| "Always A First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 259 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooo, this looks like it's going to be really good. You've made it very much like the original. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 19, 2005 04:12 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey,the way u describe bulmas feelings is great! please update soon. in the meantime i shall read ur other stories, maybe theres other BV.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 23:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOL. That was great. I totally, TOTALLY adore this story. Just another fic of yours that I utterly LOVE...I so just cannot wait for another update. Oh yes, and one more thing. I LOVE YOU for posting two chapters at once! You are awesome!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAA! I am so the first reviewer, and this is so an awesome story already! I love it...you started out at a place that I don't think anyone else every has, and I am just so giddy right now! I MUST read the next chapter, and I promise I will review that too!
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