh a few times while reading this chap. He certainly is the master of sarcasm and threats :D. It looks like now he has good reason to worry about Bulma's safety. Trunks, I'm sure, can take care of himself. Can't wait to see how the rest of the story developes. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mr Peepers On: June 30, 2003 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job, once again! You know you're good when other authors are reading your stuff. You are in good company with Little Ninjin, Phantomscribe72 and Valeyard awaiting the next chapter. I am too. |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: June 30, 2003 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Great fic! It is fun to read and stays in the spirit of DBZ. Ember, you're one entertaining lass!
Write On!
-Rascal |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Veggie-kins misses his Bulma so much ^_^. It looks like the genius has definitely been there and left a sales rep in her place. She might very well be in another part of the galaxy by now drumming up business for CC. Super update Ember :D. |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: June 22, 2003 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me going, Ember. I thought he had found her at first. Loved the conversation of the hologram, so unlike Bulma and the fact that he has seen the weakness of just rushing in to a situation. Anxious for the next chapter to see if Vegeta goes to the ball and if he finds the real Bulma soon. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: June 21, 2003 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very much enjoying this... I have to say that I think it would benefit Bulma to see the way the creatures of the universe cower and respect Vegeta... maybe it will help her to understand what he gives up living with her, instead of having some say in the way the universe is ran. I think he should surprise her at the ball, and maybe it should happen when the higher ranking officers of the ship show Vegeta the respect of a royal. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 18:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
UUUUPPDAAAATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I loved the line when Vegeta says how dare she prostitue her body ! *FALLS OF THE CHAIR* HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH SO FUUUNYYY!
UPDATEEE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! The trouble that Bulma causes Vegeta... she's lucky he hasn't already killed her!
Another awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! |
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