| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:28 EDT
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well worth the wait! Now what? I do hope Master Suh isn't double-crossing Piccolo. That's a very bad idea indeed! This is such an original story, Lynn. I love it so! Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: March 12, 2004 06:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when you write from Vegeta's POV. I get so lost in his head that I forget it's a story for a while. You have an amazing gift and I hate you for it!
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA *not logged in* On: March 11, 2004 13:30 EST
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IT DOES FUCKING POUR FOR MY BABY GODDAMN IT!!! ITS LIKE A STARWARS MOVIE GONE BAD! DAMN THOSE PIECES OF SHITY THAT HAVE COME TO CAUSE TROUBLE TO MY OUJI-SAMA! Ahem...Temper tamtrum over now Well dear KEEP THOSE CHAPPIES ON COMING! IM DYING HERE! I hope that The idiot FAypussy fuck is on earth and that Gohan gets hin but always leave some for veggie-poo LOL Later onna UPDATE K!>:\
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 11, 2004 10:44 EST
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Well, I was hoping you were going to make it easy on them. They've been through so much. *grins evilly* But I think I like it better your way! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: February 18, 2004 17:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think it worked. It makes so much more sense now, knowing the real target. Woohoo! I wonder how Vegeta's ego will handle the thought that he is not the reason for this entire problem? Hmmmm. . . .
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Reviewed By: Jiggle- On: February 17, 2004 19:09 EST
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Yup you managed to pull it off. Another great chappy! Keep it up! :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 02, 2004 21:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! Emotional and hot... all in one chapter. Way to go, girl!
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 03:45 EST
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Your fic is so much more than lemons. That's why we are hooked. You do a wonderful job on drama; it's so interesting to see how both Bulma and Vegeta are affected because of how they acted towards each other on earth and then because of Trunks's kidnapping. So great job. Sorry for not reviewing often. I'll try to correct that mistake. ^_~
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: January 23, 2004 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! Now let's get this ship fixed and get back to Earth. And what IS master Suh up to? Under Piccolo's watchful gaze, I doubt she'll get away with it!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72-Carla On: January 21, 2004 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job on a tough challenge. God, you know I loved the B/V scene... you write them so well, with seemingly so little effort... It would make me hate you if I didn't love you so much *grumble*
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: January 07, 2004 21:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a super job with Piccolo's POV! You should consider doing a story for him. Worth the wait, as usual! ~_^
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 03:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy to see my favorite couple are alive, fully functional, and acting normal. Well, at least normal for them. LOL. The kissing scene was sweet and funny, and of course the banter between Bulma and Vegeta was excellent. I love lemons, but I'm glad you didn't include one in this chapter... I think it would have been inappropriate. Also, I enjoy reading Bulma's and Vegeta's POV. Master Suh's might be interesting, but I could care less about Piccolo's. Sorry, he's not one of my favorite characters, and I'm really only interested in Bulma, Vegeta, and Trunks. Speaking of Trunks... Looking forward to your next chapter. ~Gail~
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 17:27 EST
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Hey Ember, I finally got that fell to swoop! :D I was so waiting for them to finally kiss! It was so sweet how you incorporated it into this chapter. Hmmm. I want to focus on Vegeta! ;) I've given up trying to guess what you're going to do next, because you always seem to send your fics in a different direction from what I had envisioned; but you fill them with so much action and adventure and passion that I immediately forget my ideas anyway. Now, we don't want little Trunks to be permanently warped by this separation from his parents, so I think you better reunite them pretty soon, ok? :D
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: December 04, 2003 09:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm soo glad they're back together! Now, who would want Trunks? I have my suspicions, but I'm not telling! I think Piccolo is a great idea!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: December 03, 2003 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least everyone's awake and acting sane again. Another great update and I eagerly await the !next
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