| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 06:54 CST
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Go Rhea!! WOOHOO!! Malik's too cute with that kid...awww...now I'm getting anxious for the sequel!! |
Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: March 20, 2003 22:20 CST
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Does this mean Ryou might need a heart transplant or something in the future? At least he's going to live... for now. |
Reviewed By: Kari-Chan On: March 20, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It's amazing. I've never cried during a fanfic, but now I have. You are truly a amazing writer, keep up the fantastic job. Can't wait for you to update again! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 20, 2003 21:02 CST
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*whines*But I wanna send him to the Shadow Realm!Please?PWETTY PWEASE WIT CHERRY PUDDIN'?!Gotta go! |
Reviewed By: yami star fire On: March 20, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a good storie and gets better as it goes,I think it would be cool if you let seto start to rember that he was a priest of set and maybe remember his magic I thought it would be neat but its your storie and I like it the way it is keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 20, 2003 20:00 CST
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WHOO!!! RHEA IS SO GOOD!!! SHE KICKS BUTT!!! Too bad Steven didn't die! Oh well, Cinetti's gone! *evil laugh* Good chappie! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Diamond On: March 20, 2003 19:18 CST
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This was so sad yet great, keep it up and the name of the girl must be Aria. |
Reviewed By: Melokitty On: March 20, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...that was so heart-wrenching...Do you enjoy making your readers cry!? But that just shows how well-written your story is if you can move someone like that...Need a tissue...Great job! (waves flag) Bakurasgirl, numba one bakura/ryou yaoi this girl's ever seen! |
Reviewed By: Melokitty On: March 20, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Blinks confuzzledly and looks around for a few moments)
WOW.
Only thing my tiny brain can think of now....That...was....BITCHIN! (does the "bitchin cool" dance) You should really be proud of this! I can't write fight scenes too well, but....WOW! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 20, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dances around the room like a fool with Tigerlily* Ryou's gonna be okay! ^_^ That was so sweet though, I may cry.
Tigerlily: Ryou's mommy loves him...*sniffle*
It honestly gives me a warm fuzzy feeling inside ^_^ I loved when Bakura said, "I don't think a flatline is good!" Okay, I'm gonna take a guess at the name. The only one I could see, that I've heard people use was, Aria. So that's my guess, right or wrong for today. ^_^ Can't wait till tomorrow! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 14:55 CST
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*sniffles* That was so...so..so touching. Cant wait for an update! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 20, 2003 13:15 CST
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I really really love your work! After the sequal is finished you should write a fanfiction that is the foursome of Malik/Marik/Ryou/Bakura as a full time couple! HEHE I could just image how the poor lights would handle the situation! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Ryou's ok ^_^ The ending of the chapter was cute ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: March 20, 2003 11:26 CST
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How about Bakura get injured or horribly sick and Ryou get worried and cry over him for a change? Because this seems very one-sided to me. Don't get me wrong! I love almost-die-love-gets-you-through situations! They're cute as hell and the annoy the hell out of me! (well that was weird phrasing...) but still just a thought. I know Ryou's the light but that doesn't mean he's completely useless! (he's so kawaii!) |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 07:18 CST
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WWAAAHHH! *sniffles* I actually started to cry reeading this chapie. It is so happy and sad all at the same time. Poor Ryou is going to be tramatized by his stupid father. At least he has Bakura, Malik, and Marik who love him! |
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