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Reviewed By: Still too lazy!!!! O.O On: September 12, 2004 08:46 CDT
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Title: dark_mistress88@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Valea On: September 11, 2004 01:44 CDT
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Awe! poor Aten! if only he didnt have to feel that way! *sulks* ah the times of puberty when I was nine...man did that suck. Anyway! Are you going to have a chapter where you just have Robbie, or keep us in suspense for forever and a day? ^_~ Anywho this is so sweet, he's all scared, but...but..*jumps around* I hope he can get some reassurance. You know you had something else up that you put up as like one chapter and it was way into the future and a certain person with a heart problem was about to die...did you take that down because of a change in your master plans? huh? huh? HUH?!!!lol, yay! *hugs a aten plushie and kisses it* its so cute!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: September 10, 2004 18:44 CDT
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Wow.. we haven't heard from Serenity for the longest time. What ever happened to her?
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: September 10, 2004 18:44 CDT
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Wow.. we haven't heard from Serenity for the longest time. What ever happened to her?
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Reviewed By: Tari Helaynwe (not logged in) On: September 10, 2004 09:48 CDT
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I hope Aten can cope with growing up. Believe me when I say it's hard. He has the support of his family, so what's there to be scared about? What about Robbie's feelings? I'm sure he feels the same about Aten. They're so kawaii!! Hopefully Marik will step in and talk to his son. Loved this chapter! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next one.
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Title: Harvestgirl 64
Reviewed By: Stiiiill to lazy to log iiiin!! O.o On: September 10, 2004 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWwww!! how cuuuute!!! Poor litter Aten.. -_- He got all scared.. HOW CUTE!! *tackles Aten and Robbie and makes them hug each other* Good! ^_^ How sweet that he wants to ask Otogi... I'm glad you use Otogi instead of Duke.. ¬_¬ Yech.. Yay for Otogi! ^_^ I can't wait for the wedding.. Does that mean.. 3 girls to torment Seto!?? Miranda, Serenity, and the ever party-crashing Anzu? ^_^ That would just be mean... Yay for girls scaring Seto!!! *laughs and throws Barbies at him* Bwahahaa.... Feel the sharp pointy fingers of the demented ones.... ^_^
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 09:21 CDT
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Aten is going to have a hard time with getting older and having his body change, I know that. I hope Otogi helps him. He is a very sweet little boy. Wish I could squish him. I have been where he is. He can overcome it if he just lets himself come to realize the past doesn`t have to control him and he is stronger than he knows. I didn`t expect Serenity so soon. Hope she is happy about the wedding. Joey and Seto are just too perfect together. I know Asher seems scary to most but I find him adorable. He is loyal and caring, yes he is crazy but everybody deserves someone. I like him. I`ll be his girlfriend if you would do it. I like the name Lyn if you decide to do it, if not oh well. I still love the stroy no matter what. Hope to see the update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: September 08, 2004 23:02 CDT
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Aww how sweet! Its so lovely theyre finally gettign together...man ten freaking years...TEN YEARS! And ti took him three years to propose! Im so happy for them both! Yay! And theyre all going to be teenagers! Whoot whoot!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: September 08, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Aww, kawaii. *squeals* ^_^ Seto finally proposed, go him. ^_^ hehe. Asher is an interesting character. ^_^ Can't wait till Fri. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: September 08, 2004 21:25 CDT
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Oh! So cute~ It killed me, Seto Finally proposed! Yaaaaaaaay! Go Seto!
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Title: I totally agree with Asher! ^.~
Reviewed By: Harvestgirl 64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:00 CDT
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I've gotta agree there... HORRAY FOR PYROMANIACS!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 15:05 CDT
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Hehe that was great! Gotta love SetoxJou. I love the way Seto proposed to Jou, it was just so awesome. I can't wait to see Aria and Aten! Mako and Aria together is sooo cute. I can't wait for the next chappie. Oh Asher is pretty cool too lol, gotta love pyromaniacs!
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Title: Yeah! #3! ^_^
Reviewed By: Harvestgirl 64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeaaah!!! I loved the intro.. about time Seto got up the nerve.. : ) Aria's gonna be so happy!! *squishes her to bits* I love Mako and Aria pairing too... Long live the Seto & Aria pairing though!!! *gives you a plushie of Aria hugging Seto's leg* Aw.... How Kawaii!!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 12:19 CDT
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Love the way you started this. I needed that after this morning`s rush with the kids. I can`t for Friday. More Asher, he is soooo cool. Gotta love him. He needs somebody though. Maybe you can get him someone in later chapters. He is a great guy, aside from his fire fetish, which only makes him more appealing. At least for me. Love all your stories. Hopefully my computer cooperates soon and I`ll have the beginning of mine up. Oh well. See ya Friday.
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 12:14 CDT
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And so it starts!! And so very yummy does it start!! Lovely!! Just lime, huh? That's never all there is with you!! Hurry up, Friday!!!!
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