| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 18:47 CST
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WOOHOO! ROCK ON CUTIEGIRL!!
I can't WAIT until tomorrow!! I'm SO looking forward to the sequel!! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 27, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I almost expected Darth Vader to step out and ask him to join the dark side! *pouts* I wish Cinetti had gotten just a little maimed.
Tigerlily: I can't wait till tomorrow! I'm so excited! I hope we can find it okay. This is the only thing we've read on mediaminer. And we only found it because of the link in your bio on ff.net.
Oh well, we'll blow up that bridge when we come to it. *squeals* Malik's gonna be a daddy! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 26, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!YAOIEY GOODNESS!
Karona:O.OTwo fathers!NO WAY!
Yes!Muahahahahahahahahahahahahaha(I actually laugh like)
Karona:Where's Bakura?
Batuwa fainted during the foursome.I told him that this is when Ryou got pregnent.*laughs*
Karona:O_o You're weird.
So?I think I know who the second dad is.Its Malik!Cause in the dream with Ryou's mom Aria ran to him!And Marik was protecting her!So-So there!Yeah!
Karona:Tell what happen to you!Its so funny!
Fine!In school I got bit by a hamster.Yes a HAMSTER!IN FIRST PERIOD TOO!Then I went to the nurse,went back,went to my next class,stayed there for like nine minutes,then left to the doctor with my dad.
Karona:Her mom came later.She started laughing at what happen.
Shut up!Anywah,write more,pray no war,and take care.Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 18:53 CST
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X_X Whoh. You did it. You have officialy become my favorite person of the millenium! Foursome! Oh Yeah!!! |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 26, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles uncontrollably* i used to have a fish like Yami but it died. i used to also have two other fish called "kisser (or kissing) fish". they litterally kiss the walls of the tank and if you have more than 1 in the same tank, they kiss each other. isn't that sweet? |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 26, 2003 16:55 CST
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Angel: hehehe. I did get a little fire crazy last time.........................
Shadow: *looks at his precious rat tail* a LITTLE!
Angel: Shadow prizes his tail over everything else.
Shadow: My precious............we will have revenge and my precious will grow back.
Angel: Ö_ô Ok it's scary when he's up to something.........
Shadow: Revenge............
Angel: Once again, though most people know this, he is EVIL and not in anyway a normal cat. HE CHASES THE DOG FOR RA'S SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shadow: Josie pissed me off! It was nothing personal.
Angel: Oh yeah sure, just like the daily "Attack Angel's head".
Shadow: No.......that's personal.
Angel: Arrgh.......stupid goddamn cat.
Shadow: You can't get me! Nah nah nah na boo boo!
Angel: That's really mature!
Shadow: More maturer than you!
Angel: *lights match*
Shadow: 0_0 *runs*
Angel: Hehehe. Fire conquers all. Write More. |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 26, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH KAMI!!!!!!!!! I AM SOOOOOOO SORRY! my computer messed it up since my dad had to rebuild the new one and do weird stuff on this one, so now i'm 10 chapters behind! ugh! not good. but you know me, i'll catch up in a few days. all i have to do is not do my homework. jkjk. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Sexyness.... |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 11:30 CST
Comment/Review:
mmmmmmm......
it was a little hard understanding who's doing who, but it was all in all, a good chapter
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 26, 2003 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*takes a sip of lemonade and pops a cookie in her mouth* That was gooood. Mmmmm Lemony. ^______^
Tigerlily: *handa over a glass of lemonade and a plate of cookies* Yup, it sure was. We read Koibito Yami too and this foursome was just as fun. Although Yami & Yuugi's behavior was funnier, but I like them that way. I think this one was more passionate and loving than Koibito. Nice job! ^_^
Let's see...who's the daddy? Well, if Gralnak's suggestion is written in stone, then I'm gonna say Malik is the daddy. Ryou carrying Malik's child might leave Marik feeling a little left out. They would share a bound that Marik can't. Solution to make it better, have Marik's baby too. ^__^ I think Malik would make a good daddy. Better than the one he had. I can't imagine him carving hieroglyphs in his child's back as was done to him. I see him being very loving and nurturing. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 09:51 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: Wow. that was, wow
Karen: I think she is trying to say that that was very well written
LD: How the hell do you make a sex scene CUTE?! You are one talented writer!
Karen: I thought it was sweet
LD: Yeah, a nice break from all of the drama. By the way, where has Anzu gotten to?
Karen: I can't believe you asked that. I should get Yami to banish you to the shadow realm.
LD: What, I was just curious
Karen -_-; |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 25, 2003 21:34 CST
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So cool Ryou is going to have a kid by Malik and Marik right? The kid with the silver and blond streaks one of the parents has to be either Ryou or Bakura and the other has to be Malik or Marik. Of course no matter who made the kid they are still a family since they all love each other!
I LOVE this story :P |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...Interesting dream.....Lol, I've never read a foursome before. I have read a threesome but never a foursome. It'll be interesting. |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 25, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why are there two babies?Did they have twins?
Bakura:Bows?!
What?Oh yeah.KAWAII!!BATUWA A GIRL!
Bakura:Shut up.
I don't wanna.Blonde strands?Looks like two daddies Bakura.
Bakura:O.O TWO?!*faints*
Great!Who do I talk with now?!
Karona:Me?
YAY!*glomps*Karo-chan.Are you ready for the foursome?
Karona:Yes.I can't wait!^____^
*hugs*YAY!Yaoiey goodness!
Karona:Is that a word?
It is now!Where were you?
Karona:I was guarding your concience.
Did he escape?
Karona:No.The chibis are watching him.
Good.^____^
Karona:*looks at Bakura*What happen to him?
Read up.
Karona:*reads*Oh.
Write more,pray no war,and take care.Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 25, 2003 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this it was fun. Ryou laughing was very nice. ^_^ One question I have to ask though. Blonde hair with strands of white?
Tigerlily: Sounds like Bakura isn't going to be the only daddy. ^__^
So who's the daddy? And how long will Ryou remain a girl? Their little girl sounds adorable. I can't wait for the sequel. ^_^
Tigerlily: In the meantime, I'm gonna go make a batch of lemonade and chocolate chip cookies for the next chapter. ^__^
Yay! Lemonade! Yay Foursome!
Anzu: Yeah Friendship! *boulder drops on her head*
Tigerlily: Yeah Torture! |
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