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Reviewed By: Fyrefaera On: October 01, 2004 03:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am obsessed with your fic! I love it so much, and it is sparking all sorts of ideas in my head to write about, yay! Anyway, I love the tension you are developing b/n all the males, and the scenes it leads to. Plus, you are covering all the important aspects, not glossing over some of the details. Okay, so I would add more but it's about 2:45 a.m. here and sleep sounds nice. Thanks for writing such an entertaining and endearing/obsession inspiring fic! Fyrefaera: Zrofyre ( I'm visiting from outside the site ( fav's link ) )
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 30, 2004 21:03 EDT
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ha ha! Poor Kagome and Hiei ^^ even if there weren't much action, I really like that chapter!! But I wonder what will happen to Kurama? Will he try to separate Kagome from Hiei? or he'll just do anything? finding another girl? or raping Kagome?? (I hope that's not the last option) anyway, update soon again!! ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 30, 2004 16:46 EDT
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LMAO that's what you get when you don't pay attention!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: September 30, 2004 03:33 EDT
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This is great, I've seen very few Inu/YYH crossovers that DIDN'T have Kagome with Kurama and Inuyasha being a total bastard that was screwing Kikyo and promising to kill Kagome. My only question is what happened to Rin and Jaken? Sess has to come clean about them sometime, please? Hope nothing too horrible happened to them. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Kanna_Fan
Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... i revewed but it didn't show up, so i'm doing it again! if i just missed it, My bad! So now you get 2 of them from me! please update soon, i think this chappie is my fav one so far, i got a lot of questions but i wont ask them cuz i know your really evil with leaveing people hangging! ^_^ again please update soon. The story is turning our really nicely and well writen! i give this chappie my best reviw yet, cuz i thought about it for a while and could find no reasone to give it a lower grading. please update soon. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 18:06 EDT
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I like that Kagome and Inuyasha are finally talking about their relationship (AKA fighting). If Kagome had spoken up before instead of sitting Inuyasha in a passive/agressive way she might not have fallen for Hiei's wiles, tasty as they are. I'm a big believer in asking instead of worrying about where you stand in a relationship; worst comes to worst, your suspicions are confirmed but at least you know for sure. So, anyway, kudos.
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Reviewed By: rain-chan (ame-hime not logged in) On: September 29, 2004 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an evil cliffhanger to a very, very good chapter that was worth the wait...perhaps the wait for the next one could be a tad shorter?
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Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I have read many crossovers and yours is by far the best I have ever read. It is really wonderful, I love it soo much. I hope you update the next chapter really soon. Oh and I love your story because you have one of my all time fav charaters as Kagome's love intest. I love Hiei, he is just he coolst!! -Amy-
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 29, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Men . . . they get so distracted easily . . . then again . . . so do I . . .
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Title: more kag/hiei time please by Inu_chick24
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 13:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and love the kag/ hiei pairing . They are my favorite type of pairin beside kag/ sess and kag/yoko or kurama. Keep up the good work on your story. Please update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 25, 2004 18:39 EDT
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it's so good I don't have much to say... everyone already said everything! but a review to say how much I love it won't hurt ^^ I hope you'll update soon again!
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: September 25, 2004 01:02 EDT
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I thought hiei was telepathic, not telekinetic. just a thought. and your story ROCKS!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome story! I really like a Hiei/Kagome pairing. I find Kurama either dull or, like you and Deviation have written him, creepy. A couple of times I had to go tell my daughter (14 and she introduced me to fan fic) about the good bits (Hiei and the tampons and the pamphlets in the waiting room in the Rekai.) I do think you are making Kuwabara too thick but I like that, in order to have a non-canon pairing, you haven't make IY a total a-hole.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 24, 2004 19:29 EDT
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=D
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 24, 2004 18:04 EDT
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oh dear.... thatr can't be good....
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