| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Piccolo's definitely a good choice. Then again, I'm writing a Piccolo/Vegeta. I'm biased. ^_~ Really liked this chapter. It didn't need a lemon. In fact...it was better with just the touching kiss scene. Bulma and Vegeta have come along very far in this fic. I'm excited to see where you take them. And the visual with Vegeta sitting on the precipice was nice. I could just see that. Wait...I have see it. Thank God for doujinshi! ^_^
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Title: Chap. 20
Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 30, 2003 10:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! It just gets worse (and that's better for the reader!) I love it. I'm voting Master Suh. . .just to be different.
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Reviewed By: subu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 01:35 EST
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I really don't care which point of vieuw you're writing, but for heavens sake, let them talk. I mean I've been reading your story for ages, and I can't wait any longer. What will they say, now they finally seen each other, after the big fight on earth, for the first time. Anger, hate, love, what will it be? please updte asap.
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Reviewed By: saiyanchick On: November 23, 2003 04:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I great story so far I think you should continue in Bulma's POV maybe some glipses of Vegeta's POV would be good.
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Title: ch.20
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 22, 2003 02:38 EST
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Curiouser and curiouser....I can't wait to learn who is lying, Rian or Master Suh...{I'm wondering if there is a little truth on both sides?? I guess I'll just have to wait and find out ^_~)What a cliff-hanger...*gulp* I don't know who's POV I'd prefer, I am enjoying them all *^_^*...I will wait patiently for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: November 20, 2003 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I am so wrapped up in this story... Excellent job... again... And you know I want you to do Vegeta's POV.. you do that better than anyone.
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Reviewed By: TrunksChick19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 16:05 EST
Comment/Review:
DO VEGETA'S POV AND PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Title: feeding genius
Reviewed By: whit On: November 12, 2003 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was a VERy different fic and i loved it nice job and i hope that VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTA AAAAAAAAAAAA and BBBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLMMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAA get back together and to a little hanky panky oops how did that slip out oh well im sure everyone else does to so add next chappie
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 10, 2003 15:32 EST
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Oh my, I wasn't expecting that! Now why is he on EARTH I wonder? This can't be good. . . . Thanks for adding me to your update list.
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Title: chapters 18 & 19
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 04, 2003 00:44 EST
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Another two intriguing chapters, yay! I like the way Bulma can't help bristling w/ jealous and possessive feelings whenever Master Suh seems too familiar w/ Vegeta...hehe (& I like that Master Suh [realizes] acknowledges that more than Bulma's pretty face is the draw for Vegeta's affection & attention. ^_~) I like when Bulma is seeking solace by holding Trunks' blanket to herself. I can't wait to find out what 'Ashora' means ^_^. In chapter 19, my favorite part is when Bulma is 'breathing in the air that was sweet with his beautiful musky scent' hmmm *^_^*...(& later, when she sneaks a few hours of sleep next to his sedated form)...I am wondering what will happen when they land on Mantion ...I'm wondering if that little moment will be the calm before the storm?? Or will he see her and bring himself under control quicker than we anticipate?? hmmm ^_^ So many questions...I look forward to finding out what is next to come.
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Reviewed By: NSB! On: October 30, 2003 20:23 EST
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL HOW IN THE HOW CAN TRUNKS BE ON EARTH!!!!! UPDATE EMBER IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!! WAKE MY BABY UP TOOOO I MISS HIM ALLLLLL OF HIM!! LATER!!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: October 30, 2003 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again =) I really want to know what Master Suh meant with 'Saiyan Ashora', but I guess we'll get to know that in awhile. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! I can't believe you snuck this out and didn't tell me! Wonderful! Please let Veggie-chan heal quickly. *bats eyelashes* They need to make up!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (2 lazy to log in) On: October 17, 2003 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My poor Vegeta! I am sobbing here! Another great chapter. I don't know how you do it!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: September 30, 2003 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story. I can't believe I found this story only a couple of days ago. Great story line and on top of that, it is really well written. Please update soon =)
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