| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aiden [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 23:26 CST
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That is so sweet how Kurama takes care of Hiei. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 18:39 CST
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Continue soon, i think this chapter was one of my favorites
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:49 CST
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nice chapter, though it did seem to be a sort of filler. the residual effects of all of those wards were amazing. it's a good thing youko's aren't shy, b/c then Hiei would have some problems. now i'm wondering if Kurama will go after Intaro himself. foxes are pretty possessive so i could see that happening. i wonder....... well, anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Important lessons in trust and love are beautifully demonstrated -- thank you! Once again, all characters were wonderfully in character and the chapter full of lovely touches (Yusuke's concern for Kurama, Kurama's den, Genkai's softer voice, Yukina's love and determination). I hope the writing bug strikes soon, so we can have more.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: January 22, 2005 16:19 CST
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Oh, poor hiei!!! make him get better soon, okay?!?!?! anywayz, great chapter, and update this and Bugs soon!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: January 22, 2005 10:59 CST
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*gasp* You so mean to Hiei!!! But at least you didn't kill him, or you would have one very angry reader!!! Now, please update....and make Hiei get better soon!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAAASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 10:13 CST
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Aw! You do have a soft heart! I thought that maybe you just like to cause poor little Hiei and Kurama pain, but you proved me wrong. I like this chapter the most. More than any of the others!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 09:29 CST
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YYYYAAAAAAYYYY!!!!!!! HIEI IS BACK!!!!!!!!!I'll love you and pet you 'cause Hiei's gonna be okay!Right?
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 09:23 CST
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Wah! That's so evily mean! I can't believe your not done with it yet! If anyone wants to join my fan club for mhmartini e-mail me! I know how to make websites and I intend to make a fan site for her! Yay!!! UPDATE SOON SLAVE!!! just kidding :P
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: January 20, 2005 17:36 CST
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Great job!!! I just love this story. Its cheered me up so much!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 (2 lazy 2 login) On: January 20, 2005 17:22 CST
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another good chapter. but Hiei's torturing was just cruel, though it should be expected. now i'm just wondering what Intaro's plan is to get Kurama. i mean, he just left Hiei there so Kurama could find him! when's he gonna make his move? well, anyway, can't wait for the next update. make it soon, okay?
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, thank you! AND, another cliffhanger, darn you. Poor Hiei, I look forward to the next chapter with hope.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1...i can't log in [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 11:27 CST
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I won't call u cruel if u update soon. ...so yea
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1(mm won't let me log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 11:27 CST
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I won't call u cruel if u update soon. ...so yea
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Reviewed By: Aiden On: January 19, 2005 23:07 CST
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I am enjoying this story. Poor Hiei. I hope he will be avenged.
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