| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Makota [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this fic. I'm glad you updated so quickly. I love the twists and spins you've put forth making it unique among the many B/V's out there, no mean feat. Bravo! I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!
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Title: ch27
Reviewed By: LS On: September 13, 2004 00:59 EDT
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What a battle!! *whew* I like the way you describe Vegeta's feelings as he gathers and uses the power for the Final Flash, the bliss of the power etc. I like the way Bulma is still always 'thinking', even while allowing for her emotions (when she finds him), and especially in such dire straits. I like how you show that he knows she is a compliment to his power, with her, he feels like he can do anything. I like how the 'team' aspect of their relationship keeps growing throughout this fic. Thanks for what you put into writing these chapters for us to enjoy ^_^, I look forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Prince Vegeta1a On: September 12, 2004 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter has to be one of the best that I've read in a long time. And I really loved the fact that it was from Vegeta's pov. I hope that you will write more chapters from his pov again.
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!) On: September 12, 2004 14:17 EDT
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Hey, awesome chapter!! But I'm confused!!! What are they going to do?? Are they going to reprogram more robots, or is that just way out there? :D Can't wait for the next one though!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:39 EDT
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:39 EDT
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I just loved the fight scene, so well done. I truly visualized it as it was happening. And I loved how Bulma gets to be brilliant! *sigh* I just LOVE this story!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! That was a long wait, but in the end it was definitely worth it! The fight scene was fantastic, and I usually don't like fight scenes. My favorite parts are the interactions between Bulma and Vegeta, both verbal and unspoken. I really loved Vegeta's opinion of powering up and fighting as being addictive and almost as good as orgasm. LOL! And the chapter ended on a good note! I am eagerly looking forward to reading the next chapter... hopefully quicker than 3 months, and hopefully a B/V lemon. After all, Vegeta is (or at least WAS) horny from the fight. ;-) Hey, a girl can hope! Thank you again. You are one of my favorite authors. ~Gail~
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: September 09, 2004 21:28 EDT
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that was just a freaking awesome chapter
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot, that was great! Your fight scenes are only second to your lemons. "And then only just." LOL. There was such Vegeta vitality in this chapter and I enjoyed every sentence. In fact, I'm going to go back and read it again! The pleasing B/V exchange at the end was the least of it--it was all great!
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Reviewed By: Prince Vegeta1 On: July 28, 2004 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait till thew next chapter.....Luv the storie
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: razorknight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 08:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is frankly the first B/V story I read that does remind me of DBZ. Good to see people that can write lemons _and_ action as good as you. ... But I would like to see other POVs too. Mainly to figure out what Suh is thinking. Or if Yamcha is thinking at all (lol)
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Reviewed By: me On: June 30, 2004 00:52 EDT
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ha man, what a nice spin you've put on things. jesus is vegeta going to be pissed when he finds out!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: June 22, 2004 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very nice to see another chapter! Hopefully you have kicked that writers block far down the road and will be able to share a few more chaps before it strikes again. Looking forward to more...
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Reviewed By: hinagiku On: June 18, 2004 09:50 EDT
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O:O I' curious... but I believe that she had not betrayed them. I'll see, I suppose...
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:40 EDT
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What a concept--writers block that lets you write high quality other work so when you come back to the original it's with simmering freshness! Probably only works for excruciatingly talented people like you! Master Suh--what did you doooo? I am going to have to go back and re-read parts of this now, after the long delay, you realize...hmmm, think I'll start with Sex on Boss' Desk and Therapy chapters :-) I actually remember those the best but what the hey, gotta start somewhere! This storyline drives me crazy (in a good way) because I'm in such a panic for Vegeta to get some peace. But man, I love how you write him--such a MAN! debbiechan
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