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| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a WONDERFUL chapter this was!! i loved it!! and you wrote this one exceptionally well, it seemed. are you thinking about going into the medical profession? because all of these technical terms seem very well researched. and that adds to the believability of the story. excellent job! i can't believe the finale is coming!!! **tear** but it's okay. i'll get over it. update soon! (about the last chapter review, i understand. and trust me, if that was your only choice, i'm glad you did it the way you did. that was definately enough torture! lol)
| Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 15, 2005 15:45 CDT
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Aww, so cute. Hiei's such a sweetheart. :) Well, let's see... I can't rant about spleens or death or anything in this chapter... I can comment that staying in a hospital for over a month would SUCK (...I have no experience... I haven't been in a hospital for more than several hours since I was born). But it would suck. And I can say I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, and the next "adventures in this timeline", as you say... I can't be too bummed about the end of this story since there's more after that. Which is certainly very good. Well, looking forward to the update, wonderful job on this chapter, I love Hiei and Kurama's relationship in this story... it's so cute... and, now, hm. Ja mata, I guess! ~~SJ~~
| Reviewed By: sueb262-tmp On: September 15, 2005 02:44 CDT
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What a sweet chapter! I'm dreading the end of this story, but, I guess all good things must end, after all...
| Title: Love!
Reviewed By: mizthang222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 21:40 CDT
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I love you!You story is so great,and I hope you'll make more.I'm so sad this story is coming to an end,but I've been waiting for it too.^_^
| Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: The Gatekeeper On: September 14, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm so happy Kurama's all better! Aw, and Hiei was so sweet. The end there kind of made me want to clean my room 'til it was spotless, but I'm too stressed. Oh well, another day. Anyway, loving things and you've done well with this story. The only thing to really bug me was at one point, Hiei says "Sop it" when he should say "Stop it." Otherwise, all is cool!
| Reviewed By: Tsukiko Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand Koenma now!! I don't care if he feels guilty now. He should have in the begining!! Grr-ness!! I almost died when Hiei tried to kill himself. I love this fic so much. You are doing such a great job. Huggles Nikkler
| Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh stupid mail thing didn't tell me about new chapters. So glad I checked on this fic anyway. Great chapter(s) I really was not expecting Kurama to go like that. And the torture was well written, detailed enough to get a visual without over doing it. I like the way you wrote their reations to the death. Hiei is still Hiei even in his grief and Kurama didn't just bounce back after so much suffering. *checks email* Great NOW it tells me you updated. *face vaults* Anyway great as usual. Here is me pleading in advance for another story in the "Bugs" "Coming Clean" universe......*gets down on knees* Please Please Please Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: raindropsRteardrops (too lazy to log in) On: September 08, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another WONDERFUL chapter! soo i didn't update the past couple chapters, but for some reason MM didn't send me the notifications... wierd, ne? but anyway i got the notice for chp 34 and i read the others and ... and... and i cried!!! my family was giving me funny looks at the dinner table as i explained in an incoherent voice to oneechan pieces of your story (not the gruesome details just the fact he had been kidnapped and died and ect.) but but but!!! HE DIED!! but then kept reading and he was AAAAAALLL better!... well kinda... lying in a hospital "looking like road kill with IV tubes" but but but at least he is alive... i hate you and love you at the same time... but i love your writing stlye its just... AWESOME!!! i am usually not one for hiei/kurama pairings but you definately are... i dont know excatly what the hell i'm trying to say, but basically i am calling you one of the best writers i have ever read for. (that includes books i have read too).... this was a really long review but please forgive me, i cant wait for the next two chapters!!!
| Reviewed By: stix On: September 06, 2005 21:13 CDT
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i loved these chapters. they were so great. please add more to this story soon. ** you are not evil eny more you did not kill kurama.**
| Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 06, 2005 19:13 CDT
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Once again, PERFECT! 10s all across the board! Soooooo saaaaaaaad! *chibi tears* Finish soon, yesh? So I can be happy? And give you much plushiness, hugs, and cookies?
| Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 06, 2005 19:07 CDT
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OH...MY...GOD! That was INCREDIBLE! Terrific! And many other glowing descriptions! *hugs you and hands you Hiei and Kurama plushies galore* Now, OFF TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:57 CDT
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wow. that was possibly the longest chapter you've ever written. and that's saying something because all of your chapters are extremely long. nice job, though. i liked what happened in the story, but i wasn't too overjoyed by how you wrote it. it seemed more like you were just telling the story than actually participating in it like all the other chapters seemed. it was like you were detached in this chapter, as if it lacked feeling and emotion. it was still a nice chapter, though. and i can't wait until you update again. i can't believe it's almost the end!!! so sad!
| Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:15 CDT
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Continue soon! I liked the chapter...not the torture Kurama leave him to flicker on the fence of life and death, but i liked the action and emotion in the scenes. So yay, great chapter(s) and continue soon!
| Reviewed By: ShadowJaganshi On: September 06, 2005 15:54 CDT
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Ah, the joys of writing at 5 AM. I've done that. My stories get really mental and weird at 5 AM... huh. Well anyways, another great chapter... I'm so happy everything worked out okay! *sniffles melodramatically* Hugs for everyone! Yeah, me and my constructive criticism. Two of my teachers this year have mentioned teaching us to be more 'critical' and such, so maybe my reviews will be more useful by the end of the school year... But you'll be done with this story long before that. Aww... I don't want it to end... I LOVE this story! And I want to see how it goes from "this" to "fluffy"... And... yeah. So, this chapter was hardly as emotional as the last couple, and I didn't have to take breaks to keep from crying, which is good. Now. I love your story and you for writing it... Update when you can, no rush. I'll be happy no matter when you update... Ya. Ja mata, now... ~SJ
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: September 06, 2005 15:48 CDT
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*glomps you and squeezes you until you run out of oxygen and die* EEP! Sorry! *revives you and glomps you again* I MISSED YOU!!! Okay, so either my computer is EVIL and isn't sending me alerts or you really haven't updated since July. Which is it? Because I haven't read any of your updates for two months and if it's my computer's fault I'll kill the stupid, worthless piece of junk. But I got to read four new chapters in a row today so I'm happy. Anyway, I love everything you've written but I really feel I must object to the fox torture. When I read the last three chapters I cried....and cried....and cried some more. And you know what I did then? I CRIED!!! *points at you* I accuse you of killing Kurama. *takes out a sheet of paper* You are required to appear in court and give an explanation for your actions. Because in case you didn't notice, YOU KILLED KURAMA!!! But I know you'll bring him back so all is well. LOL. Sorry, I'm really hyper today. I dunno why, because I hardly slept last night and I have a pile of work a mile high, but your updates--even the sad, depressing, fox torturing ones--make me happy. But I should probably go work now, so I'll wrap it up. I love everything you've written so far, and I can't wait to read the end of the story. Update really soon, okay? I'll be waiting on pins and needles to find out what happens to the foxiest fox there ever was! LOL. Bye! ^_^
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