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Reviewed By: intheshadows229 On: October 25, 2004 22:28 EDT
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but...but what happned to Rin? and why did you make kagome sesshomarus pet? i mean a PET come on people. o who cares, update soon JA NE!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 24, 2004 03:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! another update, wheee!! and i got a shout-out, allllriiigghht!!! great chapter, although i hope there'll be a way outta that deal w/Sesshie somehow, but whatever u do with it will no doubt be entertaining.... anyway... yeah, good, great... until next time... (hope u update again soon, but i know all too well how life seems to pop out at people all the time... pesky reality)
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Reviewed By: digger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing that I believe that you could do better is give some description on the terrain that they are in. Other than that you really are quite good. Almost good enough to write professionally if you are so inclined. By the way what would you think about crossing over Inuyasha with the book "When the Devil Dances" by John Ringo. Imagine if some one from even colder than Sesshomaru was to meet the gang.
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 23:05 EDT
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narakus gonna try and do to kag and heie what he did to inu and kik aint he? ooo i just know he is. anywho great chappy and up-date soon pls
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Reviewed By: Luna699 On: October 23, 2004 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story completely. Can't wait to see Hiei's reaction when or if he finds out about the deal. I love this story to bits and pieces. I'm keeping up with the Red sox game thats on right now. I hope the Red Sox win. For naruto stuff go to www.narutofan.com it has everything. the OSTs for the series, Manga all chapters. and bittorrents. (Though I would only download ANBU best quality). the only thing is you have to make an acc to DL the Mnaga and Music and all. luina
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 18:52 EDT
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Wow that was so good!!! ^^ I hope you'll update sooner... sheesh I was so scared when Naraku killed Hiei... O.O I'm happy he still alive! ^^ *goes change the litter for the cat, goes eat, goes making the dishes and comes back one hour later* okay I'm continuing now. hmm... oh, no many things left to write. Update soon!!!!!! ^^ Please! ^^'
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 23, 2004 14:20 EDT
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Botan should look out then... Kagome's deadly when she's on a rampage....
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Reviewed By: Outlaw siren On: October 23, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!! Going to Update soon? I hope so. I need to know how everyone is going to react to what Kagome did. That will be interesting.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it but but but.. *at a loss for words* did you have to leave it at such a cliffie? *pout* Please update soon! I can't wait to see Koenma and possibly even Hiei's reaction to Kagome's news when and if the find out. Poor 'Gome. *big sigh* Good luck till next time (which hopefully isn't too far away). Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: -Amy- On: October 23, 2004 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man oh man is this story just getting better and better. I am really not like Fluffy right now, and I he is one of my fav guys. Just when things just get going good with Hiei and Kagome that has to happen. But then again that is what usually happens when things are good. Well I can't wait for your next chapter, your always putting us in suspence so we come back and it works. So Plesesssssssssssssssss update really really soon, I can't wait for find out what will happen next with the whole gang and all. Your Oh So Loly FAn -Amy-
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:49 EDT
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*squeal* So good! Excellent update. I loved Inuyasha's little outburst about Kagome lifting her skirt. Cracked me up and made my blood boil all at the same time. - Damn you, Sess! It figures he'd do something like that: a life for a life. Damn mutt. Kagome and Hiei will simply have to figure something out... Sesshoumaru's pet miko, indeed. I look forward to the next update. Until then, great work! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:42 EDT
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please updat soon, i can't wait to see what your going to do with kagome's and sesshomaru's deal. And poor hiei! whats he gonna do when he finds out, try to kill sesshy no dout. Will he know he died when he wakes? will he notice something wrong with the way kagome is acting? please UPDATE SOON! Sooner than 4 weeks this time maybe?
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Reviewed By: Mandie On: October 21, 2004 19:47 EDT
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This is a great fic! I love the pairing Kag/Hiei! Hope you update soon!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I skipped an entier night of working on my report to read this because it was so good... i just couldn't stop myself. Oh well, there's always study hall. Anyways this is such a good story i won't even try to put it into words how much i like it. I think it might make my head explode to have to think that hard at 1 in the a.m. But please update really soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 17, 2004 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great update!! can't wait for the next one!!! yours is the best hiei/kag fic i've come across!! and i agree on your opinion of the mating "ritual" being relevant to only certain "species" .... particularly since he's an elemental apparition, it just doesn't seem to fit..... no qualms on any animal youkai having a ritual, though
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