| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 16:01 CST
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Yeah, lemons! ^_^'' MalikxRyou ish fun! But when are you doing the foursome? *puppy eyes* I can't believe that @$$hole Steven would take everything from Ryou, including money for a heart operation, though! What a dumb@$$... That's so sad...*goes off and kills Steven* |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 14:58 CST
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*sniffle* That was so *sobs* touching! Bravisimo! And congrats on the fiftieth chappie! Thats a LOT to write, but you have been so consistent about posting. Thanks. *Huggles bakurasgirl* |
Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww! :huggles Ryou: How sad... things will get better...
I love each update you post...Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 09:55 CST
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*sniffles* That was so sad. I started to cry when Ryou was crying about his mommy dying to protect him and his only having memories. It is so sad. WAAAHHH! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sad for Ryou.........*sobs*...........
I can't wait to see what happens though......
hope it all turns out good!!
:)GRALNAK
I will send you an email regarding your review, it should make it clearer. |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 24, 2003 06:09 CST
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Yeah Yaoi!! Yay Lemons!
Tigerlily: Lemonade anyone? *hands a glass to bakurasgirl & Chris*
Yummy! ^_^ But I gotta say, I am surprised Ryou was up for that. I'm also a little disappointed, I was looking forward to Marik/Malik. But I guess I can wait until the foursome. ^_^
Tigerlily: *takes a sip o' lemonade* I always knew Bakura snores. *laughs*
Bakura: I do not! It's...it's...Malik! Yeah it's Malik!
Malik: *throws a shoe at his head* I do not!
Sure ya don't... ¬_¬ I look forward to the next the one! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 24, 2003 02:07 CST
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I love this new chapter :P I cant wait till we get the foursome it will be interesting to see the two Yami's fighing over who gets to top Ryou first! After all Bakura has already been the seme to Malik hehe I think Marik might want to be the seme to Ryou :P
Keep up the good work, you are my favorite author in this fandom! I am eager to read the next part :P |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 24, 2003 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!LEMON!
Bakura:....
Nothin' to say Batuwa?
Bakura:Nope.
Ahywah,Malik&Ryou great pair one of my favorites.*yawn*Its two in the morning and I have school.*sigh*I hate school.It should burn down.Anywah,write more,pray no war,and ummm.....still can't think of the last part. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 23, 2003 21:41 CST
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Yay finally a bad cliffie well actually its a good cliffie cause its not a good cliffie cause if its a good cliffie then taht means i have to wait making it a bad cliffie which is actually a good cliffie in author terms but a bad cliffie and my terms and is anyone else as confused as me? |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 19:04 CST
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*drools* I think that just about sums it up.... *drools more* |
Reviewed By: GOC On: March 23, 2003 19:00 CST
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MY COMPUTER WAS BROKEN FOR A WHOLE WEEK!!!!!!! It was awful ;_; anywho, i'm all caught up now! That was a fun twist, wasn't expecting that.... |
Reviewed By: Berrieberrie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kawaii in a a way. This was frightfully beautiful. Please continue |
Reviewed By: Berrieberrie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kawaii in a a way. This was frightfully beautiful. Please continue |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff On: March 23, 2003 15:09 CST
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I couldn't see chapter 48 and I'm skipping 49 because of the lemon, so in the next review responce will you summerize what happens in 48? Thanks. Haha! I'm so glad Steven is finally going to jail! Glad Ryou's gonna be ok. Keep up the good work. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Raven On: March 23, 2003 14:48 CST
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hehe, i loved the stuff about the scumb sucker, espcailly the "How would you know if he sucks Bakura?" line, twas funny. |
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