| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 10:45 CST
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please update today. my bf broke up with me and i need something happy to read
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Reviewed By: Kurama rocks my socks On: January 15, 2005 12:13 CST
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Ok. This fic is AWESOME!! Though, I think that you are a little rough on Kurama, but that's ok. i just love this fic! It's very...dark. And I assure you, dark is good....buwahahaha...haha...ha? But yeah. This rocks. -Heather
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 13:11 CST
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You've got to hurry up and finish! You're killing me here! You have got to finish this one and bugs at the same time!! I love all your stories!!! You're my favorite author!! I'm gonna start a fan club for you and I will be your number one fan!!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 07:37 CST
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YAYYYY!!!!!!I'm so happy you updated!!!!!I love this chapter!!!!It was so sweet and Hiei is so cuddley and sweet and cute too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What wonderful chapters! A very nice lemon, delightful warmth between Kurama, Hiei and Shiori, two wonderful scenes with Yusuke and Kuwabara learning to go against their inclinations for their loves, and the menace that awaits Kurama in particular. I've been eagerly awaiting this chapter, and am not disappointed. Now I'm even more eagerly awaiting the next chapters. I hope you're able to come back soon.
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Clown_Chick On: December 02, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was an awesome lemon! I can't believe it's your first! Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading some of your other works.
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: December 01, 2004 17:31 CST
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YES!!! You put a lemon in it! That was great! I loved it. You must write another one soon!! You did a perfect job. Yoru story really helps me stay out of depressed moods so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tsuin_Kitsune15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME! I loved it!!! It was so sweet! I LOVE shounen ai...anyway, loved the fic, as you already know, and now I am off to read MORE of your fics.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:45 CST
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I don't think you have anything to worry about. That was a very good, sweet lemon. It was more of what I'd call lime than hardcore smut, but then that wouldn't have exactly been appropriate to the scene (lol - Hiei whips out the chains and leather "Haha! I may be a virgin but I've watched enough porn videos at Yusuke's house to fuck you silly and leave you begging for more!" Kurama, "Score!"). It was very sweet like your whole fice has been.
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: raindrops On: November 29, 2004 19:59 CST
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very nice for your first lemon. i've read a couple... and this one has to be the best. you go dude!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 18:34 CST
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Awsomness I may not have read the Lemon but damn that was still awsome!Go Hiei you finally told him!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:00 CST
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Another adorable chapter. No offense intended when I say this, but his stepfather's reaction seemed a little unrealistic and all of it seemed to happen so suddenly. Then again, maybe I'm just romanticizing it too much.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared ^^ On: November 28, 2004 17:30 CST
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(formerly known as Ataure) I'll I have to say about that last chapter is "awww...."
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!hope you update soon!
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