| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Title: Coming Clean
Reviewed By: Tsukiko Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonder fic so far. I just started reading it and I was hooked. I'm glad that both have problems with the enemy not just one of them. If that makes sense. Can't wait for the next update. Huggles
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: February 16, 2005 18:43 CST
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aie! poor hiei-san!! aw but kura-san is soo cute and sweet and awesome! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 13:59 CST
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Aww! I can't get enough of this story, I'm so anxious to see how it ends!! Hurry up and finish this and Bugs too!!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:24 CST
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Woah dark really dark.Awsome!I love dark things!Like Hiei, But I'm still pissed (excuse my french) at you for hurting Hiei!Poor Hiei
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't like, what's not to like? As a caregiver for a severely disabled adult, I think you hit the panic notes of Hiei (yes, even Hiei given what he has been through, and the fact that Intaro has struck at Hiei's weakest point -- his determination to be strong and self-sufficient), the loving determination of Kurama, and the comments of Shiori, all perfectly. Yet again, another wonderful chapter with forced learning for our favorite pair. Intaro's astute cruelty to Hiei, and through him to Kurama, makes me worry about what will happen should he manage to capture Kurama again. I hope you can return soon.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: February 14, 2005 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, so they won't show the newest chap, so i have to review this one again...anyway, great chapter, as usual, but i hope poor hiei gets better soon...*shakes you hard* WHEN WILL HE GET BETTER, MARTINI?!?!? LOL
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon. Maybe Hiei's Jagan will heal faster, and he can use that sense to 'see' Kurama
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 23:13 CST
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this chapter is so sad. it's really weird seeing that side of Hiei, a side most of us probably wouldn't even think he possessed. it kind of hurts to read about him being that way but at least Kurama can help him heal. hopefully he won't stay that way for long. and hopefully once he heals, he & Kurama can get their revenge on Intaro. very nice fic! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great chapter!hope you update soon!can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. Poor Hiei, all disabled and needing to be tended to like that. I dunno, this chapter is a little weird, but the "It's a demon thing" line was definitely cute. Overall, I liked it. Plus it's an update, which is always a good thing.
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:46 CST
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YOU ARE MEAN!!! MEAN MEAN MEAN MEAM MEAN!!!! Poor Hiei....but you UPDATED!!!! *dances* YAY YAY YAY!!! Now do it again!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: February 03, 2005 16:58 CST
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How long has it been since you've updated again? I forgot.... It seems like forever but I know it can't have been that long.... Urgh....I need to be more patient....
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 14:56 CST
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Love it, but please make Hiei recover fully soon. The mere thought of him not being fully recovered in the end strikes terror in my heart.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: January 27, 2005 19:00 CST
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I read this chapter over and over again and it's TORTURE....update soon....pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaase....I'm prepared for begging and if authorized may go as high as groveling....
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 20:21 CST
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Intaro is such a bastard! (Sorry, but I had to say it, for my own benefit.) I sincerely hope Hiei recovers some of his pride and Kurama gets at least a few moment's rest from all the turmoil and whatnot Hiei has been going through.Does that make a whole lot of sense? Er. Sort of. ^.^ Can't wait for more. Great job, despite some typos and grammar errors.
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