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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: October 29, 2004 19:29 EDT
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that was a great chapter, I really love it! ^_^ I hope you'll update soon again... man I don't have much to review today, what a pity! ^^' :~*~: Doujo :~*~:
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:28 EDT
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that was really really AWESOME...oh man can't wiat to see what will happen next:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:21 EDT
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another GREAT chapter...I loved it...hehehe...I like the way Yuske does his job:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:20 EDT
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Poor Yuske...hehehe...I love that finally Heie using his speed w/kurama
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:17 EDT
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oh oh...scary scary...GULP
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 19:16 EDT
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hehehe..that was AWESOME...I really enjoyed that:D
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Reviewed By: ame-chan not logged in On: October 29, 2004 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!!! thank you, and I hope the next chapter comes soon!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune (i'm too lazy to login) On: October 29, 2004 17:21 EDT
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You know what? You are evil. That was a good chappie, though. You need to update really soon. I'm so bored, and noyhing is happening with any of the other fanfics on my favorites list. Update soon!!! Please?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Title: a surprise for hiei and kagome
Reviewed By: Inu_chick24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter very much. I would like to offer a suggestion for a chapter, are kagome and sango still experiencing their periods, if so can hiei and kagome become parents because of what happened in this chapter? If not can kagome experience a change due to her mating with Hiei? please update really soon, because you story is one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: outlawsiren On: October 29, 2004 13:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But now How is Hiei going to find out about the promise to lord fluffy? that is going to be very interesting. please keep going!!!!!
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Title: The psycho authoress who loves good stories
Reviewed By: Irish Maiden On: October 29, 2004 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a brilliant authoress! Pure genius! I love this story, and I can't wait for the update. Hail the queen, people. I guess the reason why I like this so much is because it's not fruity - got a nice balance between light and dark going. Anyways...I'll be waiting for your update...are you going to give Kurama a break? Poor guy was hoping for some nookie, but Hiei beat him to it...although Hiei needed it more. Ja ne!
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Title: YAAAY!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Pleased_Hanyou On: October 29, 2004 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheheheh, Kagome's gonna feel that in the morning! *cheesy grin* Sorry I haven't reviewed in like forever but, *thumps mm.org* It wouldn't let me see your new chapters. Anyhoo, great lemon *is jealous of the almighty Lemon Queen* hella better than I could do. Update again! Yoake (P.S. My sis and I love your site's headline; "My killer robot skull-fucked your honor student", we giggle like mad each time we see it.)
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 10:34 EDT
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that was GREAT!!! oh man I hope it is heie/kag that would be great:D
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O ahhhhhhhh.... >_< noooooooo......o_oahhhhhhhh.....;;;deep breath;;; .....ahhhhhhh....... Ok, no that i have calm down. This was a really Really good chapter. you are now my fav writer and i worship the ground you walk on... but only if you get the next chapter up soon so i can see if hiei finds out and how he reacts... must know, need to find out, can't wait... ;;;twitch twitch;;; ~_< Yeah, so if you can't tell i really like the story. Good plot twists and great over all story line. Keep up the good work and please update soon... like, oh... you know... if it isn't to much of a problem.... TONIGHT... j/k hehe anyways, great job... ^_~
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 03:48 EDT
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I had to write another review; I just had to. I went through and re-read the chapters, simply because I adore them. Because of this story, I have read through some Yu Yu Hakusho (the few volumes that are translated, I should say) and I now love the manga series. This story in particular is one of my definate favorites; it's so much fun to read. You do a great job. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great work! ^^;
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