| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
| Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] |
Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: August 28, 2005 01:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
yay for a new chapter great job... I loved it, those little moments between vegeta and bulma are great. That was priceless how he feeds off of her need for him... and how she's a strong character when she needs to be but when Vegeta is there for her she's glad to have him to comfort and protect her. I just loved it
|
Reviewed By: majinryoko On: August 27, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome author! I love how each chapter is from a new POV. It gives insight into the story that a nuetral 3rd person view would. I love it! I hope you update soon!
|
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 19:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh this was such a fun chapter! I love the B/V dynamic, of course, and how you take the time and attention to give us these little details. "Sexy Caveman Style, I can live with that." LOL! I'm still smiling over that Bulma line. I just love her this fic, which is such an original story-- and thanks for reminding me that I love it whenever you update!
|
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged in On: August 19, 2005 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read this story in a while but seeing the updates tempted me again and i am glad i read them, the direction in which this story is heading just thrills me and i am eager to learn of Vegeta's plot to save trunks. I enjoy reading the story from Piccolo's point of view, your characterization of him is definately on point. I wonder what Master Suh has in store for him as well
|
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 23:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. All the tension and animosity (as well as the make-ups!) between B&V has been done well. You have a way of making these characters come to life with such detail. I'm very interested in what Master Suh's master plan is and whose side she's really on, if anyone's at all. I have a feeling she's in it for herself -- but for what? Poor Piccolo! Though I was laughing at the idea of him being her little slave LOL! 'Til next time.
|
Reviewed By: wh00t On: April 16, 2005 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading all the chapters so far and i must say that this is an awesome fic. at first i thought this was gonna be about capsule corp, but then the plot suddenly changes. suddenly theyre in outerspace and all this shit happens. anywaiz i couldnt believe that vegeta would give up so easily with the fight against faylorn or whatever his name is. i mean i didnt think vegeta would be beaten that easily but then again i guess that had to happen so the story can go on. im also wondering what happened to the other Z fighters. i dont think theyre actually dead, are they? was master suh hitting on piccolo? lol i thought he was asexual. well yah i hope you update soon. and shit i hope vegeta and bulma finishes their business at GEyla?? so they can come home and vegeta can finally kick faylorn's ass!! and i just have to wonder what happened to capsule corp? is it back in business? are you gonna come back to that? update soon!!
|
Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 15:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
LAST CHAPTER WAS GOOD KEEP EM COMING
|
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 17:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
I think Master Suh and Piccolo are my new favorite couple! *hearts* I do so like those two together. The bit in the space pod with that *other* couple was great too! LOL. Aren't I betaing this fic?
|
Reviewed By: striderf--0 On: April 07, 2005 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon!!!! dont take like a month for a chapter. this shit rocks!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRrrrrr. I just wrote you a lovely review and it didn't save because I typed the spam protection code wrong. Oh well, I basically said that I forget how much I love this fic until I read another update. This one was wonderful (until the evil cliffie >.
|
Reviewed By: kat8125 On: April 04, 2005 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I just love the way you write Vegeta. Keep up the great fics :)
|
Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! *falls onto knees* why are there no more chapters?!?!? *throws a tantrum*.........*sighs* err...brilliant story, so detailed its amazing!! your characters are complex, their backgrounds and personalities well looked into....keep posting i really want to know how this one will turn out.
|
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 13:43 EST
Comment/Review:
I loved it! Every minute of it! More brilliant Piccolo POV and that fabulous Vegeta scene. Top notch stuff! Bulma may know what Vegeta has planned but I sure don't. I hope you can update soon.
|
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, Ember. This fic just keeps getting more and more interesting.
|
Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 12, 2005 15:58 EST
Comment/Review:
hey hey good chapter... wow that was intense what will happen now?
|
| Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] |
