| "Return To Hades" Reviews/Comments [ 345 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: December 02, 2004 10:49 CST
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Ack! I'm beginning to wish I had never talked you out of the Hayden suicide... your mind can get so harsh sometimes! I'm glad Joey and Ryou were able to bring Seto back from his little breakdown. He needs their love and support for sure! After that dark chappie we are most certainly due for a lemon! Update soon please! Oh, and I read where you had mentioned to Jasmine and her gang... you had mentioned something about creating a hybrid of REBD and BEWD in a duel? You gotta! That would be so hilarious, for Seto to call forth his favorite, to find out he's a she, and she has her hatchlings... Joey calls his fav, and they wind up nuzzling and trying decide whether to let their masters near the hatchlings... that would be hilarious!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: November 29, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant 10 out of 10 for overall rating sorry, I must of clicked on it too fast. ^_^ hehe. See ya.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: November 29, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the greatest ch you ever written! ^_^ I was roflmao ^_^ when Robbie said 'his vagina was stolen.' *chuckles* And that scene in the summerhouse was just as funny. Poor Mokuba, poor eyes. heh heh so funny. ^_^ And Poor Jou, he licked the stains. *shakes head* I loved the lemony goodness too! ^_^ And yesish, Aten talked again! ^_^ But poor him, he still feeling sad. *huggles* The sequel sounds like a lot of fun too, chibi umis! hehehe. *in a sing songy voice* Bakura's going to have a fit. lol. And I still hate Yami. Can't wait till the next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 15:33 CST
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*waves* hi... I was finaly able to review this story! It took me so long to read all of it! Anyway you got me into Yaoi now... which I think is a good thing. Oh poor Yugi... he's all alone... maybe he should adopt a kid or something cause I feel bad for him being all alone. Oh will Jeanie go into labor when only Seto is there? That will be funny... Oh yeah and about the Dragons... Joey called his Red eyes back dragon a girl and Seto called his Blue eyes white dragon a boy... so will their be any chibi dragons? ^^; just wondering... ok I'm done... update soon *faints*
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Reviewed By: Drazaria On: November 29, 2004 14:34 CST
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Yeah that was a great chappie! *drools* lemony goodness.....*shakes head* oh and i thought that part with Marik and Daniel was priceless!! I was laughing so hard! I noticed a slight mistake in the chappi though. When Aten is erasing the 'If Only...' at the top of one of his paintings, you wrote that he wrote 'I Wish...' instead. But wehn Malik sees it, it puts 'If Only...' at the top. I just thought i'd mention it.
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Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: November 29, 2004 10:15 CST
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oh dear lord!! *roflao* no offense what did they think those stains were? pain?! a waterbed? lord if joey and seto weren't already in bed i think they would have popped the damn thing! ooh dirty joke from highschool!! >.< anyway, oh poor mokuba. heh i hope jeanie doesn't walk in on them by accident either! i can't wait for the sequel ^^ and how's yugi? also, i hope hayden gets the help he needs. also thankful to see aten talking. squish the chibis!!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: November 29, 2004 09:31 CST
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I can`t wait for the sequel. I also can`t wait for more lemons. All Hail Lemons. Lemons are life. I hope to get some stories out before Christmas, but it`s hectic here. I love reading your stuff it keeps the juices flowing for me so to speak. okay, I didn`t mean that the way it sounded( brain is on Lemons still.)
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Reviewed By: I IS ME AGAIN!!! On: November 28, 2004 21:42 CST
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"Maybe tomorrow night we can fit it in." *snickers* so, just what are Seto and Ryou going to... "fit in"? *slaps own hand* Bad Heather... -=-=-==-=-=-=- I was talking to my mom, so I told her about poor Robbie's vagina. So... who stole it? -=-=-=-=-=-=-=- EEEE!!! Can't wait for the sequel!!! Not that I want this one to end, mind you, but I can't wait anyways. So, no chibi Robbies? Darn, and I was SOOOO hoping for another mpreg. *is joking*
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Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakurasgirl Lover On: November 28, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH!! ^_^ Chibi Umi's! ^_^ Baku's gonna kiiiiil Umi.. .O.O" Can't wait ^_^ Yeah for weddings!!!! ^_^ Now.. Poor.. POOR Moki.... -.-" Good thing he has Jeanie.... or he'd probably have to put out his eyes... -.-" And poor Seto and Joey..... .. .. He HAD to lick his finger.... -.-
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Reviewed By: Valea On: November 28, 2004 15:04 CST
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Yay so freakign happy that Aten is once again speaking, was it an accident or like coudl he not take it? Ah for him to be home is sweet but its so sad that he has to be so confused. Growing up never to know if the can trust people, but at least he'll have Robbie and they can take it slow. Anywho the Summerhome scene, was very nice, though you would think they knew what those staidn were but them not knowing made it all the funnier! So yay and it was wonderful to have a lemon, a foursome! How long have we waited to see that?! It was wonderful cool times, cant wait for the sequeal, and to see some dancing! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: November 28, 2004 13:40 CST
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Great chappie! I wish I could be the one cuddling Aten though... the poor boy is feeling so insecure, I just want to squish the boy! But the situation at the summer home with Bakura and Malik... so hilarious! I saw that happening... I had realized that they mentioned to Ryou that they were going home tomorrow, not right away... silly Yami's! Such a wonderful way to end this chappie, with a lemon! Four way to boot, it made me very happy! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's next!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time (NLI) On: November 28, 2004 12:17 CST
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*Falls over laughing* Poor Joey, Licked them stains clean, basically. And Seto dreams of Bakura and Marik? *Giggles* Ooooh, Seto, didn't know THAT
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 09:25 CST
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Oh my! The sequel sounds so good! XD I can't wait! This chapter was really good, so glad Aten is speaking again. I thought he would end up like Hayden for a second and not talk again. It seems Aria is getting a little bit annoyed with being the only girl. I really wanna see chibi Umi's! That's gonna be so cute! I wonder if Aten and Robbie would adopt kids? Ah..hehe we'll just have to see!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: November 27, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glares at Yami for hurting chibi bakura* It's a good thing Marik was saved her. *cheers* I guess Aria's going to need Aten next time. The ch was excellent. Some of it was funny, esp. the part where Seto and Jou are finding 'white stuff' all over the place. lol. ^_^ Wonder if they'll find out what it is, it'd be so funny to see Seto's face when he finds out. ^_^ Other parts of the ch was suspenseful. Can't wait till ur next ch. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: November 26, 2004 09:08 CST
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Oohh, sunday can't get here fast enough! Poor Aria... I do hope she has learned something from her duel. You most certainly can't let her die! I hope Aten recovers fast now. His surgery seems to have done well! Poor Robbie... He's still confused it seems... I think he's accepted his love for Aten, but he's too scared to speak of it yet... I do hope he gets the courage finally! What's going to happen with Hayden now? I think it's time for Seto and Joey to realize that he needs to go to live at the hospital. Even though it's an extremely difficult decision to make, it does need to be done. I feel so bad... Please update soon!
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