| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 18, 2003 18:41 CST
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Thank your for the promise of happy endings :P But your so mean to keep leaving these cliff hangers! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:22 CST
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OMG!!! Let me at him!! That SOB!!! I'm just...just..holy crap!! Don't be long posting the next chapter!! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh this is getting deep, POOR RYOU! :Huggles Ryou while glaring at the murderous SOB: Anyway.. keep up the goog work |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 18:59 CST
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Oh Holy Isis!! If Bakura and Marik don't kill that bastard, I will!! I'm trading in the snowplow in for a bloody tank!! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how about when Ryou gets better, just him and Malik. I'd rather it be just between two of them, and maybe Bakura and Marik sperately?
I just not sure about all four of them....
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 21, 2003 20:59 CST
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Suggestion? Steven has another Rhea-kicks-butt dream! YEAH! Actually, whatever you do is fine with me ^-^ Both Steven and Cinetti got what was coming to them! YEAH FRIENDSHIP! Ack! Where did that come from?! I have no clue... Meh, doesn't matter. Keep going! It's really good! *points* See? I used something other than 'keep up the good work.' I'm so proud of myself!!! |
Reviewed By: Melokitty On: March 16, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Bows down) Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while! I've been busy, with my family breathing down my neck and I got my first job (yeah, I'm gonna be a counselor at camp this summer! *happy dance*)
Anyway, your lemons are really improving as you go along, great job with the threesome! I can't figure them out yet....
Once again, your story KICKS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! have fun with a possible sequel! |
Reviewed By: sarah the yaoi fairy On: March 16, 2003 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guess what? You're being mean, all those cliffy's! That's okay, though, cause this story rules. I've been reading it a ff.net, but moved to reading it over here... don't know why, though. lol I really hope you totally kill Cinetti and Steven off. Neither of them deserve to live. How can someone have his own wife killed?!?! Take them both out and let Ryou and Bakura be happy!!!!! I want to know how you're gonna handle the situation you created with Malik, Marik, Bakura, and Ryou!!!! Heck... just have them all get together and kick the crap out of Cinetti and Steven... and let them all love each other! The more the merrier! lol Well, whatever you decide to do, don't worry, I'll be back for more!!!!!!!! ^_^
Sarah |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 16, 2003 15:01 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOO You cant leave it like that not at such a cliffhanger!!!!!! Please have the next chapter out soon!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! What a bastard!!!! DIE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 07:22 CST
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Poor Ryou...*sniff*
Go Bakura go! WOOHOO! Great chapter cutiegirl!! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK On: March 11, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
number 2!!!
ANZU will save them!!!yah!!!!
*shudder*
or maybe number 1. Seto has guards right?
Im scared.
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: Dwarf On: March 16, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U ended it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.............must have another chapter.........i hate hate hate cliffs.....I love the Pregnant Hikari idea.......
Love it love it love it! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK On: March 11, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
number 2!!!
ANZU will save them!!!yah!!!!
*shudder*
or maybe number 1. Seto has guards right?
Im scared.
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: March 16, 2003 10:09 CST
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it's long time i don't rewiew ^^
poor ryou. he don't have lucky to have a father as this bastard. I hape mister bakura and his friend will dead with a lot of pain.
I like this idea where the hikari turn into girl *____*
'cause I will enjoy the yami's pain with the hikari's pregnant mood |
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