| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
| Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] |
Reviewed By: rain-chan On: September 24, 2004 17:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
No! He needs to take advantage of it in the next chapter!!! ..but if he does, then souta doesn't need to see it on kanna's mirror because that would probably break him down more than a little bit
|
Reviewed By: legendarysilverfox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 16:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please tell me if u r ever gonna have hiei on a sugar high. I know it's not normal for him, but it'd be funny as hell!! Later. Shadow
|
Reviewed By: Gabby [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was waiting for you to update, and you did! I realy liked it and can't wait till the next update!....so....PLEASE update!!
|
Title: Souta...
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Disgruntled_Hanyou On: September 23, 2004 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to all the levels of hell and heaven that if Naraku pulls a Michael Jackson on Souta, I'm going to freak. great fic by the way. *hands over the choco Kurama.* Here ya go, next chapter pwease!!! I'll give ya a choco sesshy if ya do...
|
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, damn that aff.net! Good thing for MM.org! hehe. Well well well, very interesting chapter. So much good action packed scene after scene. Loved it. Sorry for the shortness of this review but its waaaay past my bed time, hehehe. Once again, great work!!! --Aitu
|
Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 22:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
And the plot thickens (dun dun dun)! Anyway, *squeal* I love this story. The updates have been fantastic, and it makes me happy to see them in my inbox. ^^; You've created a monster; ever since I begun reading about the YuuYuu peeps, I've been trying to find other crossover fics to read. I'm currently stuck in BellDayNight's fic _Freak Show_. As for Happy Meal Barbies... I cut off all the hair and strip 'em, and let the dog to chew on. Then I throw it away. Works for us. Until next time, ta! :)
|
Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg again...) On: September 22, 2004 21:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sigh... It really is good... and it saddened me to know that they will eventually be an end to that story *cry* poor Souta!!! I'm so sad for him! (like everyone else) and I was so worry about Kouga, I thought he would die in feudal era, but now I'm relieved to know he survived for at least 500 years! ^^ Anyway, I hope you'll update soon again!!!!
|
Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best I've read in a while. In fact, it even inspired me to review, which almost never happens. Anyway, keep up the great work and update, update, update! :)
|
Reviewed By: river (not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last two chapters have been so harsh and at the same time so sweet!! I have to tell you that I have had a rough time in the past 24 hours, and reading this installment took me out of myself for a short while, so thank you so much for updating, it really did give me a breath of air today.
|
Title: thanx
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 22, 2004 17:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow i love sesshomaru so much and thus luv you by proxy for bringing him into the story! poor koga * sniff sniff * keep up the good work
|
Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please oh please oh please update soon! this chappi came out good, but the hole cuting off of the charicter's limbs' was kinda mean...poor souta... good hiei kagome fluff in this one too. i love your pace with the fic your not rushing it and your not going unbarably slow. pluse no one is ooc. that an added bounis. keep hiei the way he is please. and kurama need to get a clue... i thought he was the inteligent one! i wounder what your going to write for what hapens when shippo meets kurama, then theres sanogo and kurama that might be a good pairing but i'm not sure i see her with him like that ... then again he was once a ruthless killer too.
|
Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 16:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
shit.. he's gonna torture Souta?! I like how Kouga's still alive and I have a feeling that Hiei'll start threatening him again if he claims Kag as his mate again....
|
Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 21, 2004 18:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Update soon!!!! Please! Oh my gosh... I HATE cliffies!! GRRRR but hey Kagome's two timing ^^ Hiei... Kurama... I wonder who'll win her (I don't know why but something in my head says it'll be Hiei) But maybe it's either of them, but it's Kuwabara? (ewwww!! NO!) I was just joking! And I hope it won't be that for real (I just CAN'T see them together!!) Anyway. I hope you'll update really soon! See ya!
|
Title: NANNNNNNNIIIIIIIIII?!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Shocked_Hanyou On: September 21, 2004 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it, Naraku is getting the ass kicking of a lifetime!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Souta *sniffles* *growls dangerously* Alright, Naraku's hunting party is startinf now, get in line if you want a piece of him. Great fic, you're keeping me in suspense, not that I like that or anything. *scowls* Please update soon and I'll give ya a choco Kurama... *wonders if bribery works*
|
Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 21, 2004 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is not right leaving us hanging like that!Not right at all!
|
| Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] |
