| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Diamond On: March 17, 2003 20:39 CST
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Great chapter, keep going. |
Reviewed By: nikkei On: March 17, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nikkei: *emotionless* kill him. kill steven. he hurt bakura, malik, marik, and ryou. he has to die. painfully *grim smile* bastard
'colett: O.O sheesh... I never saw 'er this mad before... UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Raven On: March 17, 2003 20:12 CST
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Me again, i posted my other review and then saw that there was another chappie, any way, Cinetti so deserved that and the sequel sound coolio man :) espcailly the flashing part and the faintinh Yami |
Reviewed By: Dark Raven On: March 17, 2003 19:21 CST
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i was away, so thats why i haven't reviewed for the last little bit.
I LOVED THAT LEMON CHAPTER! i mean i loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.I mean i like Bakura and Ryou but i looooove Marik
also cinetti has to die, there is no way he can live now.... same with steven, that man is seriously messed in the head, i mean hiring a man to kill your wife so your son won't be gay and saying that you still love them, i mean messed! |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 17, 2003 18:04 CST
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YEAH! CINETTI DIED AND WENT TO THE SHADOW REALM! I LOVE YOU BAKURASGIRL!!! As for a sequel, I'd like to see Ryou as a girl! My friend, Yami Kitsune, did one like that. I thought it was funny! But, I hope the kid turned out good. It'd be sad for Ryou's kid to end up being evil. I'd send you my pic, but my scanner broke! So unfair! Rhea kicks butt too! Well, that's all I have to say, except for: Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I LOVE THE IDEA FOR YOUR SEQUEL!! But Ryou is gonna turn back into a boy right? And there's gonna be Anzu bashing in it right? |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 16:37 CST
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Okay, interesting^^. Millennium Rod jokes rule!^^. That sounds so hilarious, get it up, please! And I still wanna see Cinetti tortured by The Reaper of the Cards, or Steven, or somebody! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 17, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I hate to say it. But I'm glad Cinetti tried to kill Ryou, otherwise he would have been poisoned and surely died.
Tigerlily: I feel kinda dirty having to be grateful to that SOB. But watching him die was gratifying. ^___^ Yeah Torture!!
The sequel should be interesting. Anubis returns with Cinetti, huh? Will Anzu be recruited again? Poor Ryou. *sigh* To give birth to that assface and to have him try and kill you. *snicker* If Ryou's gonna be a girl, can Cinetti be one too? Would he still try to be a "real man"? I like the idea of them living with Malik and Marik (more chances for lemony goodness ^_^). I imagine at this point there would be too many painful memories in that house for him. Knowing what his father did to his mother & the abuse he's suffered... I wouldn't want to be there. Is Ryou gonna find out that our little father of the year was going to poison him? I want Steven to go to the Shadow Realm more than ever... |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: March 17, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely love your sequel idea! It's really twisted and evil like me! hee hee! Just...Cinetti isn't really going to kill Ryou and Bakura right? They're too cool and kawaii to die! (unless they come back of course, which just always seems to happen in these Yugioh stories now that I think about it) anyway, keep up your creativity! You are on a role! |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yami's Princess On: March 17, 2003 13:11 CST
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OMR!!!! Steven was going to kill his own sonn with poison!! What kind of sick bastard is he?? He should be killed for what he has done to poor Ryou *hugs Ryou* Steven should either be sent to the Shadow Realm or be killed of totally! Heh, sorry. I just really hate that bastard... |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this chapter!
like i said before write this story, then worry later about another.
I prefrably like this story the way it is going.
:)GRALNAK
ch.7 of undying light is coming up soon on mm.org |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 09:33 CST
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He was poisoning Ryou?!?!?! I didn't see that coming!! |
Reviewed By: Digi On: March 17, 2003 06:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a GREAT chappie!! Drama! Action! XD
It so remined me of the Lion King near the end.
'Well, here's MY little secret...I...killed...Mufasa....' That was my favorite chappie! *hugs Ryou* ._. Not because your about to be killed or anything....*blink* |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yamis Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 21:38 CST
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OMR!!! Cinetti is such a bastard!! Not only was he planning on killing Ryou, he admitted he killed Ryou's mother! What kind of sick bastard is that guy? Noone in his right mind would do this! He should be sent to the Shadow Realm where all three of Seto's BEWDs can take care of him once and for all. That would be a great way to kill him off! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 16, 2003 03:24 CST
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I love the Kid idea, Though the kid would have to be weird lol look at his parents. Foursome with Marik and Malik, one of his dads is over 5 thousand years old, and his other dad has a nut case for a father!
I loved the Chapter and I am looking foreward for another Bakura/Ryou Lemon :P |
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