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Title: 16
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so BLOODY AWESOME...HOnestly where do you comeup w/this stufff I mean that was just great...really really great...I mean WOW!!! I love Heie and I love how you portray him in your story and everything...just WOW!!!
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Title: 15
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT??? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!?!?!? I mean that' just EVIL EVIL I SAY...but something has got to happen to fix that Right??? RIGHT??? I hope so cause man oh mna that would just all sorts of suck
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Title: 14
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:54 EST
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Man I HATE Naraku...but man mental warfare...always fun to watch but not to participate in...
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Title: chpt 13
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:53 EST
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OH man oh man oh man where did the girls go...well I mean I know where they went but um well it'll be fun to see Heie's and Kouga's reactions:D...oh man you see MEN never pay attention do they...hehehe...J/K
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 10:52 EST
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that was anotehr GREAT chapter...I love your story:D
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Reviewed By: Deviant On: November 01, 2004 06:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raw, Brutal, practically oozing with consentual violence... My God, darling... It's four in the morning and I just finished my goddamn presentation, but this just COULDN'T wait. I loved the interactions with the Jagan. Lovelovelove. The fight scene was also particularly well done in that you didn't make an effort to over-describe every teensy thing. Less can definitely be more. However... we all know the chapter is all about the sex. *GRIN* Any other character pairings and parts of that wouldn't have worked. That said, it was posivitely excellent, my dear. The emotion, the behavior, all of it was absolutely lovely. I admit to having a fondness for more ah- physically demanding bouts of passion, and stories that pull it off like this are really why. I only think I saw one typo and a few minor nips here and there, but it's early and hell if I'm not distracted so this may not be the best critique ever. They weren't enough to pull me out the story, and thus, I did not pay them much mine during this reading session. I do feel compelled to tell you about the mental image that I place all blame for on your shoulders. An extremely happy chibi-Jagan thingie rolling around and squealing with glee popped into my head. Made worse by the fact that there was a little sign in front of its "rolling spot" that said "Property of one Certified Sadist, and don't you Fucking forget it." Again, beautifully done.
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: K_Winchester On: October 31, 2004 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy freaking cow!!! Best Hiei/Kagome fic ever!!! Its very well written, there's depth, and the lemon was absoultely perfect. Props to you my new huggle buddy. Please keep updating (funny this coming from me). Please keep it up. Sincerely, K Winchester
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 19:53 EDT
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oh NO...Poor Kouga...that sucked..but hehehe..that was so AWESOME...poor Inu-yasha...ehehehe...
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:37 EDT
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oh no SOUTA??? what the???...OMG...no how could you go from such a GREAT scene to that...just like that??? HOW HOW HOW??????
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 18:35 EDT
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OMG...that was GREAT...hehehe...really really GREAT:D
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Title: swordgirl_amy
Reviewed By: swordgirl_amy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like always another wonderful chapter. I am soooo happy that they finaly did it! Hehe, Inuyasha is going to be one pissed puppy! I am still all sad over the whole sesshumrue thing, but most like or most hope things will work out. Are there going to be any other pairings in your story besides Hiei and Kagome? Like will Miroku and Songo hook up or will Krama end up with anyone? Keep your good stuff coming, I can't wait to read your next chapter, like always. Your Wierd Fan -Amy-
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 05:49 EDT
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Wow... this just goes to show what happen when you lose track of fanfictions. All I can say is phenomenal, and lucky it's a Friday, or I wouldn't be able to stay awake in school... heh. Great chracter development, great in character-ness! I'd almost say this is The same quality, if not better, then 'By Any Other Name'! Feel special, I stayed up till 3' am to read this, and I love it. You pull off the pairing, as well as an ulterior plot. Speaking of that... we need more of the evil Naraku-ness... He's been too silent lately, that's all I can say. I need to collect my thoughts... but that's not going to happen this early in the morning, so live with my confused rambling. I can actually envision Hiei and Kagome, I think you took it at just the right pace for them, with the right amount of interruptions to make sexual tension for readers and them... anticipation for that great lemon! Questions: How will Hiei react when he find's out about Sesshomaru's and Kagome's 'deal'? How will Hiei find out about the deal? Is Youko going to take a big role soon... don't ask, my mind is gone... And what will everyone's reaction be when Hiei and Kagome get back? That's all for now... Till the next chapter then! Cheers! or TGFGA! *thank goodness for great authors
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter, awsome. And i think i liked this one even better then the last, i think you know why, but damn, it's killin me to find out what hiei will say to the promiss. will he like fight for her freedom or something.... oh well. Untill next chapter... ^_~
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 21:46 EDT
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oh man that was AWESOME...really really really AWESOME:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:50 EDT
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that was another GREAT chapter...Sesshomaru...YAY!!!
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