| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kye On: March 16, 2003 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really like your story it's very interesting. I liked all the lemons in it too, can't wait to see how that foursome turns out.^_^ I also liked your other stories too.
Oh and about the kid question I've got an idea, what if instead of the hikaris'being turnd into girls and getting pregnant(though I do like that idea) their millennium items magicly create one(or two) for them. Like because of their love for their others and the desire to have children causes the items to gather and combine the energies of both hikari and yami createing kids for them. That way they have one of their own rather than adopting. 'Cause I saw some people were botherd by the hikaris' turning into girls and I like that better than adoption.
Well anyway I really enjoy your story and look forward to more.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aino Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! Sry, i was having a hard time getting onthis site, so i couldntread & review sooner. Anyway, ur doing a great job on this fic!
~Aino~ |
Reviewed By: EscaChick On: March 15, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY BAKURASGIRL! This is EscaChick, from ff.net, here to tell you that I am very happy indeedy to see this story up and running again! I'm so glad that you are now able to update this story! KEEP ON WRITING!
Always remember the three S's when writing fanfiction! SADISTIC, SATANIC, and SMUT! =P
BY THE WAY, CAN I HELP SETO AND BAKURA KILL STEVEN? I'D LOVE TO GET MY PERFECTIONED HANDS (Dilly - AHEM!) AND DILANDAU'S TOO... ON THAT HEARTLESS SON OF A B****! o.o* DIEEEE! Ooopsie, sorry got carried away...
But can I atleast banish the damn FS to the Shadow Ralm? Huh Huh? OWWW! LEMME GO DILLY!
Dilly - You've been reading to much fiction! Time for you to go to bed!
EscaChick - NOOO LEMME GO! I WAS GETTING TO THE BEST PART! LEMME GO YOU PYRO!
Luv ya!
EscaChick
p.s. Dilly and his Slayers say hi! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 15, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
threesome is yummy ^_^ LOL! Good chappie! OFCOURSE I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!! You'd be crazy NOT to make one! Maybe Ryou can turn into a girl, and his dad would STILL be mad bc he wants him to be a man. Ryou get's pregnent, had the babay and than turns back to normal, than his father would be happy? Just a suggrestion ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! Poor Ryou is lonely! |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVEN'T WON STEVEN! |
Reviewed By: Digi On: March 15, 2003 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Can't wait till the threesome!!!
Seto Kaiba-.....
^^ Mer. Can't wait till thee next chappie. |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 15, 2003 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ya know, the more I "hear" Steven speak, the more I realize he needs major parenting classes and therapy. I'm a little surprised Ryou didn't run out the door when his father admitted knowing about round 2 with Jessica. Especially given his lack of remorse and unapologetic attitude. I wonder if he has an obsessive compulsive disorder? *growls* He makes me so mad! -_-
Tigerlily: Okay. Calm down. Step away from the edge and think happy thoughts...
Such as? _
Tigerlily: Lemons. In the next chapter. Today, no less!
Oooohhhh! I like that happy thought! I can't wait... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait!!
3 person lemon.........dream come true......mmmm........lemon..........
:)GRALNAK
ch.6 and 7 of Undying light coming soon. |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Threesomes rule! Yeah, Friendship!!! Okay...maybe I shouldn't drink coffee so much... Good chapter. Ryou's dad is an ass and I have TONS of death ideas for him. There's the sharks, the Red Eyes Black Dragon, there's ne I thought of involving having cement blocks tied to his feet, being dropped in a lake with a fish bowl on his head with four phiranha... |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 15, 2003 13:00 CST
Comment/Review:
When Ryou finds out about the threesom hes not going to freak is he? I hope not, I love him and Bakura together and I dont want the to seperate anymore then they already are! |
Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Going.. this story is great! OH MY...A threesome... ohhh inticing |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 12:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Steven...that ASS! Screw the frying pan! *grabs a set of keys* Honey? I'm taking the snowplow out for a spin!! |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: March 15, 2003 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! I love you so much for this fic! It is THE kick ass fic! I really want that lemon with Malik and Marik, and if possible more sappy stuff with Yugi and Yami (possibly a lemon, I love the pairing!) The foursome sounds like a kick ass idea! As long as it doesn't mess stuff up with Bakura and Ryou. The two are so KAWAII!! |
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