| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:33 CST
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Oooooo, I am so mad at stupid Steven! He needs to be seriously harmed (dead is good by the way) Real-life be damned, he and the rest of the stupid homophobic bastards, need to get what they deserve. Happy endings for everyone else (Please!)
Thank you for updating every day! |
Reviewed By: Roni On: March 19, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!! I've been reading it since Chapter 1 first came out!!! Keep up the great work!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Steven was feeding him that!!! He is an EVIL PERSON!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 19, 2003 14:44 CST
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Good sequel idea but ive changed my mind. I might just kill you. Nah i won't can't reach but i NEED MORE! I DESPISE CLIFFIES! |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yami's Princess On: March 19, 2003 08:07 CST
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*cries* Ryou can't die!!!! He just can't!!! Poor Bakura, noone should be in the situation that he is in. Noone should be in Ryou's situation either. At least his friends are with him now though. I just hope that Ryou will get better soon. I hate knowing he is sick and could die! *cries* Steven should die a horrible horrible death for this!!! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 19, 2003 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RYOU CAN'T DIE!TH-THATS JUST WRONG!
Bakura:O.O
I wanna kill Steven!NOONE HURTS RYOU WITHOUT SUFFERING!And I know how too!
Chibi Ryou:Where's my mommy?
I don't know.
Bakura:THAT TEME!(bastard)ANUBIS SHOULD DRAG HIS SOUL THRUGH ALL FORTY GATES!AMUT WILL DEVOURER(I can't spell)HIS HEART!
I know!He would never make it past judgement from the scale!Ma'at would show no mercy for him!
Bakura:You need to stop reading that book.
Shut up.Anywah,Your story made me cry(a little)I don't cry very often.
Chibi Bakura:Is weally sad,wight.
Bakura:*stareing*When did you get one of me?!
Two weeks ago.Anywah Ryou-chibi go!
Chibi Ryou:Pwesents!Big Me gets candy,chocwate marshmawows,and dis pwushie of Batuwa.
Bakura:Tory!
Hehe
Chibi Ryou:Big Batuwa gets chocowate chewries,shampoo and dis pwushie of Big Me.
Bakura:Shampoo.
The apple kind!^________^
Bakura:-_-'
Chibi Ryou:And Batuwasgirl gets candy,bof chocowate candies,shampoo,bof pwushies,and a kiss from me.^______^
He's so cute.Anywah the reason I was gone was cause I was grounded.-_- failing math=no computer.
*sigh*Update soon!Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: March 18, 2003 23:00 CST
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Yes! Put Steven on trial! Who knows, maybe my idea could be part of the sentence... or not. Whatever you decide... however, the idea for the sequel reminds me a little too much of the deal with Gabrielle's demon daughter in Xena. I guess it could work, but it seems a bit much... not that I've been better in my fics. |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:59 CST
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sniff.......wahhhhh!!!!!!
ryou!!!!!
wahhhhh!!!!
Im scared.......:(GRALNAK): |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:48 CST
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sniff.......wahhhhh!!!!!!
ryou!!!!!
wahhhhh!!!!
Im scared.......:(GRALNAK): |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:27 CST
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Yeah, Millennium Rod jokes! maybe some more when we're in a less angsty mood? Gods, Mr. Father of the Year needs to suffer...Bakura, Malik, and Marik are all insane and evil enough to make him suffer dearly...must...hurt...Steven...*snaps out of it*
Hey! Wait a minute! Didn't you say there'd be a foursome with Bakura, Malik, Ryou, and Marik? Where is it? Why are you making us wait so long for lemons? I'm thirsty for some lemonade! Soon, too! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 18, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Cinetti's gonna be a girl! ^_^ *dances around the room like a fool*
Tigerlily: O_o
Now Bakura will have to buy cute, pink stuff! *snicker* Maybe Anzu will help him shop again... *sniffle* Poor Bakura... So much guilt, I just wanna hug him. As usual, loved the rod jokes. ^_^ And Seto telling them to get hotel rooms, was kawaii. I am curious though what was going through Yuugi's and Yami's minds. ^_^ Especially with the rods jokes going.
Tigerlily: *sing-song* Pharaoh is a hentai. Pharaoh is a hentai. Pharaoh is a hentai. *stops* I do wish Bakura could leave Steven as a skinless corpse. He so deserves it. But knowing Ryou, he probably wouldn't allow it even knowing what his "Daddy" tried to do.
Yes, he is too kind, gentle and merciful soemtimes. But that's what so endearing about him. ^_^ The truth is gonna rip poor Ryou apart when he does find out. *sniffle* Poor Ryou... |
Reviewed By: Yui On: March 18, 2003 21:00 CST
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Nooooo! All those posions.... Evilevilevilevil!!! *cries* How could a dad do that? Get him back now. |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff On: March 18, 2003 19:52 CST
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Eeeeee! I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! Sorry, sorry, sorry! I just forget to come to mediaminer. The fic is progressing well, good job keeping it up. Argh! If Ryou's dad was real I would beat him with my metal bat! Dirty old man! |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 18, 2003 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WE WON WE WON WE WON WE WON WE WON!!!!!!! yeah, the 7th grade is winning spirit week and we're they only class ever to win in 6th grade last year, so we're making school history! just had to say that, anyway... i love your story. i think the idea for the sequal is really cool ^.^ i went to an ancient egytion exipit at the museam of science and it was so cool, we got to see the rosetta stone, not the real one but i've seen that too, a mummy, go inside a real tomb, so many statues, treasres, it was AWSOME!! we saw anibus and it made me think of servent yamis!
Bye! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 17, 2003 21:10 CST
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NOOOOOOOOO not another Cliff hanger and in the sequal you are going to torment my dear Ryou and Bakura more!!!
*Turns into her dragon form and stands infront of the couple protecting them until the author promises that both stories will have happy endings* |
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