| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver werewolf On: March 11, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, and keeps getting better and better. You are such a good writer you could make any plot development work, but I guess I'd like to see Ryou go to Yami and Yugi's while his dad freaks out when he can't find him at Seto's. Would serve him right! And the evil-friendship-speech thingie can come along to add comic relief (and bring the ring). |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:52 CST
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! You are my new favorite person! Anzu hugged the bear!!!! YAY! Ahem, I think that Ryou should go home-hoping so that Steven cant get to him, and Cinetti gets arrested for molestation and solicitation of a whore. Oh yea! And bimbo-bitch should give the sparkly to someone, and then it finds its way back.... more fun that way. |
Reviewed By: GOC On: March 11, 2003 18:29 CST
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yay! i found you! i was so upset when i couldn't find the story the other day...anywho, i think that ryou should stay with seto, it's a lot safer there, and would make more sense than his going to yugi's. in my opinion at least. i like the idea of a mob that includes anzu, then bakura can come our and kick some butt *^_^* fights are like friendship! or something...... |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think he should stay with Seto...as for the ring...up to you.
BTW, your flow's back on track. YIPPEE!! Bakurasgirl got her mojo back!! |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 15:48 CST
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NOOO!!! DON'T LET ANZU HURT THE POOR FOXIES!!! Yeah, that's another one of my stupid obsessions...foxes...Uh...last time I checked, my name was suzaku priestess, but that's okay. That was a good chapter! That is seriously what Steven needed to hear, but this is scary! The police are after Malik AND Kaiba! Please don't throw Malik in jail! I love Malik! And Marik! Protect Kaiba! It's Ryou's only chance! Please let this end happy! Bakura! Come back! WAAAH!!! Okay, I know I am annoying with my little obsessions...*hugs Ryou back* this ish fun! YEAH!FRIENDSHIP! |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 11, 2003 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE POOR INNOCENT SQUIRRELS, CHIPMUNKS, MICE, BLUE JAYS *names all the woodland animals in the area* how could you be so mean to them?
Caro: when it comes to people you don't care. when it comes to animals you go, "NO! THE POOR DEFENSELESS blahblahblah"
Liz: shut up! it's kinda true though. |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 11, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!! Caro wouldn't send me this yesterday, so i was deprived. sry i couldn't review you before. like i said, it was ALL CARO'S FAULT! ok, we're at Caro's house today. She said that she might go see you during April vacation. i wanna go! i barely ever go anywhere around here. with the exception of a few ski trips, but that's to the north, so we won't count that. anyway, i still don't get how Mrs. Cinetti could have shot lightening at them. 'cause if it was his mom, how could Mrs. Cinetti all of a sudden come? not only that, but isn't Rhea dead? how could Ryou have felt a tear? |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KIDNAPPED?!?!?! What a lier!! And I do pity those poor poor creatures..... |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 14:21 CST
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More More More!!! Anzu, in the forest, hugging a Grizzly bear!!! Ha! I would KILL to see that! Oooh, and maybe get bitten by a rabid Racoon! Tee hee! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 13:56 CST
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Whoever that bitch of a reporter is needs to get the Emu that is shoved up their ass out and get off their frickin' high horse! I love this story, and nothing in here goes outside any "rules". It has been posted under warnings, so there isnt a damn thing they can do to you, so nuah! |
Reviewed By: digi On: March 11, 2003 09:32 CST
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o.o I normally like the lemons.but I didn't this time. I sympthize(sp I know) with Mr. Bakura.*hangs head* Oh dear.Seto Kaiba-Hey, think I'm invited to Ryou's b-day?I don't think their having a party.*sighs* Poor Ryou-cha.Seto Kaiba-*nod* Next chappie! We need mayhem and shtuff!
(review from ffnet) |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddesschico On: March 11, 2003 09:31 CST
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0.0 Poor, poor Bakura and Ryou. Good chappie. (review fromffnet) |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hrmp...doesn't Seto have the cops in his pocket? You'd think he would...what is Steven thinking of, trying to go up against Seto? GO SETO!!
Can someone just PLEASE send these two jerks to the Shadow Realm? |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 06:56 CST
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Go Marik! Beat the bastard down! Oh, sorry, I just got caught up in the moment! Yay Marik! Ok, I am done now.
Another great chapter. I am glad you update so frequently. I couldn't bear having to wait too long for each chapter. I never want this story to end. But I guess, like all good things, it will have to eventually. Could you just put it off for a while?
I am gald to here that Bakura will be back soon. I miss him. >_ |
Reviewed By: Digi On: March 11, 2003 06:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigato. ^^ And of course I followed! This is your best story yet. ^^ Oh, and Seto came back today.
Seto Kaiba-*two fingered wave*
Yes, indeed. Next chappie please! Can't wait to see what happens when they get to KaibaCorp! Mwuaahahaha. |
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