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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 › » ] | Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:01 CDT
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ahaha the family saw that beefcake calender n sierra and gin were focused on the lighting in the picture?! well theres no major issues with the demons that are after ryo...im LUVING the story so far!
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I understand. I mean, writing everyday can get a WEE bit boring, but. . . . . .well, for me, anyway. . . . . . When I haven;t writteb in a while and I do start writing, I love the rush that it makes me feel. Anyway, I do hope you continue writing, because for me the wordl would end if you quit, but at least keep updating whenever you feel you want to. Again, that was a SPECTACULAR chpater and I hope you update soon!!!!! TTFN!
| Title: Great Chapter!
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, another great chapter! I hope you update agiain soon! Oh, this isn't one of those comments that harasses you because you don't update enough (you update perfectly for me) i just hope you continue! I'm really sad to find out that reviewers are pushing you to stop updating. i think i would be furious if i was you. I love your story and i hope you can work things out! Good luck! Steph (CresentMoon21)
| Title: Beefcake Anyone? 2
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:55 CDT
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PS Please don't stop posting, I don't know what I'd do if you stopped posting. Your chapters are the bright spot in my reading times, and just make me feel good all over. In case you are driven to stop posting by mush brained, insensitive, loud mouthed, narrow minded, ignorant, foul mouthed, jealous, short sighted, Baka's, I want to thank you in advance for all the hours upon hours of reading pleasure you brought to my world by several million key strokes of your fertile mind. In the words of my son, You totally ROCK.
| Title: Beefcake Suprise
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:46 CDT
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Ah, Sue, you wonderful woman. How I laughed when I realized that Toga's calander pictures were about to come back and bite him on the ass. Revenge is a dish best served cold, and that stunt had plenty of time to cool. You made me remember my cousins, and all the fun we used to have as kids. Given Toga's physical resemblence to Sesshoumaru, dispite his mothers coloring, it would have been even better if someone had commented on that in passing, after all, the pictures were taken when he was in total rebellion to everything that was his father. lol! Back to Ryo and Nez. For someone who's been raised by and around men, with her only female influince being Kagome, I think she's doing just fine. She wouldn't come around any faster than she is, BECAUSE of WHO she is. I wonder, do you think it would make any difference to Nez if Ryo asked her to marry him when the time is right? Would it help her to understand that he is completely sincere about wanting her by his side (and in his bed) for the rest of their lives? It's a lovely thought, specially cause she's human. She may have been raised by men, but she understands what a marriage proposal means. It's just so hard, they both tug on my heart strings. I must be part Inu Youkai, I just want to protect them both from any more hurt. Bah, mushy stuff
| Reviewed By: btrains126 On: April 25, 2005 13:39 CDT
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Just letting you know that I'm still reading (in hopes of keeping you from not posting - you may "keep" your betas but we readers like to "keep" authors. Sorry if I'm coming off too strong - but I understand the need not to post every day (it's just that the "If people keep this up I'll have to stop posting" is frightening - no not-posting!) ::grumbles:: stupid readers don't know a good fic when they come across it. Anyway - Just to let you know - it seems like its moving along more slowly now, don't know why. Nezumi also seems to be catching on very, very, very slowly - any reason for that? And what's with the lack of fan movement from Kagura after that little "surprise"? You keep writing, I'll keep reading...
| Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 13:22 CDT
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heh, just in case inuyahsa forgot, it's the loss of clothing that has one of his sons mated at the moment ;) Great chapter Sue!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Radio... not signed in On: April 25, 2005 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may be a silly question, but did the family know that Toga's picture was on a calendar and was seen by many? Sierra handled that situation with grace, i think. I might have been less composed. Nice chapter!
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I was laughing so hard. Poor Toga I love his charater so much but that was just too funny. I can't wait read more!! Poor Nez and Ryo I hope nothing bad happens, with Nez not marked and all I'd just cry my eyes out, but on the other side I think Ryo should be a hunter again thats who he is. I really can't see his charater behide a desk. well Can't wait to read more of this and Purity 4.
