| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryuuka-chan On: March 22, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I know I just wrote, I don't really give one way or the other) You absolutely MUST DO MalikXMarickXBakuraXRyou! I adored how you made the threesome, I didn't know before you were going to do it but you pull it off sooooo well, I can't wait to see how you do this! You have pure gift!
(I saw today's episode in japanese, I feel special ^_^ dammit MALIK'S VOICE IS SOOOO HOT IN ENGLISH THEY RUIN IT! CURSE YOU ENGLISH EDITORS!! CURSE YOU!! |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: March 22, 2003 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! I love what you've been doing to this story! As I said before, you are a fanfic Yaoi goddess and I love you so much for this fic! Update soon! I've been checking this fic every four hours. I have no life. Sap is holy! Ja! |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 22, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! i could finaly read more of your story, my mom tried to get me off the internet...again! it's soooooooooooo good, i still love your story, it's awsome. i really want leman with marik and malik in then next chappie, please?! did you see the new episode today? MARIK AND BAKURA FINALY MET EACH OTHER! and they look so good together ^.^
Bye! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!
I LOVED THAT LITTLE MALIKxRYOU!!!!
I can't wait for more of them.
regarding the poll, I don't realy care they both sound great!!
:)GRALNAK
ch.7 of Undying light is up on mm.org!!!
check it out, and review!
I also like to here what you think bakurasgirl |
Reviewed By: Berrieberrie On: March 22, 2003 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fic I have ever read. I got surprised when ya moved it. (I flipped) But Now I found it. You have a nice story goin here.
Long atory short: this story is getiing better by the chapter |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 07:34 CST
Comment/Review:
aaawww....Bakura's SOOO cute....
I'm so glad Ryou's going home... |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 21, 2003 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bakura:Tory isn't here right,which means that I,Bakura,the greatest thief of all time,am doing this review.
Chibi Bakura:But where Towy go?
Bakura:She went to send that bastard to the Shadow Realm.
Chibi Bakura:Otay!^______^
Bakura:Now to the story.*ahem*THAT BASTARD!HELL'S TO GOOD FOR HIM!I'M GLAD SHE MARKED HIM!Anubis will have tons of fun torturing him!Amut shall devourer his heart!
Chibi Ryou:Yeah!
Bakura:HOW DARE HE DO THAT TO HIS OWN FLESH AND BLOOD!!
Chibi Bakura:Yeah!How?!
Bakura:Thats enough ranting.I might start cussing in front of the chibis.*chuckles*Last time I did that they cussed for a week.I sure got my ass kicked for that.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~(A little poem for your day)~*~*~*~*~
Always searching,
Never stopping.
Never finding,
Always waiting.
I search for the things
life took from me:
Myself,my home,my love...
-Tory aka A.M.T |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was a good chapter! Will there ever be a happy mood ever again in this fic? I mean, really! It's so depressing-but hey, that's good! I love sad fics! But like I said, if this ever gets happy again, throw in some rod jokes, because rod jokes are the best! |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 21, 2003 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU!!! WHAT RHEA DID TO STEVEN WAS WORSE THAN ANYTHING ELSE!!! YAY!!!!! That was an AWSOME chappie! I LOVED it!!! Hurray for Rhea!!! Keep up the good work, too! I've said that everytime, huh? Oh well, you always do good work anway ^-^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder who WILL take him home??? I'll find out soon. I love how you post chapters everyday! It's so kool! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 21, 2003 13:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Go Rhea Go Rhea :P Thank you for writing about such a strong women that kicks Stevens worthless butt!
I am happy you liked my idea, you got to admit all 4 of the make a very cute couple, and they are so super cute when they are all together!
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 21, 2003 13:13 CST
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Yay!! Go Rhea! I love the way she smacked Steven around. It was soooo gratifying. And Aria is soooo cute! I loved the way she called Steven a "very bad man!" ^_^
Tigerlily: I think Aria is gonna have a blood fetish like her daddy.
When Bakura said, "That's daddy's little girl!" I grinned from ear to ear. This chapter made me feel so happy. Especially when they cops arrested Steven. I can't wait until tonight. ^___^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUZZAH!!
I GOT THE NAME RIGHT!!!!
Can't wait for next chapter!
can one of Ryou's friends take care of him?
can't Bakura do that?
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: silver werewolf On: March 21, 2003 09:03 CST
Comment/Review:
As usual, you've outdone yourself! Another great chapter (or another great several chapters). I've been goin crazy the past few days because my computer wouldn't let me access your story. It did, however, show that there were updates. Infuriating! Anyways, the problems started with chapter 38 but I'm caught up now, and the story gets more and more interesting each chapter. You are just one of those authors who never looses her plotline! I'd love to read a sequel, and the idea sounds good. I understand why Ryou would want to keep the kid, but I really hope he gets rid of it before Cinetti's spirit takes control. Anyways, keep writing and keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHH!!!
Is Aria the name of their child?
sorry 'bout the delay of this review.
This was great, this chapter could go great with some music.
:)GRALNAK |
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