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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:35 CST
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sorry it took me so long to review... i've been busy as hell lately... but that's beside the point. i love this fic, and i want you to up date soon. i love the way you're taking hiei and kurama's relationship slow and not just throwing them in bed to gether. *claps* very well written and suspenseful plot... please up date soon. ja! f.k.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:21 CST
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I love it! But i want more action!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and have no clue where it's going, but will tag along for the ride!
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: November 07, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I just love your story so much!!! Very clever, well written, and oh-so-kawaii!!! I can't wait to find out what happens -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 20:34 CST
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Yay! I loved it! I hope there's a lot of action in the next one, though! But I loved this chapter and can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:52 CST
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SQUEE!!!!!I loved it!!!!That was soooo sweet of Hiei!!!!!!!
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Matsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and I don't mind waiting for you to post. I agree that it is better to think out stories before posting. I have to say I was really excited when I saw that you updated. I do hope you are able to update soon but like I said I don't mind waiting.
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Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, am delighted that you updated. Kudos to Yukina for standing up for herself, kudos to Yusuke and Keiko for finally acting like grown-ups, kudos to Hiei for chillin' out some. And kudos to you, for building such a sweet relationship between Hiei and Kurama. It's an absolutely engaging story, and as always, can't wait until your next update!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 14:28 CDT
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Please add more soon
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Title: katy123
Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:13 CDT
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upsate soon it rocks!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still think this is a great story to where you don't need to do much else to make it better other then add a little more action to it now. I do like how you described the way Kurama felt peace around the tree as he regained his ki it sounded very calming. The wait was worth it for this chapter it puts some of the readers at ease. Everything worked out with Yusuke and Keiko though it was funny that Yusuke thought he was going to get hit with one of the cutlry knives. Until next time!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover (not signed in) On: September 07, 2004 17:50 CDT
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Hey, not sure where you're going with this now, but i shall remain fathful and wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it it just so awsome!!!!!Poor Kurama he's hurt but thats okay!!!!!!!!!!!^_^ :P
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:26 CDT
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Yay!!!!!! You updated!!!! That made me so happy. You dont know how hard it's been to find GOOD YYh stories, at least, ones that catch my interest, the kind that I enjoy to read. Thank you thank you for not abandoning your work! Man, I felt scared for Yuusuke when you said Mr. Yukimura was beside the cutlery. That man can toss a blade like nobody's business.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 23:31 CDT
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This story is great! I had read the first like five chapters months ago but I couldnt read anymore cuz my internet broke. But it's fixed and now you HAVE to keep writing!!! I need more!!! hehehe, this is great!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Clown On: August 02, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Wow! I love it so much I'm reviewin twice! Keep up the really really good work!! Update soon! *^_~* ~Lacey~
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