| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 06:43 CST
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That was a GREAT chapter!!! Ryou's mom is so great...too bad you can't bring her back or something. |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 22:01 CST
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lkdfj(Huh?):AAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Blah: *Twitches* we missed so much . . .
kdljf(HuH?): *Dies*
Stupid kid 04: *Eyes water*
Blah: IT ain't right dude . . . It ain't right . . .
Great chapters . . . . . . hopefully we won't miss much more! |
Reviewed By: dragoneyes On: March 19, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Yeah!! Yami used the mind crush! I hope something bad happens to steven. I mean having your wife killed because she babied your son when he was a toddler is screwed up. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 19, 2003 21:19 CST
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Thankies for the tip! It worked! Yay! Now, for my rant: WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH STEVEN!?! My heart breaks everytime he comes into the story! I was SO happy when Cinetti died, but now... STEVEN NEEDS TO DIE TOO! RHEA SHOULD KILL HIM!! SHOW HIM THE PAIN HE GAVE HER AND RYOU!!! Ok, I'm done. I just have to get those rants out of my system. Two great chappies, and I know there'll be more great chappies coming up ^-^ You'll hear from me again next review, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!
I have one question, though, why did Marik not use his mind control?
It would have helped!
I loved this anyway!
can't wait for next chapter.
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 19, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* poor ryou!!!! steven is such an idiot!!!!!! i can't wait to read more! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! i can't wait for the sequal ether! Malik and Ryou are so cute together, and i finaly but yaio pics on my school binder, wonder how long it will take for people to notice? ^.^ i hope i don't get in trouble for supporting it. -.-
Bye! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! The 'Medicine' is begining to work! I wonder what'll happen next chappie...I know Ryou will not die though |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 19, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANNA KILL HIM!PLEEAAASSSEEE?!LET ME KILL HIM!?
Bakura:But I wanna kill him too!
Well,I wanna more!
Bakura:I do!
I do!
Bakura:I DO!
I DOOOOO!
Ryou:This could take awile.*crashes are heard*^___^()Could never control them.
Chibi Inu-yasha:Towy weally wants to till dat Steben guy.
With my BAZOOKA!*holds up black bazooka with red dragon on it*'
Bakura:Sugoi(cool)Where'd you get that?
^______^INTERNET!
Bakura:-_- Figures.
Ryou:Keep writing and please-
Bakura and me:FOR THE LOVE OF RYOU DON'T KILL HIM!!
Vegeta:That Steven guy better die!*smirks*A nice slow and painful death. |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 18:26 CST
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*giggling madly* Yami faints? LOL! *cracks up* O_O *shudders at the thought* That sounds horrible! Ya, the baby thing is cool, but I don't like the Cinetti thing. Uh! It's a good sequel idea. |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 17:39 CST
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*grin* I loved seeing Steven get hurt so much...but what seems weird is Malik seems way too much like an average hikari-sweet and innocent. I always saw Malik as a stronger, eviler character, and he should be able to fight as well...Oh, and one thing that's bugging me is this-you refer to Marik as a character from ancient Egypt, when actually, Marik wasn't in ancient Egypt. He was born from Malik's anger and fear.*grin* Cinetti's gonna bwe a girl? THIS WILL BE SO FUNNY!!! How's he gonna be a "real man" now? Be a lesbian?*goes and dies laughing* |
Reviewed By: Dark Raven On: March 19, 2003 17:32 CST
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today, me and beholder were trying to come up with thing to do to steven some of them were
throw random sharp pointy objects at him
beat him with a baseball bat
beat him with a hockey stick
throw curling rocks at his head
sick a rabied beaver on him (... Im Canadian)
lock him a room with Anzu
and thats just a few |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff On: March 19, 2003 17:31 CST
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Steven has to GO! He's so evil... grrrrrr... good job. Oh, and thanks for linking my website! I'll have to visit your page. |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:59 CST
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Go Seto! Go Bakura! Go Marik! WOOHOO! Kick some butt boys!! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 19, 2003 16:49 CST
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I loved reading from Marik's POV. I can't say why exactly. Maybe because of the sympathy he feels for Bakura... With Steven yelling "If I can't have you, no one can." it reminded me so much more of a jealous lover than a father.
Tigerlily: -_-" Eeeewwww. And when he said calmly that his work here was done and smiled at Bakura from the ambulance, I so wanted to rip his face off.
Yeah, but at least Bakura sliced his forehead and stabbed him in the shoulder. I got a big grin on my face and all be jumped up and cheered. Yami mind crushing Mike was fun too. ^__^
Tigerlily: Yeah Torture!! ^_^
*whimpers* Poor Ryou... I don't wanna wait till tomorrow to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:40 CST
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Hey, not to shabby. I especialy like the poison twist. Veeery interestinc. MORE ^.~ |
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