| "Return To Hades" Reviews/Comments [ 345 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: December 05, 2004 13:08 CST
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what can i say? that was very sweet (sweet lemon and limes ^^). Robbie sure is one of a kind, as are the parents in the fic. Girls are weird, hell I'm a girl and I still don't understand other girls! *laughs* Okay I can't wait for the next chapter and yay Yugi appears with a new bf!! ... Oh lord don't tell me is ass-Yami in a disguse?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli) On: December 05, 2004 12:56 CST
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Wow! Great chappie!! Aten's back, back again!! Aria, Gabby, Aten, Robbie! They are sooo cute!! Some yummy stuff there too!! Yugi has a boyfriend?? Hmmm. *tries to wonder who it could be, brain explodes* More soon!!!
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Reviewed By: i is me On: December 05, 2004 12:29 CST
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*gasp* YAY!!!!!! IT'S THE YUGINATOR!!!!! ---------*sticks toungue out at you* I'ma gonna write that Mokie/Donny story!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:24 CST
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Yay! Yugi's gonna have a new boyfriend! Wonder if Yami will hurt him O.o. Um..that was an awesome chapter! I'm so glad Aten opened up, hooray for Robbie! Yeah, I can't wait until the next chapter! *sits at the computer and waits for wednesday*
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: December 05, 2004 12:20 CST
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Such a great chapter! Another one for the records! Oh and btw...WHAT DO YOU MEAN HE WON'T RECOVER?!?!?! *takes out scythe* HE WILL GET BETTER! *starts to chase authoress around with huge scythe* I'm not called the death goddess for nothing... Please make Hayden better...*sniff*
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Reviewed By: Valea On: December 04, 2004 20:57 CST
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Wow, and I do mean wow. I'm stil so sda that Hayden won't be able to change, and man! I didnt know someone could use all those curse words and have them flow so well! It must be so hard for Seto and Joey to hear Hayden say all that stuff, is the possibility of Hayden still being their ring boy, is that still gonna happen?
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: December 03, 2004 11:42 CST
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I hope Hayden can get over this part. It wouldn`t be good on any of them if he stayed like this. I hope the next chapter some Malik/Marik/Bakura action. That Idea of Bakura`s sounded like fun. I love hot fudge.
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Reviewed By: Drazaria On: December 03, 2004 06:25 CST
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*Grabs Seto and kisses his bruises and cuts* there all better!! *Glares at Hayden* *looks at Seto* you have a potty mouth son...but not much you can do about it *cuddles Seto* *looks at Bakurasgirl* can't Hayden get a little bit better? You know so that he doesn't yell *I HATE YOU!!* to Seto or something? And where is little Yugi while all of this is happening?
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: December 02, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great ch too! Love the pattern of the mood swings, humor, angst then humor then angst, then humor etc. Well most of it is like that in this ch. ^_^ Poor Seto, Hayden was badly abusing Seto w/ his words. The cuddle in the end was so cute. ^_^ And do I hear chibi dragons? That sounds like fun. ^_^ Can't wait till the next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the chapter a lot! Yay! baby dragons! Oh maybe there should be 3 baby dragons... I don't know why, but hey it could work. Oh poor Seto... I felt bad for him... and this is coming from a Yugi fan! (Yes I love Yugi, but I like Ryou too.) I feel bad for Mokuba's girlfriend... the birth is going to hurt! Oh and maybe that's also when REBD (Or BEWD) have the baby dragons! ^^; *hugs Ryou plushie* It's not Yugi, but that's ok... anyways will Yugi always be alone in the game shop? He should at least adopt so he won't be too alone... well I said too much. So can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: YoukoMia On: December 02, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am begining to hate hayden now, He's not the little boy i liked so much. Poor Seto i feel really sorry for him having memories of his stepfather come back to him. hey can you do a lemon between Joey, seto, and ryou? this chapter was just a cuddle type thing, then again i'm not sure if that would work being that Joey and seto might not be in the right state of mind. Seto talking like anzu O.O OMG Seto has gone a bit loco in the cabasa(crazy in the head)
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Title: is lazy
Reviewed By: i is me On: December 02, 2004 15:36 CST
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Donny swallowed his oatmeal. "Babies? Mokuba! I never thought I had it in you!" +_+_+_+_+_+_ O_O This needs to be worded different, cause when I read it, I was bitten by a rabid plot bunny. Yes, I picture Donny with his arms around a pregnant Mokuba. Wouldn't they be an adorable couple?
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Reviewed By: Broken Time(NLI) On: December 02, 2004 15:02 CST
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Babies!!! *Overly girl voice* Babies are like friendship! Yaaaay friendship! *squeal* Just like PINCHY!!
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: December 02, 2004 13:56 CST
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Poor Hayden...I really hope he gets better!! When will he get back to his cheery self? It seems odd that such words are spewing out of his mouth. Hopefully he'll be better soon. Great chapter! Can't wait for the sequel!!
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Title: tissue?
Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: December 02, 2004 13:05 CST
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what can i say? part of me wants to slap some sense into Hayden, but another part jsut wants to cry until my eyes fall out (whihc i already did today). poor seto... it's like he knew all the buttons to push all at once. i know what aten's going through becasue i went through that play theraphy and such. my brother was like hayden for several years but he never hit anyone. well he nearly hit me once... okay back to teh topic. ooh thriple birth! i can't wait to see waht hte kids looks like. also, yeah hte humor about teh stains was funny adn the last part where ryou and seto and joey all cureld up like that. so sweet :)
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