| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 01:47 EDT
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(Chapter 7) Hehhehehehheheh!! Kagome should wonder if he's got premature balding underneath that bandana. (Chapter 9) Man, what I wouldn't give to see Inuyasha go head to head with Cloud...
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Title: Yay!!!!
Reviewed By: Iwas tolazytologin,butit'sme,Tammy On: August 08, 2004 05:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pimp, as usual! I am going to have to say it, as far as fanfic one-liners go....."Now, the dental retractors." is taking the cake. This story is just. too. MuCh. Just Tasty. Good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 00:21 EDT
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you know, this gets more and more disturbing the more I read it, but I'm totally more and more into it every time. She's going to ask Sango about the pictures, isn't she? God I am SO looking forward to reading more of this!!! You're so awesome. Please wite more as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: kikyou_104(not online) On: August 07, 2004 20:31 EDT
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great chappy...please update soon
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Title: grrrrr!
Reviewed By: kanome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:10 EDT
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u r so mean for not updating! but i love the story and really really want u to continue! well love it read it update it PLEASE!
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Title: you only go 70 review...well 71 counting mine???
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: August 02, 2004 16:06 EDT
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okay...i'm waiting for a update...this story is good and it still hasn't updated...why???? why??? why??? and why doesn't why has an 'a'? damn it!!! well anyway...i like that you revise cuz' i was rereading the chapters i was printing out and i found tons of mistakes....and now that i noe youv'e corrected them i feel better...love you and thought i'd get on your nerves..
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Title: Something refreshingly different
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Saw this recommended over at Green Tea, and just spent a very enjoyable couple of hours reading the fic so far. I treat AUs as original works for the most part, and in this case, your Inuyasha and Kagome are practically orignal characters. I think you've done a terrific job with cranking up the sexual tension between these two, while putting up real and very difficult obstacles to their relationship. Your Inuyasha, in particularly, is a nuanced character, which is both rare and refreshing in a fanfic world dominated by cardboard bad boys. My main criticism so far is your "B" story--there doesn't seem to be a lot at stake personally for I & K in solving the mystery. Given that Inuyasha is fairly wealthy, *why* is he working at the cinema, anyway? It's difficult, degrading work under Naraku's management. And why does Inuyasha care so much about proving Naraku's embezzlement? It doesn't seem to have a lot to do with Inuyasha directly...so far, at least. And without knowing what's at stake personally for our main characters, I'm finding this storyline a little less interesting despite the unusual setting--very interesting peek behind the scenes at a cinema, BTW. But overall, a great romance so far with some interestingly spicy twists and turns. I look forward to future chapters!
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Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love your story. i cant wait until lemons come! muahahaha! o wonder what'll happen if kouga mets kagome...how will inu yasha react?! i truly ador you and your story! keep up the good work.update or i will die from heartbreak :(.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki again On: July 28, 2004 18:35 EDT
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Now that I think about is bad kittie is right...when that shit of InuYasha's business hits the fan it's gonna stank. And i wouldn't want to be around either Kagome or InuYasha when it does...their the aggressive type and we wouldn't mix...i like ppl to bow down to me in an argument...you can keep arguing but don't think I'm gonna let you win..and boy do I hold a grudge.
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Title: That's Miss Nikki....don't forget...
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: July 28, 2004 18:32 EDT
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Okay here we go again. I like this chapter but not as well as the first few ones. I still think he should change his mind and act on his instincts. I mean my motto when i was underage was don't get caught...it's the thrill of the older man. now it just doesn't seem the same. I would love to see a nicely built half naked InuYasha and boy does that sound tempting. I like the fact that InuYasha is willing to what for Kagome and that Kagome doesn't want to wait. man if she could only catch InuYasha off guard and make him lose controll on his restraint...is that how you spell it...?...oh well. I don't like that term jailbait either but what can we do about it...if we're not 18 or within 4yrs of their age that's what we're considered. I would like to think they like us more to battle the law...the chickens...I mean if you don't get caught you have nothing to worry about....keep up the GOOD WORK SOMETHING ABOUT IT JUST KEEPS MAKING ME COME BACK FOR MORE. EVEN AFTER THE WHOLE GAY BI THING. IN THIS STORY IT FITS HIS PERSONALITY. I LOVE A MAN WITH FANGS. ROCK ON!!!
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Reviewed By: rabidmathfreak On: July 27, 2004 16:05 EDT
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Love the story, all the kinky aspects, very interesting, well written, keep writing, pleash
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: July 27, 2004 13:41 EDT
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I really got into the scene with Inu and Kagome b/c they needed to have this major confrontation. Why do I get the feeling it is far from over? What was on that piece of paper that Tamisha had? Is Inuyasha going to be able to resist or will he break down? Seems his self-control is barely on a thread. Is quitting and finding another job an option for Kagome? it could eliminate the problem-but then, who would help him reveal Naraku? Has she been keeping notes and do they go over them? I guess I have a bunch of questions this time-I'm glad you gave us more a peek into Kagome's life and history-You do a marvelous job talking about issues that lurk beneath the surface-many authors shy away from the things you talk about-looking forward to more-And I wonder if Kagome is even aware of her deviant tendencies? Or was she too busy being embarassed? And boy is the s**** gonna hit when Inuyasha's 'business' gets out! You know Kouga won't keep his mouth shut!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: July 25, 2004 01:12 EDT
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Awesome chapter. Don't have much to sayy.. x.X Good luck and I hope you update soon :D
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 19:59 EDT
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Cool. Love the story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Hot!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I have read every chapter up 'til now, and I have to say, man can you write! I promise to review every chapter after this one, and I have to say, your take on Inuyasha and his actions is very interesting. I'm glad I found this fic, and I think your art is interesting. I saw your art through those links you posted here, and I love your 3-D wallpaper you did on Inuyasha, it's gracing my comp as you read this. You are awesome! Thanks for sharing your talent, and I've noticed some awesome parts in your story that have touched me as far as my child hood. I used to have family who lived in Coon Rapids, but the family broke up, so I no longer visit Minnesotta. Thanks for sharing you talent, and I hope to visit Hell's Kitchen if I ever get the chance to come up! Plus, I live in Illinois, Chicago suburbs! This story is just awesome, and you have a new fan! Ja ne!
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