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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: commitments made in blood
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so don't feel bad or offened people can be stupid no retarded for no apparent reason. one more thing my friend's computer is being evil fritzing out on her my friend themostadorkablesquashedbanana wanted to thank you for the review on her fanfic "ice isn't always a bad thing" the only reason her posted it up was for her friends could read it she wasn't expecting reviews oh well.like i mentioned people can be weird and retarded one reviewer left my friend an odd review on a oneshot lemon fic she did she didn't know what to think of it. the reviewer said *you could have waited a few months before you posted this up i was going to post up a yuyu/iy xover fic with a lemon on it* suchs a bit snobby or maybe its my imagination just because she posted a little comment on the top before the chapter began saying she did it because there are no yuusuke.kagome lemon fics out there. she laughed it off if i were her i would have abit offened or puzzled. well keep up the good work its a cool fic can't wait for the nexst update!
| Title: commitments made in blood
Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow my my nearly going for the 400 cool its nice that most of your reviewers are so deep invovled in the story neat! first i want to say is that your story is wonderful its very intertaining and fun to read containing my favorite xover pairing kurama/youko/kagome yay! you didn't make the characters go o.o.c which is good i hate it when people make the characters sound weird like for example in bad yaoi fics some authors portray males as silly prissy pansys just because their gay incase thier forgeting there still men. men are men no matter what and plus your plot of the story is very creative. oh yes and i want to comment on the flamers DON'T LISTEN TO THEM! god just don't over stupid unhelpful things if its constructive critizism ok i understand but for a no good bash its just wrong and stupid clearly a waste of time its good you put them in their place. try not to get pissed they are just pricks because 1 it can be over jealously they can't come up with good fics on their own, and you manage to satisfly your readers everyday so just tell those flamers off. reason 2 they just have nothing else better to do. people tend to forget the authors here are not paided or obliged to write its just a hobby can't they get that straight into they're dense heads god the stupidiy of people these days.oh yeah one last thing its good you told off black whatever the fuck its was because if he or she is that cruel and stupid deserves to be put on the spot.
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, that's a phrase I've never understood. "Hentai closet". I mean, "Hentai" means "Strange one", or something close to that effect, according to every Japanese person I've asked. I think that since the anime turns "hentai!" into "pervert!", people use it like that... but that's really not what it means, I've been told. Hell, even this site uses to indicate "perverted", but...[shrug] However, I have to say that Hiei is so incredibly wahumina [ie, so hot that your mouth drops open and you can only get out nonsense syllables like wa..hum...ina!] In the shonen jump chapters 11, 16, and 24. especially in #11, when he's standing on a fence, side profile...drool... http://www.shonenjump.com/onlinemanga/yyh-hi-chapter-11.html I swear he, sesshoumaru, and youko are the cutest anime guys in existence. And then I have to wonder just what's wrong with me that I find anime guys attractive... and then I look at the guys I know, and I understand!
| Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I wasn't able to review the previous chapter. [rolls eyes] What an idiot. You've got some of the more impressively obnoxious and stupid flamers I've ever heard of! As for the eye color, to the best of my knowledge, Takahashi, in colored pictures, drew Kagome with blue eyes. The company that turned the manga into anime changed them to brown. As the author has the final say over canonical details, Kagome Has Blue Eyes. (I think it's a manga trend to give Japanese characters impossible eye and hair colors. Logic and genetics do not enter the picture!) It's like people who rant over Sesshoumaru's poofy thing. Takahashi has stated that it's a pelt, not a tail, but if you put that in your story, tons of people blast you because they "know" it's a tail. I had this thought of Kagome seeing Kanna and rushing off to help; though to the best of my knowledge the mirror only sucks in human souls. I don't recall Inu-Yasha, Shippou, or Kirara having problems with it. It merely reflected their attacks. So it could be concluded only Kuwabara is truly in danger of being soul-sucked. The weird thought that came to me while reading these last two chapters was of a modern Naraku, in Hawaiian board shorts and a beater. I really need to start getting more sleep before reviewing! This was lovely. I can't wait for more! [grin] I was reviewer #100, and reviewer #300. I was *this close* to being reviewer #200, though none of this has been intentional. sort of cool, though.
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 16:55 PST
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who else would be brave enough to grope you? ME! Heehee! Sometimes I think I'm way too brave for my own good... I go around groping random people at school all day! It's sooo much fun!
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Reviewed By: inuyuyu_15 (not logged in i guess) On: March 04, 2005 15:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I can tell, so evil yet so brilliant *cries and claps* I am so proud of you! Very nice job might I add with the tension and all. lol So They're off to see Naraku, the most horrible demon of all >.> *hums the rest to the background music from "We're off to see the Wizard" from The Wizard of Oz* Keiko is staying behind with Kagome, wonder how that goes and what they might end up talking about. Ohh yes and I cannot forget, Kagura left Naraku like that in the mall, if and when he gets free, we shall see what he has planned for her. Now I'm going to wait for the next chapter so I can see what all you have planned!
| Title: woah!
Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 15:11 PST
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Okay, so here I am, minding my own business, when I see that you've updated once again....I keep telling myself that I'll read your story, but then I get sidetracked and before I know it, my time is up at the library and I have to go home...-_-,...so today, I made your story a priority and when I saw how many chappies you had already, I nearly screamed: "Holy pink panties Batman!", which would have resulted in me being kicked out for being loud....anyways! I absolutely love your story and am delighted that you made more than a one-shot...^_^...I've said it once, and I'll say it again...you're an extremely talented author and I love every story you've put up so far...keep up the great work! ^_~
| Reviewed By: Person... On: March 04, 2005 15:05 PST
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Lol, now Kagome's Helous too! Cool. Though I would feel so frustrated if I was Kagome. I mean, not being able to be alone at all, not being able to have any male friends, and not being able to fight someone who was my enemy before there's... I would be really mad. Oh well, at least she has the patience I greatly lack. Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon! Later! ^-^
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 14:47 PST
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Oh! The person who groped you? That was me! And about 20 other people that have yet to be named! But it sure is fun over here! I can't wait till tonight! Party at my house!
| Reviewed By: ArcticKitsune On: March 04, 2005 14:18 PST
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There is a section of conversation that sticks out in my mind. You wrote the scene between Hiei and Kurama and used the line: "It would be a constant fight over penetration rights and I don't submit to anyone." Now... the only two people I've ever seen use that particular term are Ookami-chan and Deviation. Whether you're reading Ookami's journal, or Deviation's story, it's just far too similar to think you didn't see it and decide you liked it enough to use for yourself. And really, the feel of the comments Youko is making are remarkably similar to a part in Deviation's story. That's probably flattering or something, but seriously... if you're going to make it that obvious, you need to give credit where it's due.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 12:35 PST
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Woo hoo! Ok since we feel like glomping people...lets go glomp Youko! He he. Well Your progress is amazing. I was in school reading this chapter so I had to keep minimizing it. I still read all though and...I didn't get caught!
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 05:59 PST
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O.O Eep! Heh, I better cut out the name-calling then... I don't feel like dying today, tomorrow, or any other day this year. Hm, I had the insane idea the Kurama was going to tie her to the bed when he was 'stopping her' from going. That just shows how wrong my mind is early in the morning... Heh, I still think it would be a good idea... Yes, if Hojo is to become a boytoy, he'd have to miracoulously heal from the wounds Youko gave him, but then Youko would hunt him down again to help him 're-learn' his lesson... ^.^ Er, wait... I'm not really supposed to be happy about that... ^.^; I do feel for Yusuke, in a small insignificant way. Speaking of that, I came up with a nickname for Kurama also, unimaginatively, rose-boy. Heh, oh yes! There's a picture I think you would like thr url is http:// www.dzalpha .net/ imgs/ kuro%20 yomi%20 youko%20 kurama. jpg Okay, you know the drill, remove the spaces, ogle, fantasize, and such. On to this chapter[39]... You're really getting up there now, and it doesn't look as if it is going to end anytime soon... Er, anyways. Kuronue, my mental image of him in this chapter, just appeared to be gazing at Kagome with the slightest tinge of dread. How's Keiko going to manage to keep Kagome there? I dunno... You do, perhaps, but that's about it. Hm, Kurama and Hiei's reaction were like 'Well, so? You're friends kidnappedby a homicidal hu- NARAKU?!?!' Heh, at least, that's one way to sum it up. 'till then! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:51 PST
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Okay I took all day to read this highly well written story. I love what you did with the character, however my interests are peaked about where the Miroku & Sango reincarnations are. Question why doesn't Koenma recruit Inuyasha? He obviously has enough power to go into Kagome's dreams? It's just a thought and I eagerly await Chapter 40! Update Soon!
| Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOL. XD I love Youko, really, I do. He has selective times to refer to himself as "I" and as "We". I, obviously, when he has done something good. And, of course, "we" when he's in trouble. I love it. :3
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 20:37 PST
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Your welcome for the browny. I forgive you. I can't believe Kagome's jealous of Keiko since she knows Keiko has Yusuke and then Youko's ego grows into a much bigger ballon *snickers*. Let's hope Keiko tells Kurama that Naraku is at the mall before the demon idiot does something wrong and ends up killing people. I'm doubting Kagura will rescue Naraku with her life, she'd rather have Naraku dead then anything else. I wouldn't be surprised, I'd rather watch Naraku suffer with Kagura any day. *smile innocently* Hmm, yes, suffering will do nicely... I'm so evil sometimes, it's scary!:-D Please update soon! Love the chapter! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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