| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: yaoikitten(not signed in) On: May 22, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 29 was very good please continue to write it and dont worry about rushing it im sure your readers understand and i love how you set this chapter up so we got both ways of thinking i was waitinf for kurama to relize how hiei would take his actions when he didnt till he got the message i was pleasentaly surprised ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi (lazy SJ...) On: May 22, 2005 16:09 CDT
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I'm sick, and too lazy to log in, but I read the chapter anyways (^_^) and I feel so bad! *sigh* Seems like all the fanfics I'm reading lately are making me all emotional... Which isn't good, considering the variables... Oh well. Update when it suits you... I'll wait all patient-like for it...
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: May 22, 2005 12:52 CDT
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*face falls* And everything was going so well.... I still love the story though. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramalvr6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww it's so awsome! i loved it! Now i'm going to go read the 2nd chapter! i promise to waist your time and review for every chapter i read! ok?
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so painfully depressing! You're supposed to stay in one place when you're lost, Kurama! What are you doing? x.x Can't wait for the new update, I'm sure it'll be just as excellent as this one.
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Reviewed By: Yutaka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for another great chapter. I'm glad you are going to continue to write it as you have and not try ti condense it. I really love long stories and this story is one of my favorite! Please keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm delighted you decided not to condense your story, but let it take its own pace. Great chapter, poor Hiei and Kurama -- just as both begin to heal, more stress. I hope their misunderstanding is quickly resolved.
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Reviewed By: sueb On: May 21, 2005 22:38 CDT
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AAAGGGGHHHHH!!! "misunderstanding" is the understatement of the YEAR!!! Another wonderful chapter - keep it up! And, as far as I'm concerned, don't do any squishing or shortening or lengthening or ANYthing! This is too good a story to screw up just for inconsequentials!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I haven't really benn reading but I've been busy with my parents,school which is ending thank God,and baby cousin.I'm so so so so so sorry for not updating.-_-
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Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since day 1, and I love it. I am so glad to see the recent updates, can't wait for more!
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:39 CDT
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By the way, don't you dare rush this. =7 I've seen all the reviews lately asking you to hurry things up, but I don't share the opinion. Something this good just makes me want to savor every moment, which is probably why I have your fanfic site bookmarked and visit it when you haven't updated in awhile, and re-read all of Coming Clean and Bugs, because they are the sweetest stories I know and I love them to pieces. The more you give me, the more I love them, so just do this however you have been, stick to your own plan, and don't let anybody tell ya what to do (no offense other reviewers, you were all very nice in what you said!). Right, so, now I kick my ass back into my Roman history. =D Later!
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Reviewed By: Kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you this week, did you know? It's been a really stressful couple of months for me, it all seems to be coming together into this gigantic...I don't know how to put it. The stress-raptors have the scent of my blood. Anyway, life sucks, and then you come in with updates about four times as quickly as normal. So...you're my hero. =D *confetti pops all around* So, Down and Out--it was public after all, huh? I was a bit surprised that Mr. Nasty Pants didn't show his ugly face while Kurama was out and about, weakened, with no fellow detectives around. What's his plan, anyway? I understand what he's trying to do, but I'll be interested to see how exactly things come about. Like a ship. Drop the starboard anchor. I'm really tired. =P I apologize for the effects of lack of sleep, way too much caffeine and a history paper that, for some reason, refuses to write itself. (It's being difficult, it's at a bad age.) At this rate, it's not looking good. So have a good night (whenever you read this) because I won't! =D
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:42 CDT
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this was a very good chapter. i'm glad Kurama's condition is being taken care of now. all that's left is Hiei getting better & everything will return to relative normalness. glad you're taking the reviewers' suggestions too. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: April 28, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update soon!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, Kurama has finally gotten the help needed! I loved the description of treatment, having been there I recognize the protocals. Please don't squash too much, I love this story and will regret its ending.
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