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Reviewed By: Silver WolfStar On: October 17, 2004 01:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The stroy thus far is very interesting and impressive. I am please to say that you are the very first author on this webpage to actually use proper grammer and spelling componants. The story line is very intruging and I am proud to say that you are by far my favorit author for supplying me with both an escellent story and proper mechanics. I am very please, please do keep up the extrodinairy work, and update as soon as posible since I can not wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh this is really a great fic! This is the first one that I have read that was more of a Hiei and Kagome, but then again I have only read a couple of crossovers for theses animes so I guess I'll just have to read more (yours included I hope). Till next time, which I hope isn't too long, ja ne! ^.~
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Reviewed By: rain~chan(not logged in) On: October 11, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a very mean cliffhanger!! do Hiei and Kagome talk about and maybe show what they mean to each other in the next chapter? and when do we find out why the jagan is reacting to Kagome the way it is?.. no matter the answers, this story is awesome!! Thank you so much for writing it!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: tinak142 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like u story please update soon i also like ur website
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 21:08 EDT
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grrrr... what IS he planning!!!!!!
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Title: Really GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:02 EDT
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i love it i cant wait for more please keep up the good work i havent read a hiei/kagome fanfic before i thought it would be dumb it was really good!! great job please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:36 EDT
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i don't have much to say... I really still love your fic, that's so great... i wonder if you thought about having a career in writing... i would read your book for sure!! ^^ anyway, i hope you'll update soon!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the time I've ever given a review. Your story is extremely good and interesting. There were only a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and your writing style is different tha what I'm used to reading. I'm not saying that it's bad or anything of the sort, it just took me a while to ge used to it. All in all, it's a very creative story. I am a bit about the plot, but that's to be expected with me. If you were a little more descriptive, it might be even better than it already is. This is also the best crossover I've read so far. Everyone seems to be in character. I'll keep reviewing if you'll keep updating. Cheryl
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Reviewed By: rain-chan(logged out) On: October 09, 2004 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! another update...poor hiei! I was wondering why you had added that part in about the shard of glass, but that was an awesome turn. Hopefully next chapter Kagome and Hiei will work out these feelings. And when are we going to find out why the jagan has such an interest in Kagome! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 07:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it took a while to come out but it was worth it. Have you watched the new inyashha movie yet? we just got it inn at our block buster, its a total buy. please update soon! a little sooner than a week this time maybe, ne?
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: October 09, 2004 02:12 EDT
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damn, I love Darshan--what a great party song! You're doing so well with this fic! And I also enjoy your comments a lot-- I'm always looking forward to a new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 23:12 EDT
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* on knees in a praying postion * "all hail the Great Somnambulicious-sama, All hail the Great Somnambulicious-sama. Oh Great 1 plaese update AFAP (as fast as posible) Your generosaty(sp) will be greatly apreshated(sp) & luved by all you read your fic. * glares at any1 who dares defy the Great Somnambulicious-sama with my Just-as-good-as-Hiei-if-not-better-glare * Review o great 1
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:50 EDT
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HIEI! I lUV HIEI! U doing great wit the fic so far. Keeping Hiei n charature and not making Kurama seem like a goody-to-shoes like most people do. I also liked that Yukina knows that Hiei is her brother (which much people do) but doesnt tell any1. I thought (scary Im thinking) that Botan's little 'dress-up of Kagome & Sango waz a nice touch. I still want 2 find out wat the Jagan wants wit Kagome. BTW it would be killer if you put in were Kagome sees Hiei's demon form. He looks cool both ways 2 me!^__^ Im surpised u didnt make K's hair pink r purple once I read that part. Well I got 2 rap tis up running out of charaters to use. L8a *in the background here some1 counting 821...816...810...804..????...lost count. Darnit Ill just start over... 1500.1499.. ^_^ This is going 2 take a while so bye.*
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: October 03, 2004 15:30 EDT
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Hey i love this story you have got to update it really really really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:15 EDT
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Great update. When I first read this chapter, I forgot to review. My conscience got the best of me later, though, so here I am reviewing. (Call me a shmuck, I know; lol) I'm quite taken with this story, and I thoroughly enjoy reading it. Keep up the excellent work!
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