| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 20:02 CST
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oooooooooh..........lemon....mmmm........can't wait..................
love to see some more Ryou x Malik action....
I have an idea, though.....
here it goes....
What if Marik got jelous(spelling?) of Malik and Ryou, and something bad happens......
I mean Marik is the manifestation(sp?) of Malik's anger, and vengence. it would make sense if he got jelous of Ryou......
maybe he could catch Ryou and Malik doing things, he never did with Malik and this could upset him, because he could think Malik loves Ryou more than Marik!!!!!
tell me what yah think!!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: March 25, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bakurasgirl...if you...love your reviewers...at all...YOU WILL UPDATE THAT CHAPTER AS SOON AS YOU FREAKIN WELL CAN!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! ONEGAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and Aria is SOOOO KAWAII!! I hope she's not evil... |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 18:02 CST
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LD: YAY! I am feeling the love!
Karen: Hi Bakurasgirl! I love your work!
LD: Oh yeah, my other self (Not my Yami, she is someone else entirely) has decided to put her imput into my reviews
Karen: Me the smart one ^_^
LD: Yeah, execpt when she is on a sugar high!
Karen: :-b Love this story! Love this chappie, Can't wait for the foursome! Yay frien-mmph
LD: *finishing tying gag around Karen's mouth* She was going to say lemons, yeah, that's it "Yay lemons" heh |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff On: March 25, 2003 17:51 CST
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Thanks for the summery. Wow you made it past 50 chapters ^.^ Good work! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 17:32 CST
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*carries flowers and a HUGE box of chocolates (any flavor bakurasgirl wants) to bakurasgirl.* All hail bakurasgirl, the wonderfull! Yay! Next chapter is a foursome! OH YEAH!! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 25, 2003 11:48 CST
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Poor Ryou, first he feels guilty (and so so cute doing so; Malik too!) and now he loses his childhood home. It's not fair! ~_~
Tigerlily: Yes, but you have to leave things in the hands of fate. And I think fate is about to hand us some more lemons! ^__^
Yay! Foursome! Lemons abound! Marik's reactions were priceless and sweet. From sleeping angels to "you would think these two committed murder" I loved it all! ^_^ Ano.... think Isis will ever be able to get a peaceful night sleep with four of them going at it? Wheee! Can't wait! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 25, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIS DAD'S SO MEAN!!>o |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 24, 2003 21:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Angel: *holds up matches* *giggles madly* fire!
Shadow: ALRIGHT! Who gave her the matches!
Angel: Fire, fire, fire. *lights match*
Shadow: Stupid reviewers can't take a hint when i tell them she's a pyro.
Angel: *sets Shadow's tail on fire*
Shadow: 0_0 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Angel: Fire!
Shadow: WRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yui On: March 24, 2003 20:49 CST
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OMG! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! RYOU! His home... his heart.... WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *runs off in hysterics* |
Reviewed By: Aino Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 20:45 CST
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You're really doing a great job on this fic!!
I cant wait to read more and for your sequeal!!
~Aino~ |
Reviewed By: Melokitty On: March 24, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello once more! Awesome chapter, loved how you wrote that eviction/kick-out/legal notice, sounds exactly like the ones you would hear...Anyway, hope Ryou's life gets better (moving in with the Ishtars should help, right? RIGHT!?!?!?) and good luck to you and everyone else! BTW, it's been a while since there was a tormenting of the evil friendship-murdering one, ne? (Mesa has doth decided that Anzu has totally destroyed the meaning of friendship through all her comparison BS, hence...she tis a MURDER!!!) Maybe we can have another round of tormenting the unspeakable (but yes, I spoke her name already...DAMMIT!) soon? (shrugs) I dunno, but whatever the case may be, your story KICKS ASS and...I think I'm out of things to say...So bye bye! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 24, 2003 18:09 CST
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AHH Steven is such a jerk no self respecting human would take everything away from their only child who needs to get their heart fixed grrr. Then again no decent human being would treat their children the way he treats Ryou!
Ryou would make a good seme lol its just going to be the fight on over who gets to be his seme that will be fun to watch haha! Perhaps Ryou should be seme to Marik one time and threaten to hit him upside the head with the Millinum Rod of Marik doesnt agree :P |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: March 24, 2003 17:42 CST
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Sorry I didn't review last chappie. I wasn't home. It was good though! Malik was SO hot in that chappie. Now the mean Men in Black (that's my attempt at a joke:) are taking Ryou's house away? Maybe Seto could be nice and buy it back? That'd make little Ryou so happy! That poor lil' guy has been through so much. It was good chappie, as usual. I liked it a lot. Keep up the excellent writing! |
Reviewed By: Kari-Chan On: March 24, 2003 17:36 CST
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Oh my God... that was so sad. I think I'm gonna cry again! >. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was so sad! Poor Ryou!!! |
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