| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Title: Crazy ass fan-fic...
Reviewed By: DemonGoddessSlayer On: December 11, 2004 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, seriously, this fic has me hooked like Hooked on phonics. I'm up to chapter 9 now but I'll read the rest tomorrow morning. This fic is really good and keep on updating. I would love to see more. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: December 11, 2004 21:17 EST
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hmm... me too I have a bad feeling about this... I hope Kurama won't do anything stupid. Anyway... I really loved that chapter, but I had to read the previous chapter to really remember what happened before! Sooooo... it means... you must update sooner!!! ^^ Whatever. Please update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: December 11, 2004 19:16 EST
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hmmm, what is Kurama up to? She didn't tell him! She didn't say she had to serve Sessho! i thought she was gonna tell them that...
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (2 lazy 2 log in) On: December 11, 2004 19:14 EST
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I agree there are some parts that the characters were OOC. You make Hiei sigh to much. You also never picked up on my idea were Kagome sees Hiei's demon form. He looks soooo kuel like that 2 me. ^_^ If you are going 2 do that e-mail me and tell me so I dont have 2 keep writing for you 2 do that. Other than that loved your fic, and will be your #1 reader.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:42 EST
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I am definately wonderfuly delighted with you. But so many questions! What's up with Kagome's soul? What did Hiei pick up at the end of this chapter? How is Kagome going to get out of her deal with Sesshoumaru? And what is her "super secret plan" to get rid of Naraku? Well, the only way for me to find out is for you to keep writing, so please do so before i give myself an aneurism! Oh, by the way, your website has proved to be an invaluable resource for alternate iy/yyh pairings. Thanks!
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Title: RyokoImai
Reviewed By: RyokoImai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:47 EST
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Konnichiwa ^__^ How are you? I hope that you have been doing well. Well I'm just writing you because I would really like it if you would please update all of your wonderful fanfics. I am still waiting on the next chapter of "Paradox" as well as "Enemies with Privileges" so please, please update soon. I have been going mad trying to figure out what will happen to our favorite characters. I also wanted to know if you have written the fanfic starring Kurama and Kagome? If you have, I would love to know the title for it. Please, take care, and keep up the great work. Ciao Ryo
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Reviewed By: evlmnkyslvenmyarvnt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell why are you a red sox fan the yannkees rule!!!!!!!!!!i cant belive you like them and so what if we didnt go to the world series!we have way more world series than you so in your face!lol i really like your fic it is good.update super fast please!!!!!!
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Title: Very entertaining!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stayed up *way* too late last night reading the story-thus-far! I've only recently started watching YYH (I just finished the episode arc where Yukina was introduced), but I'm really enjoying your characterizations. You've got some wonderful jeopardies--Naraku's mind games with Souta are truly creepy--and also a plausible reason for the two sets of characters to intersect. And I love the humor. The only thing that struck sort of a wrong note was Kagome's urging Hiei to draw out his killing of the three youkai scavengers. In the series canon, Kagome is a girl of almost infinite compassion and empathy--I can accept her becoming a kick-ass taijya, but the element of sadistic glee she took in watching Hiei kill seemed quite out of character for her. In any case, you're doing a great job with this story, and I look forward to future chapters!
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Reviewed By: lilostgirl On: November 10, 2004 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you so much for updating. the lemon was great and i hope that you update soon or i will be board to death. your one of the only writers who hasent quit with the story i liked. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: usher'swife On: November 07, 2004 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please make this a kurama kagome fic! please please please please!
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 04, 2004 18:21 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: November 02, 2004 19:33 EST
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....too good, can't comment.
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 02, 2004 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! another update!! and the end of FRUSTRATION for kags and hiei.... damn! now he'll be even more pissed when he finds out about her deal with sess... can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ~Kit~ ^..^
Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 00:54 EST
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I love this story!! Youre doing a really awesome job. Oh, and I was just reading sumthing that caught my eye, & it hit me why Sango got 'coral' pink shoes lol Sango translates into coral. Very brilliant of you. Im pleased. :D
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Reviewed By: LavenderRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 23:28 EST
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Doing great so far! The whole "I promise my life to Sess" thing is too much. Should I even ask how you plan to get Kag out of this one? I know, I know, "Wait and see. Muwahahahaha!" Just don't make us wait too long, ok?
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