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 Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in)  On: November 19, 2004 10:06 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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YAY!! Serenity SO got what she deserved! I seriously can't stand her ignorance. I hope things go well for Hayden. I know he'll get better... Great chapter! Keep up the fantastic work!
 Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2004 09:05 CST
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That was really good. I loved the part with Yami Aten and Serenity. I hope she gets it now. Poor Hayden, he really is a mess after what happened to him. I hope that he gets a little better soon. He needs some serious help and he won`t get it until he can talk again and tell someone what he is feeling. Robbie at least admitted to someone that he loves Aten, I wish Aten had heard it though, but maybe Yami Aten did. After all the hikari doesn`t need to be awake for the Yami to know what is going on.
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: November 16, 2004 23:19 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww, Aten and his kawaii chibi eyes, so cute! *cuddles* ^_^ Poor Kaiba, he has so many things going on in his house. He has Hayden, Jou and his withdrawal, Jeanie and Mokuba's baby, and he has to take care of Jaimen too. Lots of craziness. Poor Hayden too, stupid rotten bastards. Lots of angst on him. Need some relief on that. Can't wait for the next ch.
 Reviewed By: Drazara (Draza)  On: November 16, 2004 11:45 CST
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lol *squishes Aten* such a cute little sweet-talker. But i feel really bad for Hayden. Why can't you write it so he recovers after...let's say...3 to 7 years or something? I know you've said Hayden will never recover but...*puppy dog eyes* can't you do it this once? Please...? *bottom lip trembles*
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2004 08:56 CST
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Oh man. Aten is too cute!! Poor Joey and Seto. And poor Hayden!! Not coolies. It's gonna be hell in the Kaiba home for awhile...
 Reviewed By: anubiset (to tired to log in)  On: November 16, 2004 08:40 CST
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Robbie seems to be getting better. I hope everything works out for Aten. Hayden is going to be something to handle for those two. I hope they can deal with this. It`s not easy to handle someone that has regressed like that. I had to deal with that at Nursing School. Not something I want to repeat. I just hope that they can hold up under the pressure. I hope to see more of Aria sending things to the Shadow Realm soon. That is always so much fun.
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2004 08:37 CST
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Ohhhhh.... my heart is breaking over Hayden! I'm beginning to wonder at my thoughts I had spoken to you about him... You are entirely too good at torture, and this is the worst yet! (or best, depending on your point of view I suppose) *sobs* It makes me want to reach into the story and hug the boy and try to make him feel better... but, you'd think he'd be better around women, they didn't do anything bad to him... but then again he could just be lashing out at everything to keep himself safe, no matter what... of course I could be wrong in all this... *sigh* Girl, you are too good at angst. Please throw some fluff in, or a lime between our two favorite chibi's perhaps? Need a slight lifting of my heart please! Update soon!
 Title: sad
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2004 08:17 CST
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this cahpter was sad but it's a good change from hot steamy yaoi. it shows jsut how tramuatized he ahd been thanks to that--thing! serenity and those three sickos, may they rot in the deepest level of hell. i hope hayden does get better soon and credit should go to seto and joey for their patience. i know it's not hard but that's what a good partnet does. they stick wih it through thick and thin.
 Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff  On: November 15, 2004 10:26 CST
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ooh double the pleasure, Bakura!! I know Marik is a good father... but right now he is a lousey husband. And that joke Kura made about the horse. Ouch! >.< And Aria? Heh I like her. Personally... I hope Serenity drops off the face of hte earth and Joey? At least he and Seto aren't fighting anymore. One more thing before I go: yay!! Baby dragons!!! And thanks for the cards I love them!
 Reviewed By: Veggie_Tart  On: November 14, 2004 21:20 CST
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Yay for Malik-stuff! ^_^ * is happy* thnx for the plushie- still sad about the Hayden thing. hope for more malik yelling at stuff. aha...yes..luved chappie. poor aten - i luv the little kid. so adorable....got back from vacation just now- my feet are cold! luv ya! l8tr!
 Reviewed By: Draza  On: November 14, 2004 12:49 CST
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ALRIGHT!!!!!!! *chants* Go joey! Go joey! Go go go joey!! KICK THAT BIRCH SERENITY OUT OF THE HOUSE AND ONTO HER MISS THANG ASS! phew...now that that's outta my system...congrats with this chappie, it was great!!! Is Marik going to get the shit kicked outta him by Bakura? Maybe you should let Ryou take a crack at him. And are there going to be any more incidents with yami PMS by our favorite little blood-lusting chibi? lol, let HER get Marik to come back home, i'm sure he'd be running!
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: November 14, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yesish, fantastic lemons! So good! Loved them! ^_^ hehehehe. *huggles Malik plushie* Woot! Joey kicked Serenity out! Go Jou! ^_^ I loved the ch. Your story always brightens my day, cuz it's so awesome! Good luck on your job! *looks at the review I just written* Seems like I went a little overboard on the exclamation points. lol. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in)  On: November 13, 2004 20:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVED THE LEMONS. Can`t you tell? anyway, I`m glad that Joey told her, know if only she could accept it and get over this phobia of hers. Good luck with the new job. I`m more than happy to wait for what you come up with. This story is too good to go on the back burner.
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: November 13, 2004 14:07 CST
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Yay! SOrry for now reveiwing last chapter but I'm all for this one! It was happiness, THANK GOD JOEY KICKED THAT BITCH OUT! That leaves me feeling extremely esctastic! Espeically the doubley lemon! Bet Bakrua is feeling superly special! And yeah! So I'm happy you got a job and yes, so if it takes longer to update, that is fine! Cause you cna be happy, threten your sister with a pitchfork to help around the house.anywho, is that going to be the last we see of Serenity? O.o
 Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2004 12:22 CST
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Wow, awsome lemons girl! I owned a waterbed once, and if you don't get the timing just right with the waves it can definitely be difficult! *does the dance of joy* Serenity the bitch is gone, YAY! It's about time! It gave Joey and Seto such a Kodak moment... *grin* Yet another beautiful chappie, thanks! Update soon babe!
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