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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 20:48 CDT
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(insert high-pitched girlie scream here) that was so sweet!!!! and Hiei got his sight back!!!! alright!!! that was wonderful! oh my gosh, you have to update soon. that was such a great chapter. it was all too great! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:56 CDT
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Yay! Hiei can see...and do other things!!!!! I'm happy this wasn't the last chapter too! Continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: July 04, 2005 18:37 CDT
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You're back!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!! I missed you!!!! *hugs you* This was a really good chapter!!! Update soon, okay? Don't leave me hanging!!!
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Reviewed By: sueb262 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 17:34 CDT
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sigh! another wonderful chapter. and i'm SO glad hiei can finally see again! these two are so sweet together...
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: June 23, 2005 20:17 CDT
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Where is you? I review chapter on May 22, and now it is June 23 and I review again because I like reviewing and I never get reviews myself, so I'm sending a lot of them to you. I hope you update soon. Please please please!
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Reviewed By: RS Sykel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 19:32 CDT
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evil!!!! but i love it!! great stroy!!!! please up date soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Yukina Leonelli On: June 07, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wheezes as if climbing a 12000000000000000000 ft tall mountain* I..made..it...29 chapters in 4 hours. Wow..I don't do that for any fanfic. This is a winderful story; rarely do I get as addicted to a fanfic. I think I'm ready for Intaro to go away,Hiei and Kurama are enough drama in themselves. And I don't want poor Hiei to get hurt anymore!! *cries* I really hope you get to update soon!! *holds out Hiei plushie of Wonder to you* This is my favorite yu yu fic of all time!!
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Title: Interesting.
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bonsoir. It is me, the one you wrote the e-mail to about my review on bugs. You said to read this, and I've gotten up to chappie nine already. I don't know, dude. I mean, I definately like Hiei and Kurama and think they are totally in character, but the plot seems just a bit draggy to me. I mean, there's only so much ' lets nurse kura back to health' angst I can take, but then again that's just me. Perhaps you'd like to speed things up a bit, hm? Watch, YOu totally do that from now on, and I'll feel like a real fool. Also, I was just wondering, do you believe in the Yusuke/Kura pairing? Even if you don't like writing it, you've gotta see Yusuke's attraction to Kura. It's like, EVERYWHERE> That and, speaking from teenage girl intuative hormones here, I don't think he's sexually into Keiko, no matter what the show says. Suzaku's bird even says in Shounen Jump that their relationship is platonic. I dunno. I hate strait lemons so maybe that's my prob. Whatever. Keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaa;_; You've done it again. Writing such a good sad chapter. Can't wait to see the next one.
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Reviewed By: Candy? On: May 26, 2005 16:19 CDT
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Okay, now I review not to ASK you to update, but to BEG you to update. Today's the first day of summer break and I'm going stir-crazy being cooped up in this house all day with nothing to do, and I've been really depressed for a couple of days and yesterday I cried my eyes out until I didn't have anything left to cry WITH. I cried for what felt like hours yesterday after I said goodbye to my teachers and my friends and my friend Robert who's moving away, and I need to read something cheery so please make something GOOD happen in the next chapter. Please? Please please please?
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: May 24, 2005 15:54 CDT
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NONONONONONONNNOOOOOOO!!! you can't stop there!!!! awww.. poor hiei-san!! poor kurama-san! nononononoonooooo i want to give them all hugs!!! *whimpers* you must update very soooooon!!! T.T
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 15:45 CDT
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Tear-Jerker.....Thats all I have to say.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi(not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:40 CDT
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i suppose i'm one of the few who don't mind if it continues as is. as long as you update quickly, it should be okay. great chapter btw. i love how you had Kurama react to what he & Hiei both knew he wanted. it was great. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: May 22, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT? oh...right...maybe it's because you're the writer. damn. well. ok then. so you: writer. me: reader. you have: power. me have: zip. lol. fine. i will just beg. UPDATE, PLEASE!
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