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| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] | | Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 28, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know: I don't mind loong stories. Actually, to be completely truthful, I actually LIKE long stories. Especially long GOOD stories. I hate finishing fics, whether they are my own or someone else's. So in my opinion, you can take as long as you like. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, have a good time with the rest of the story, and I hope you get your yellow belt so you can eat some candy! Until then Plushie Hiei can keep you company. *hands you Hiei plushie* TTFN!
| Reviewed By: raindrops On: April 28, 2005 16:21 CDT
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score! another chapter!! ..... i think i was gonna say something else about the story but oh well. your doing an awesome job! can't wait till teh next update!!
| Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 09:09 CDT
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Well you're not becoming preditable. Those are just plot immunity's that everyone has. I've got lot's of 'em in my stories. Cause right now, I have no idea what's going to happen in the rest of your story. Which is good, but bad. And I'm just rambling because I can. I don't care how long the story is, I just what to be able to read it over and over again. You better not chop up the story because a few people want it to be finished like now. I want good detailed chapters, like you have been doing. I am also very anxious to find out what will happen next!
| Title: Don't hurry TOO much! :)
Reviewed By: sueb On: April 27, 2005 23:41 CDT
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I've said it before, but: I just LOVE how these characters come across. Hiei always makes me laugh (he's such a little grouch!), and the contrasts in Kurama's personality are so intriguing. Let me encourage you to not sacrifice detail for the sake of speed - you have a gift with that, and it's a big part of what makes this story so successful!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Yay!!! You is being nice again!!! ^_^ I don't have as much time to write a good long review, but thanks for updating so fast!!! I can tell you're having fun writing this, so forget what I said in my last review. Your writing is perfection just the way it is, in my opinion, and to suggest that you do things differently than you already do would be not only stupid, but crazy bordering on insanity. So keep on writing, I'll keep on reading, and when this fic is done I'll send several reviews saying something along the lines of either "Thank you thank you thank you" or "Die die die" depending on how the fic ends. LOL. I'm waiting for the next update!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 16:11 CDT
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Oh, something I forgot to say in my review of approximately 12 minutes ago.... I have to congratulate you on your patience....I could NEVER be that mean to the characters for that long!!! I must commend you on your attention to detail and such, but please please please, could you speed it up just a bit? I'm not criticizing, exactly, and God knows a writer needs to do things his or her own way, but my patience has always been (and I fear it will always be) far from outstanding. So please, try to speed things up a bit, okay? If this way of writing works for you, and if you think the whole Speedy Gonzalas routine would cramp your style or whatever, then by all means, stick with the slow-and-steady-wins-the-race theme. I can wait if I have to. ^_^ Oh, and sorry if this review posts twice. My computer decided to be evil. Anyway, your writing is still amazing, even if I have to wait for it!!! *gives you more plushies* Thanks for listening!
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 27, 2005 16:00 CDT
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I read it again....see what you do to us poor fanfic readers? PLEASE tell me this thing is almost done....and "Bugs"....because once you get those two done, maybe you can start another of your wonderful, wonderful fics? *looks very chibi-ish and hopeful as she gives you Kura-chan and and Hi-chan plushies* Pwease? Pwease update fics fast? And write more? Pwease?
| Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 15:16 CDT
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great chapter. i'm really surprised Kurama could even move around outside for that long. and then Hiei started walking again. two accomplishments in one day. now if only Kurama could get over this sickness. also, despite how good this story is, i was hoping you could speed up the plot just a little. it's great seeing all they go through for each other, but i'm ready for Intaro to return now. i don't know if you're waiting for Hiei to get better or not, but please hurry. update soon!
| Reviewed By: kettricken [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Fox... It IS quite typical of him, I suppose, not letting anybody know that he's so ill, but I can't believe nobody's figured it out yet! Yusuke and Kuwabara are kind of dense sometimes, but I didn't think they were THAT dense. I've been trying to figure out over the last few chapters who will finally discover how badly he's doing, although I suppose now that he'll be going to school, he could just pass out in public and have his cover blown that way... Don't keep us wondering TOO long!
| Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 08:59 CDT
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AIYA! Hiei is finally mobile again! Hooray! But now is not the time to celebrate, Kurama is getting sicker with each passing day. Ooh I bet he passes out on the street before he even reaches the school. Or if he does get to take the history test, he passes it and then passes out and gets rushed to the hospital! Am I close, or too far away? It's an even better chapter than the last. Keep updating like this and the story will finished soon.
| Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:10 CDT
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That's so depressing, yet uplifting. Well now I'm all confused. It's a good chapter, anyway, and I'm glad to see that Hiei is slowly recovering. Slowly. I wish the best for Kurama. ^.~
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, another chapter! Bittersweet indeed. Great progress for Hiei, foolish but typical fox not to let anyone know how ill he is. Beautiful scenes of love and friendship. I'm glad we'll see the next chapter soon, I can hardly wait.
| Reviewed By: Sikandra On: April 26, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. But when's Kurama gonna get better?! I felt sorry for Hiei and now Kurama's down...but hey, it adds drama, and I like a good drama. Update soon, okay? Please? I'll give you candy...or cake...or other sugared substances. Unless you don't eat sugar, in which case I'll just give you a nice virtual plushie...
| Reviewed By: Candy? On: April 26, 2005 20:33 CDT
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*cries* Okay, you;re being nice to Hiei now, but you've switched to being mean to Kurama! Please tell me this story is almost finished--I can't take much more of this!!!
| Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 14:00 CDT
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Ooh goodies! I give you chocolate chips for this wonderfully written chapter. Ooh I can't wait to see what happens at the market!
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