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| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] | | Pages (24): [ « < 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 > » ] | Reviewed By: Liz On: March 14, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said, i'm brain dead today, but i'm really happy that Bakura's back. it was funny how Anzu didn't get anything Yami and Yugi were saying until they said, "Yeah friendship?" | Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 14, 2003 16:24 CST
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My vote send him to the Shadow Realm where a nice monster meets him and kills him nice and slow :P
Still voting for the same thing for Ryou's dad :)
Keep up the good work in the story I love all your writing! You should become a professional writing, what I mean is you should try to become published! | Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 15, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smirk* Poor Malik, it must be hard slipping on ice so often.
Tigerlily: Mmmmmm. Lemony goodness. ^_^
I think I like the idea of them adopting, more than having one of their own. Although the way Malik & Marik go at, Malik would have been barefoot and pregnant a long time ago. Again, poor Malik. Destined to become a statistic for teenage pregnancy... Maybe both can happen. Malik can get pregnant, Ryou and Bakura could adopt... ANZU! Yeah, she gets turned into a baby too and they attempt to undo, "YEAH! FRIENDSHIP!"
Tigerlily: Okay, that's just plain sick! No more pixy stix for you tonight! *takes away a practically empty bag*
Awwww, but it'd be funny. *pout* Besides there's already plenty wrong with her. And if it didn't work out they could leave her at the side of the road or on the train tracks! ^___^
Tigerlily: Yeah Torture! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Liz On: March 14, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, it doesn't really matter to me whether you decide to have Ryou go to someone else's house. I feel lonely. Caro's not here to threaten. You can post my reviews here if you like. Caro still can't remember her cell number. I'm kinda brain dead right now, sorry for the bad review. | Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 16:05 CST
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-_- school was cancelled, so I'll have to dress up again... anyway, great, great, great! I still wanna see a Red eyes, but that's because I'm obsessed! I say Cinetti goes to the Shadow Realm where he meets The Reaper of the Cards!I really hate Ryou's dad. I just wish Marik would mind control him into feeding himself to sharks...*shuts up* last time I gave death wishes in a fic review, they came true, but with a bad price, so I'll shut up now... | Reviewed By: Kobura Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 14:49 CST
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I don't want Him to be in another fic but I want him int eh Shadow Realm to suffer so he doesn't get off easy.. ARGH tough choice! x_X
Meh Kill him off ^_^ Just do it in a painful way....possible give him to the yamis and give them a few sharp objects hehe. | Reviewed By: Bunnychan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 14:43 CST
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Yes, I would like to know this.....WHY CANT YAMI JUST SEND THEM TO THE SHADOW REALM?!?! OR HOW COMEE BAKU-CHAN CANT JUST CALL UP MAN EATER BUG?!?! O.O.... Heh. Sorry. I couldnt help it. I just needed to know. Oh and YES! YEEEEEEESSS!!! Send Cinneti off to the shadow realm!! Make it paaaiiinnnffuuuullll!!! He is an narrow minded bastard who desrves to suffer! XD | Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 14, 2003 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!Yeah!(A.M.T)This Story I like!
Bakura:Tell her!
Fine.Please updat-
Bakura:NOT THAT!THE OTHER THING!
Oh yeah!Could You please read my story.Its on ff.net.Called Shadow's Light.Its angst not much but will be soon!
Bakura:.....
Nothin' Anywah Update soon.Ja ne! | Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 07:38 CST
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Kill him off!! He deserves to die, and his son would make a good bad guy.
Are you going somewhere with the Ryou/Bakura/Marik/Malik thing? That'd be too cool. | Reviewed By: Digi On: March 14, 2003 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kill him! Kill thee #@$&^&@!!!!!
Ooh, I can't wait till thee next chappie! ^^ | Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 14, 2003 05:44 CST
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Awwwww. ^_^ They wuv him. That's so sweet, I wish Ryou wouldn't have gone home so soon. Especially with Cinetti running loose. I can see him trying to do something else to him. Our poor baby, Ryou. Well, as much as would love to see Cinetti get a one-way ticket(coach of course) to the Shadow Realm, I don't know if I can wait until another fic for that to happen. (I'm hoping it would be a continuation to this fic like Servant & Nanny.)
Tigerlily: She is so impatient. The other day...
*throws a shoe at her head* Anyways, Cinetti is such an evil, hateful man, who has no qualms about hurting others and the people he supposedly loves. His kind always are (I know this very well) and while is son is no where near as bad as he is yet (and he will be one day). I prefer him over his father any day. In my mind, right now he isn't much more than a thug or a bully. Sure, he'd hurt Ryou but I don't see him coming up on his own of hiring a whore to make Ryou go straight. I could be wrong however...
Tigerlily: *holding up a sign, "VOTE! CINETTI FOR SHADOW REALM 2003" ...wouldn't be the first time...
*throws the other shoe* -_- As I was saying, while Junior is nowhere near the level his dad is, having Daddy bite the big one may push him over the edge and blame everything on Ryou. Especially if Bakura or Marik do it. So my vote is undecided based on all that. However since he does seem to bring out the worst in me, eggs Steven on to make the boy go straight and hurt Ryou the way he did, I say kill him now.
Tigerlily: You sure about that? I hear the Shadow Realm is lovely this time of year. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Seraphim Goddess Alita [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 22:08 CST
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I say kill Cinetti, his son, and Jessica, they all deserve to die. Oh! Cinetti and his son should be tied down and tortured with as many forms of cruel and unusual punishment as possible (chop the body up piece by piece, starting with the tongue and eyes >=-)). As for Jessica, everyone should plan a little 'fun' for the whore GTA3 style but with a twist, and no, not that kind of fun thank god: kidnap her, tie her up so she is literally immobile, beat her with a steel bat but not enough to kill her or knock her unconcious, stick her in a battered up car trunk filled with icky bugs (scarabs ^_^), arachnids, and snakes, drive her to a car dump, and stick the car with whore into a car crusher.
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Sorry for the disturbing ideas, I just hate that whore so much...yet I possess a dangerously high bloodlust level.... *grins* | Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 13, 2003 22:04 CST
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Hey! Thank you for updating this fic like everyday..that is so cool and appericated. I wish other fanfic authors did what you do. ^_^ You Rock! I can't believe Ryou still wants to try and patch things with his dad. Oh, well...if he comes around I guess it might be alright. Maybe. SO KEEP UPDATING OFTEN I LOVE IT! ^___^ Really!
Ja ne!
~B&RAlways!~ | Reviewed By: Zoe On: March 13, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about if Cinetti gets set to the shadow realm, but then gets killed/eaten by the cute fluffy little beasties there. (OH DEAR GOD!!! Anzu's friendship must be contagious).
Anyway, Cinetti deserves whatever unpleasant fate he gets! | Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: March 13, 2003 20:59 CST
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Who could possibly like Cinetti? He's a total bastard! Kill him, kill him, kill him! Chop him up into tiny pieces and jump on them! I'd say send him to the Shadow Realm, but I don't want the poor denizens of it to be tortured by him... while you're at it, kill his son. And if you mention my peudonym again, could you please spell it correctly? It's Bast, like the Egyptian goddess. ;) Nice fic, but I agree with Malik and Marik - going back to Steven is a bad idea. | | Pages (24): [ « < 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 > » ] |
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