| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:54 CST
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I love it!And i'm so so happy you decided to update more!Poor Kurama.I feel so sorry for him but hopfully Hiei can calm him a bit and back to the way he once was.
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Reviewed By: PatAgain/MikaSamu On: November 27, 2004 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, two more chapters! It is our good fortune that you are in a writing mood. Poor Kurama, so depressed, understandably. I know Hiei will help. I loved Kurama's quiet help to Kuwabara, and really, everything about this story. I hope you decide to post again quickly -- the adjustments the characters need to make are large, but the external threat still hangs over them and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: November 27, 2004 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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woohoo! i havent been oneling in forever and i come on and about 7 new chapters updated for "coming clean"!!! at first i wasn't to keen on this story cause it was a k/h... but after reading it you changed my view. i really like the way you write this story. i love shiori-san and yukina-chan's reactions to kurama and hiei... XD kawaii! i cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 27, 2004 11:00 CST
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Great story! Thank you for the updates!! I cannot wait for more. This story has a way of cheering me up when i am feeling blue. Thank you so much
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 26, 2004 15:41 CST
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That was a great two chapters. more more please!! You must give us more. THough i think intaro is pissed Kurama killed Karasu and not him. But its a great story and i want to know if i am right!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 12:20 CST
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Poor Kurama and damned computer!I couldn't even get on the net!Your story was quite digusting but still I loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 09:04 CST
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hey sweet fic can't wait to finish reading it and love the cliffies. but please finish it would be humorous to hear Yusuke screaming about dream. but please finish. I really must say ur good......
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Reviewed By: Mr_vampire On: November 26, 2004 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as posible.
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 21:57 CST
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That was great! You updated two chapters in one day! You are still alive right? I hope you didn't work yourself to death. That was a lovely way to end the chapter! Yusuke being chased by Keiko, cute! Poor Kurama that must have really hurt... It all seems to have turned out well though. Except who that guy is. A good omen or a bad one? Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: PatAgain On: November 25, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you posted here, I didn't get a chance to finish my last review. Two more great chapters. I agree, the dark times are needed to better appreciate the light, and all change comes with some pain.
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 14:23 CST
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WooooooHoooooooooo!I loved it!Poor Kurama and Hiei they were having a nice time then some damned Youkai had to come and get them.xcuse my French,and honestly I totally Loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 21, 2004 11:18 CST
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Very good story keep iot up and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Youko Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down* Yay! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 03:12 CST
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Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!?!?!? You have the next chapter written?!? Well, where is is?!?!?!?!!? Proof-read quickly! Um..Please? Oh, In case you didnt notice, I loved this chapter, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 20:01 CST
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Oh my goodness! I need to start checking these more often. I didn't know that you updated and I missed a chapter! Shame on me! This is still really great and I love the plot! Please do update as soon as you can, but don't let it kill you that would be horrible! It was really nice of Hiei to give Kurama that gift. Kurama comes out from being babied at the hospital only to be showered with attention at home. Everything went well with Yusuke. Though his mom needs to learn how to handle things in a better way than drinking. How you portray the characters is amazing and it fits them so well. I hope you can update soon!
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