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 25, 2005 11:24 CDT
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Thanks for the great chapter. Maybe Nez is getting close to putting her own problems to the side and accepting Ryo for who and what he is. The relationship has been all about her and her needs up to this point. Maybe she's ready to stop thinking about herself all the time and start thinking about the feelings and needs of her life long best friend who, coincidentally, wants to be her husband. I hope the snake brothers are ok. If they die, it might really bother Ryo. Thanks for sharing your work!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Move over Shippo...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 10:13 CDT
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I was laughing just as hard as our favorite kitsune, if not harder, when Ryo casually trotted out the beefcake picture of Toga to the family. Then Gin and Sierra started discussing low-light lenses and the other pictures...ROFLMAO!! For all that this chapter started out in hilarity, it turned serious...dead serious. Ryo taking his sword home and his calm yet confident assertion that he will protect her, got Nez's attention. She's really starting to see Ryomaru for who he is; not as just the friend she's always known, but as the strong and capable man who's youkai heritage has shaped who he is. Maybe once she is able to see all his sides with no more concealments, magical or otherwise, she'll stop thinking that he's the flighty playboy she'd always thought him to be. An unrepetant womanizer cannot be trusted with someone's heart, but a steadfast guardian who, despite his baka-tendencies, has always been honest with her...just might be. --- You know, when this story is finished, I'm going to read the whole thing all over again, from beginning to end. I cannot relate how much this story has touched me. *^-^*
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 25, 2005 10:12 CDT
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The game is on!! Love it, all of it! Nez needed to see that protective side.
| Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 25, 2005 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I now feel obligated to say soory to you for any of the times I may have tried to pressure you in your writings to update faster. THat also goes to alot of other people I know as well. Since they either dont have a computer of thier own otr dont have the internet. I seem to be the one thaty prints out all of your chapters/stories and gives them to well them. They all wanted to say to take a break and dont kill yourself over writing. Everyone knows how tiresome it may get when you write non stop like you do. If it werent for you I would be soooooooo very very very bored for most of the week. Your stories your creativity itself brings light into my view. It fills me with joy and happiness whenever I see that you posted a new chapter or updated one of your old ones. I admire your dedication to you loyal fans/readers and your writings. All in all I thank you for the wonderful stories you have written. And I think even higher of you when I know that you dont write for your readers but for yourself and no one else. Writing creative stories should be fun for you not the other way around. Not fun for your readers but for you. You dont need to try to wrack (hoped that is spelled correctly) your brain for more chapters. Just remeber to have fun. I know I already posted to this and all but I was So danm near falling asleep in my chiar then. And thought this would make it up. So just have fun and take some time off. I would still be here even if it took you a year.
| Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 06:46 CDT
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i can fully understand you. you should write because you want to and because you like it and not because you feel obligated to your readers. i saw many writers who forced themselves to post regularly and that's a pity, cause you can somehow see and feel it when you read their stories. i think that a story is a good one, when the writer takes pleasure on writing it... you have an amazing writing style and your stories are... can't even find a good enough word! so take your break! you sure as hell deserved it! ;-) p.s. i once read in your A/N that you started to write a new yasha/kagome fic called desideratum, but deleted it. i was really sad cause i didn't have the time to read it... however i can fully understand your motives for deleting it. but is there any chance that you will post it again and continue it?
| Title: Sighs...
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: April 23, 2005 13:07 CDT
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I ahve a friend who feels exactly the way you do, only her muse is sadistic so she can't stop writing. I'm sorry some reviewers didn't take Manners 101, and I'm really, really sorry that it's making writing boring for you. I don't know if there is anything I can do to help, but I really hope I'm not one of the people who's making life harder for you. You really don't deserve it, you are far nicer to your readers than we in anyway deserve. But if my opinion means even the tiniest bit to you, I'd rather you update a chapter every two weeks and make them three sentences long than give up entirely. Hey, maybe the wait will kill off some of the...problem readers. My offer still stands. WE LOVE YOU! (From Pyro and co, which numbers at about twenty)
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