| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kobura Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:49 CST
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Okay that's it I'm gonna kill him!! If Bakura sends him to teh Shadwo Realm I AM GOING TO KILL HIM! *twitches*
Jestrix: o_o;; *hides with her other muses*
KILL!!! *runs off to find a spoon she can dig the guy to death with* |
Reviewed By: AniGirl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 04:54 CST
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I'm SO SORRY! I haven't gotten on in a very very long time! I'm reviewing basically up to Chapter 43 right now. Poor Ryou, who'd ever do that to him, especially his father?! ;_; |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 19:32 CST
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Yes! Cinetti must die! Die! Die! I would love to see Bakura, Malik, and Marik beat him into a bloody pulp!
For Ra, Osiris, Isis, Bastet, Anubis, Maat, and any other god out there's sake, stupid Steven is obsessed with everyone being straight! He had his own wife killed to "protect" his son?! That is so disgusting! Can he be killed too? I've got some interesting ideas involving the M. Rod...
Speaking of the rod, I loved the rod jokes in the early chapters! Do more of those! |
Reviewed By: AniGirl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 05:25 CST
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Next 3 chappies...
Cool! Steven's going to hell! Steven's going to hell! I can't say he doesn't deserve it, because Ra he deserves every second he spends down there! |
Reviewed By: Jocelyn On: March 16, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DIE STEVEN DIE!!! I found this croquet mallet, and plan to put it to good use, okay! CAUSE NO ONE HURTS MY RYOU!!! Except for maybe bakura, but only if it ends real romantic.... nevermind. Do you realize how much this reminds me of 'The Shining?' "Let me do my job..." //TONY!!// Just make sure bakura does the dirty work... ^____^
You know what would really piss steven off?
a little Aiko, for Ryou and Bakura!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 13:00 CST
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I like what ur doing with this fic but why is Ryou in love with Malik when he's married to Bakura? |
Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: March 16, 2003 20:19 CST
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Yeah, this font can be a pain, so I can understand. So, Ryou's dad hired Cinetti to kill his mother? OK, OK, I know you said you weren't going to have Steven die or accept Ryou, but can't you at least put him in a psycho ward if I'm reading chapter 41 right? Because he seems like a real nut if this is true... |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 21, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^____________________________^
Bakura:You sure seem happy.
Yup!I sent that..um..
Bakura:Bastard?
Yeah.(I can't cuss(Lent)I fired my bazooka,stabed him several times,then sent him to the Shadow Realm.
Bakura:*sarcasticly*Good for you.
I know!Yay Ryou goes home!*is sad*I have a trip tommorrow.*sniff*I might not read the chappie.;_;
Bakura:You still can come home.
Oh yeah.*is sad again*I'm gonna miss Yu-gi-oh tommorrow!;_;
Bakura:Kakarot can record it.
Oh yeah.Ideas huh?Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm*thinks*You could do a memory thingy?I don't know.Whatever you do is ok wit me.Well now I
leave.Keep writing,Keep dreaming,and never let anyone tell you different.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~(Saying of the day)~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Trust is earned,never to be misused or forgotten.For trust is priceless
-Tory aka A.M.T |
Reviewed By: Zoe On: March 16, 2003 16:17 CST
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OMG!!!
CINETTI KILLED RYOU'S MUM!!!
I REALLY DIDN'T SEE THAT ONE COMING!!!
Anyway,
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Please. |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just worry about the fall of Icarus for now.
Then think about a sequel(spelling?)
It might be cool if Bakura, and Ryou adopt a kid. The story could take place when the kid is in his teens. The kid could hate Bakura and Ryou because their gay, and try to rebel!
just an idea.
not very good is it?
:)GRALNAK
ch.6 of undying light is up, and so is a picture that is related to it. |
Reviewed By: EvanescenceIX On: March 16, 2003 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AAAAAEEEEIIIIII!!!!! I can't believe that fanfic.net kicked you off! *slices ff.net with Bakura's borrowed butcher knife* ^_^ ok, now i'm happy. That was a great story! Took me FOREVER to read. lmao. PLEASE continue soon!!!! This is one of my favorite stories, and i didn't know where it went when *glowers at ff.net* ^.^ well, anyway, it was awesome! Death to Steven and his stupid side kicks! This story, Bakura, and Seto kicks their asses goodbye!!! ^^ (had to say that)
I hope you continue this! ;_; or at least write a sequal. or SOMETHING cuz i'm gunna miss this one a lot.
~EIX |
Reviewed By: Berrieberrie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow so sad I guess. This is scarin me a little.
This was a good chapter |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 21, 2003 22:36 CST
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Yay! I'm so happy! ^_^ Potential for lemons abound! ^_^
Tigerlily: I wonder if Isis has been in the loop of the current events. I'm surprised Malik had to do some minor begging after he told her Ryou was going to have to go to a home.
If it was me I would have insisted he stay with us. But then, I get overprotective of my friends. I don't like to see anyone suffer.
Tigerlily: And yet you read all those fics where Ryou get beaten up, abused or is dancing on the edge of death in a destructive pattern...
Yes, but that's because he's so pure and the pure are often taken advantage of and mistreated. I keep hoping for the happy ending. If I didn't I'd feel like I was abandoning him and feel guilty. ~_~
Tigerlily: You are so weird... |
Reviewed By: Yui On: March 16, 2003 17:01 CST
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CINETTI! I'M GOING TO KILL HIM! HE CAN'T TOUCH RYOU! NO NO NO NONONONONONONONONONONONONO! |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 11:52 CST
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suzaku priestess:I must take this time to say that I love Isis! She rocks and is just the best^^. Heck, I liked her enough to feel she was worthy of being in a strange pairing fic with Bakura^^ it's on the third page I think if you wanna check it out...
YEAH!!! FINALLY, THE FOURSOME LEMON!!! That was awesome! Even better than I expected! Now that everyone seems nice and happy, how about some rod jokes?
Kekaku*:*smacks the suzaku priestess* STOP IT WITH THE STUPID ROD JOKES!!!
suzaku priestess: That's it, catgirl!*gets the eraser*
Kekaku:NOOOO!!!
sp: I could never do that, Kekaku no baka! you're one of my best creations!
Kekaku:*grins*
*=Kekaku is a catgirl that I drew one time, and she looks so cool, so she gets to hang out and review fics with me until I find a place for her in a fanfic or original manga of mine or something^_^ |
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