| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Title: BlackPanther
Reviewed By: BlackPanther [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Wow....Wowie... It's so beautiful. You built up the relationship so well...I absoulutly loved it. It's a really good story. The yusuke and Keiko thing really surprised me. I love the kisses from Hiei and Kurama. It's soooo beautiful! I was speechless when I finished the last chapter. It was...astonishing. your writing skills are good. Update! Please update..you are on a roll. I mean it I also like the things after the disclaimers. they're funny.
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Title: Alstroemeria
Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully written! I hope you are able to update soon, because I can't wait to see what happens next. I really like the idea of Hiei and Shiori learning to trust each other, and I hope Kurama ends up okay! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Hieiminamino@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Katy123 On: May 21, 2004 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow!! I must say i loved it!! So glad that Youko starr told me about it....How ever i missed it i will not know. Itwas great. Better than anything i ever wrote!! Please update soon!!
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Title: Youko Starr
Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Absolutely cannot wait to read more. Its difficult for me to find a story I -really- Like and I'm glad I checked out your pen name to see if you had any stories of your own. I adored the scene between Kurama and his mother, and you have the characterization down perfectly. Hope to read the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Yami Yue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so sweet. I'm enjoying it so far. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Curry On: May 13, 2004 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Well written and clearly thought out. Please continue.
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