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Title: Good job.
Reviewed By: mizthang222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You almost made me cry.I had tears in my eyes even.Saying this to you is the highest compliment I can give you.Not a lot of things do that to me.Write when you need to.That took a lot out of me just reading.Great job.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 03:11 CDT
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(sobbing) oh my gosh. i hate you, but i love you! you are so amazing. that torture was so much. i don't know how you even managed to write it down. and so eloquently, too. now, while it did hurt me to read, i have to give you your due: the mood and tone were wonderful. you made me feel as if i was there, watching poor Kurama suffer. and, oh my gosh, when Hiei saw him. that was so sad! he actually cried in front of everyone. that alone was proof of his distress. but why is it always because of Koenma that someone gets hurt? he may have done it for the greater good, but he had no idea what Kurama was forced to endure. you are such an amazing author. you really are. words can't describe how much i enjoyed these last three chapters, especially. let alone the whole story! your writing is descriptive and beautiful in its own right. you did a wonderful job. please hurry and update! this story must be completed.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 22, 2005 21:40 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. right now i hate you. i love kurama and you pritty much killed him. **EVIL!!!!!!**
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 22, 2005 20:46 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 01:19 CDT
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that was a wonderful chapter. i really loved that one, despite the fact that Kurama was captured. in fact, his capture made it even better. the way you described the fight was perfect. great job after the long wait. update again soon!
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: ShadysGothicBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 00:10 CDT
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hey i really like ur storys!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 21, 2005 20:25 CDT
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This is a great story. I've read your other stories and this is one of my favorites. I actually read the sequal to this story "Bugs" first. I read in one of your author's notes that this story will have 36 chapters so I hope that you post the others soon. Please don't just leave the story as is. It's too good to be left incomplete. I love the plot of this story and it's sequal. You are a great writer. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: raindrops (too lazy to log in) On: July 12, 2005 17:40 CDT
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heyhey, nice chapter, as always. its soooo awesome! hiei-san finally has his sight back! yea!! i can't wait for the next chapter, dont leave me hangin!
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Title: Shinoga
Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 13:07 CDT
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Woo hoo another wonderful chapter. Man it feels like forever since the last one. But well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune (not logged in) On: July 09, 2005 08:56 CDT
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this is a wonderful fic, and i'm sorry i can't talk for long (i'm alittle rushed at the moment) but i wanted to say that i love your fic, and that it's wonderfully written. And by the way, i was wondering, if you would be opposed to me placing a link to this fic on my livejournal so my friends can see it. I would love to, but of course only with your permission. E-mail me yes or no please. I gots to run now, but i still love your fic. ja forbidden kitsune
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:50 CDT
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I cracked up laughing at the cat's name... If I hadn't already picked a name for my next dog, that's probably what I'd name it. As for the rest of the chapter... Very sweet. I was wondering when Hiei would get his sight back... (And by the way, Hiei purring is a really cute mental image.) ^_^
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Title: WOOHOO!
Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 22:52 CDT
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That was awsome!!!!! If I must say so myself that Lemon and more was so great!!!The best chapter and Hiei/Kurama story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fire and napalm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Bugs first, but now I'm reading this one. This is a little slower tahn BUgs, but I must say it's just as well written, and very well planned out. Better than my planning. I really do hope you update soon, I await it eagerly. Thank you for posting.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: July 04, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEW CHAPTER! YAHOOOOOOOOO! *jumps up and down* and it was so cute!!!!! i wonder how everyone will react now that hiei has his sight back? update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful way to resolve so many troubles. A warm and uplifting chapter. A wonderful gift for a holiday -- I hope for more before the next one. And of course, there is still a villian waiting in the background . . . . Thank you again!
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