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Reviewed By: Pisq On: January 12, 2005 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter!! I love Picollo's POV!
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This is a very interesting story!! Nobody seems to write about Vegeta and Bulma after those 3 mysterious years! I love it!! It's very original and the fight scenes are awesome!! Merry christmas and please update soon! lol
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in) On: November 29, 2004 23:48 EST
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Oh man, the title of that chapter scared me! Pretty clever of Vegeta though; now nobody will be tailing those two, trying to kill them.
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: November 27, 2004 07:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: November 20, 2004 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I have a BAD feeling about this... GREAT chappie.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 12:38 EST
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Wow! Now what? Short but oh, so excellent! I loved the way you find opportunities for excellent B/V without rearranging the story--it just happens so naturally. The piggy-back ride was a wonderful idea. Please don't make Bulma be too guilt-wracked over the whole thing. It's just her nature to be trusting. She wasn't raised to see intrigue around every corner. I'm really on pins and needles about Master Suh's true loyalties . . . . update soon!
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Title: Feeding Genius"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok we all know that it was bulmas fault move on...i want to know whats on vegeta BEAUTIFUL minds.....lol update..maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 20:37 EST
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*sweatdrops under pressure to write great review to match great chapter* It's so great how you manage to make an adventure story here an exercise in B/V foreplay. The adrenaline was just killer here--first that teasing chapter title and then Vegeta protecting his woman and blowing things up while doing it. Damn, that's sexy! Anyway, this review sucked but this story just keeps getting better. I like your short chapters, btw--this one had a nice bite!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 15:17 EST
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nice chapter I would expect no less though... Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not singned in) On: November 18, 2004 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew...you had me scared for a minute there, with the title and all. Nice chapter...as always with it coming from you. Can't wait to read more. :)
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy On: November 18, 2004 07:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful epic i love the way you keep surprising us i mean who can you trust everyone seems to have a hidden agenda. I'm starting to get suspicious about the investors at Capsule corp if there is espionage and surveillance going on.I can't wait to find out vegetas master plan especially when everyone else finds out that Bulma and Vegeta are "Dead". VenusLegacy
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:57 EDT
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Oh, V's not too sappy---if he said stuff like that all the time, yeah, but in the heat of the moment, when it matters? Nah. It needed to be said. I love Master Suh and I was soooo relieved to find out she wasn't really double-crossing Vegeta. I want her to stick around when it's all over. She'd make a great addition to the Z-senshi! Plus, for some reason, I smell romance between her and Piccolo. Don't be squicked, please! I know Piccolo and ANYONE is usually wrong, but there's something about Master Suh. *shrugs* And thanks for the quick update!
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Title: Feeding Genius"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EMBER i really like this story.words just can't say how i feel about it...i do want them to put the issue behind them and look foward.he loves her and she loves him.so know they know who they can trust no one but each other so please update so we can read more...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:02 EDT
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I loved Suh's POV!!!!! And the sexy jealous energy between B & V was trademark classic primo Ember! Vegeta was wonderfully IC--threatening then surprisingly fair. That's who he is. Enigmatic. Scarier when he is less confident than when he is confident. This Bulma you've written is his perfect match--they both have such deadly intelligence! This chapter was very enjoyable!
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Reviewed By: vegeta1 On: September 29, 2004 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so very glad you updated, I could pass on Master Suh's pov and rather focus on Bulma's or Vegeta's but none the less it was an excellent chapter
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