| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 08:25 CST
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^^ Ra that was sad...MALIKxMARIK LEMON!!!DO IT!!! YAAAAY!!!!MORE LEMONS!!! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up!
LEMON!
MALIK!
MARIK!
malikXmarik would be funny.
rod jokes.....hahaha........
I LOVE!!!
:)GRALNAK, a happy lord of chaos |
Reviewed By: Yui On: March 14, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lemon! I love Lemons! If it wouldn't be too much trouble to put it in please do. I'm a Yaoi addict through and through. *smiles* keep writing, I really enjoy all of your works. |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 14, 2003 22:00 CST
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*sniffle* Poor Ryou. ~_~ Stupid Steven. *throws a shoe at his head* Well, he'll be in for a big suprise when he finds out he hasn't really won. I think Nelson (Simpsons) said it best when he pointed & laughed with "Hah! Hah!" So wise... so profound...
Tigerlily: Only you and your brother-in-law think that. Although in the instance, it's probably true...
Malik & Marik? Yay!! I love lemons. ^_^
Tigerlily: I think we could all use a lighthearted moment right now.
When life gives you lemons, make lemonade! *mumbles* -_- just don't share them with ff.net...
Tigerlily: I love lemonade! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus On: March 14, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Can't wait to see the rest of it.
Question: Does Steven really accept Ryou's relationship with Ryou in the end, or does he and Cinetti try to get him to screw Jessica again? If so for the latter, I hope Bakura kills both Cinetti and Jessica. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 14, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! i'm sorry i haven't reviewed, my parents banned me from the internet for a day, then it didn't work, and i wasn't at liz's cause i went to laurens, but that was awsome cause we watched anime for 4 hours stairt! Anyway, i still love your stroy, and please please please do the lemon, i need some more good reading cause we're completly killing all of our other books in school. Keep writing, and A NEW YUGIOH IS ON TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bye! |
Reviewed By: hato-chiisai On: March 14, 2003 21:26 CST
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heehee..... It's meeeee!!!!! ^_^ I really love where you've gone with this. Better than what I came up with. The lemon with Bakura banging on the wall is great! ^_^ Do it! Poor Ryou..... His dad's bein a major punk about the whole thing. hope to IM you soon. You hanven't been on recently! NAyway, can't wait for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 20:57 CST
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Y'know, I rely love your lemons. I want you to put in another, and i cant WAIT for the foursome!!! YaY! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Jocelyn On: March 14, 2003 19:41 CST
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Oh my god... i'm crying! AGAIN!! WAAHHH!!! Im so glad for ryou... i cant wait for the real ending, as good as that was! Ive never cried for a fan fic as much as i have for this one, and i swear i wont rest until cinetti is dead! FOR GOOD! Jessica too. Youre really great with yaoi, especially ryou/bakura, and am really good at hurting anzu! Well, anyway, love it! You have a perfect talent, and i hope i see your name at Waldenbooks, or the library, or something someday. |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 19:01 CST
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I know something no one knows..do da...do da...hehehehe!!
You know, cutiegirl, I'm always in the mood for a good lemon! |
Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob* oh my, that's more beautiful than I expected
anyway... with Cinetti, DIE YOU WORTHLESS WASTE OF HUMAN FLESH! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! That's so said! I almost cried! Poor Ryou! |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hummm . . . maybe you should beat cinetti into sumission then send his soul to the shadow realm!!!! That would be good . . . |
Reviewed By: Phoenixaries13 On: March 14, 2003 16:54 CST
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well, kill Cinetti! I want him DEAD!!!!!!!!
Sorry for that. I just like seeing people get theirs, even in fanfics. |
Reviewed By: Liz On: March 14, 2003 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHADOW REALM!!!!!! in another fic, have both Cinettis be the villains. oo! i know! and in that one, have Mrs. Cinetti (even though she doesn't deserve to be called that) be the hero! that'd be good. and I was wondering, do you think Slyfer is cute? Oh yeah, i just thought you might wanna change the title of this fic since "The Fall of Icarus" is about the son dying, and i refuse to let you kill Ryou. Maybe "The Fall of Dedaelus" would be better, but it's up to you. I just thought it'd make more sense. |
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