| "Return To Hades" Reviews/Comments [ 345 ] |
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Reviewed By: I Is Me On: October 13, 2004 15:30 CDT
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*gasp* Your sister is evil!!
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: October 13, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOO!!!!!! So much action!!!! So much Emotion!!! so much... ugh... I don't know... Hey but it was good!!! you were really good to put a lime, a lemon, Shooting and fireworks together in a same chapter. *Eyes turn starry* wow... anyways; I'm sorry I couldn't review for a long time because: I was reading your other stories, studiying for a history test about all 28 cities of europe and their capitals, being a representant for our class, trying to win the 'Embeleco Day' prize, selling Girl Scout Cookies... all that and more... From now on I'll review more continously ( I wanna annoy you for some time)... Sorry About your computer *Hands Sphinx Teleia Plushie* I hope Sphinx-chan makes you feel better... ~Ja-Ne!!!~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 10:27 CDT
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Oh, wow, please let Maxine catch that bastard! He deserves to have his head kicked in! Make him talk to Seto, and let them all know where the kids are! Whatever you do, DON'T let the yami's send him to the shadow realm, the bad guys always find a way to come back and haunt them from there! Kick his ass around the block a few times for me please! I hope your computer gets fixed real soon, I need you to update! *hugs plushies in anticipation*
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: October 13, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm too hooked to turn away! See what u did?!? >_< But i loved this chapter! HURRAY FOR LEMONS AND LIMES! Hopefully they'll get some clue to whr the kids are, but with the way u write, tht'll be like 50 chapters from now. ^^;;
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 09:45 CDT
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Can I shot Vinnie, (wouldn`t want him to die so a well paced bullet to the spinal column at the base of the neck would work, hey maybe someone could do that.) ? Anyway loved the lime and lemon. Are they are ever gonna tell each other how they feel? I know they have to at some point but will it be in this one or the next one? Just wondering. Can`t wait for you to get the laptop back. Hope your dad is doing okay.
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Reviewed By: YoukoMia On: October 13, 2004 06:28 CDT
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i love this chapter anzu still scares the crap outta me though poor aten still debating on wether or not to kill himself its good he didn't die please get them out of there soon. I love it when aria provokes people with her monsters ^_^ its so funny.one more thing Anzu gives new meaning to the term dumb blonde no offense if you are a blond. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: October 12, 2004 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is going to be fun, lemony limes all the way. lol. ^_^ That bashing certainly lightened up the mood. hehehe. And Aria and her yaminess was fun when she threatened those minions. Heh heh heh, don't ever mess w/ a yami. Hope Miranda'll be ok, maybe Otogi can help. *looks hopefully at authoress* can't wait for the next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:01 CDT
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Wow, intense chappie. I loved it! I can't wait for the next one too... the lime and lemon... yummmmmmmyyyyyyyyy! someone's gotta help poor Aten, he needs his meds for crying out loud! Maybe we'll get lucky and Otogi will kill Vinnie when he tries to defend Miranda (C'mon, we know that's gonna happen)... well, I can dream, right? Let Bakura and Marik mummify Charlie alive! This time though don't let his soul go to the shadow realm... don't need this bastard to come back and haunt them too! I think they've had enough crap in their short lives, right? *chibi eyes at authoress* Once again, I can dream... right? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 20:56 CDT
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Oh, I can`t wait for the next chapter. Don`t let anything happen to Miranda. You gotta love her spunk. Maybe kicking his ass into next week would make her feel better. It would make me feel better that`s for sure. DON`T SCARE ME LIKE THAT. I thought Charlie was going to do something horrible to them. (Trying to control heart rate now. Thanks a lot.) Why did you have to send Asher away. What are you thinking? Guess I just have to wait. I need a chibi hug. (pouting.)
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 20:16 CDT
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Save the chibi! Save Aten!! He can't die yet! Him and Robbie have to confess! Lime means that Robbie and Aten do something..hm..I wanna know!! I feel bad for Miranda..I have a feeling I know what's gonna happen...I just hope she lives through it. I would feel so bad for Robbie if she didn't...Maybe Otogi can help!! Well I can't wait to read more ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 17:49 CDT
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Wow. That was an intense chappie!! So sharp! So...emotional. Scary, too!! Keep it coming!! I know that Dom is Yami. It just fits.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, poor Aten! Slowly, he's fading..*sniffles* but he'll be okay *gets all happy again and goes clubbing with the kick but authoress* Much happiness to every joining together to keep everyone satisfied... YESS!!!! ATEN AND ROBBIE LIME! Can't wait! *sighs* hey go download the song....random side note...In this World (murder) by good charlotte. and will Bakura ever get a grip on Aria and Umi? lol just wondering, and once again Aira proves herself, SHE ROCKS!!!standing up to a biker gang!!!!
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me (not logged on) On: October 10, 2004 09:43 CDT
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EEEEEEEEEE!!!! Aten and RObbie are my favorite couple!!!! Does that mean I'm weird?? O_o
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Reviewed By: Broken Time (Not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 09:35 CDT
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Hohoho, the cat is out of the bag.. I have the sentence you slipped.. Karl looked over at Zira. "Donny and Kendall were hurt, too?" "Donny's in a bad shape. That man's had worse than this. I thought he was a goner when 'that guy' made his gun backfire into his chest. But the man was back at work in no time." Don't worry, I won't say anything more of the matter, though. Aten Robbie lime? Yayness for you! Cannot wait. Happy belated thanks giving (Buuuh, I got stitches in this house on thanks giving.. bad day for me ;-;)
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew she was gonna be pregnant!!! I knew it *jumps up and down* my gosh! Im so happy theyre kinda okay! And not to mention the lovely part of kissing between the chibis, theyre so cute! Reminds me of the two freshmen boys i adopted at school, theyre the cutest things ever! But Aten and Robbie surpass them all. *sighs in content* haha! They didnt succeed and everyone is alive...but for how long.... O.o yay! happiness, i guess *huggles bakurasgirl to pieces!*
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