| "Always A First Time" Reviews/Comments [ 259 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: July 14, 2005 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWW so cute. I love it! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 12:18 EDT
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That was great! I loved picturing a poor, confused Vegeta. Looking forward to their reunion.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 13, 2005 21:36 EDT
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that chapter gets a great big awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Mostly for Vegeta's feelings about his son. Alright good stuff I'm out.
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Title: Guess who's back... Back again...
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 20:21 EDT
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Lol, I told ya I would write you another review once you posted your chapter. I loved it, it's finally getting to the good stuff again between Vegeta and Bulma. I loved this chapter though... hell I've loved all your chapters... your whole story. As soon as I saw an email notifying me that a story was updated, I opened it and to my delight, your story title was there. I'm glad that you'll be posting more regular now. Great stuff! I love how everyone is so much in character, i find that a lot of stories have a lot of OCC because they can't really get into the character's mind and perspective, but you've really gotten that patted down. This story has to be my favorite though. I love it! No sugar-coatings I promise, all of it I've said is true ^.~ alright, well once you get your next chapter up you'll be seeing me again. Until than Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero (I'm actually signed in for once lol)
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Title: amazed the umpth time
Reviewed By: starbrella (not sighed on) On: July 13, 2005 15:36 EDT
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YAY!!! I'm so happy to hear that your going to update this more now, i was worried for a sec that you would stop and considrate on other things ::smiles innocently:: N e ways, i LOOOOVVVVEEEE ITTT!!!! I demand another update! lolz great work!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I could just see Bulma smarting off to everyone who tried to help her! ^__^ I know how I was with my first child at least. But you ended it there?? I want Veggie to see Trunks!! ;__;
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: July 13, 2005 13:08 EDT
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Oh, I wanted to see Vegeta's first interaction with Trunks. It's wonderful to see how Vegeta has evolved from the blood thirsty man we first meet in DBZ. In some ways I'd never say Vegeta was evil but misguided in life and I think that really shows in this fic. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: TT On: July 13, 2005 12:50 EDT
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I simply love it! (well thats abt all i can say, not very constructive but its true. Hope you dont mind me spamming your review board with all these little admiration notes)
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Reviewed By: TemptingTemptation [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 03:13 EDT
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That was just yummy! I can't wait to read more chapters. That was just so stimulating. I love rain soaked, shove me up against a wall intensity. I'm sorry that its taken me so long to catch up on this story, but I'm glad that I have the time to pick it up again.
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Title: Hey again!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 23:01 EDT
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Where have you gone to? I've been waiting for another chapter to this story since your last one was posted! I will tell ya this again, it's a great story, with a great plot and a great setting. This story really works with the show... due to the fact that it doesn't show anything in that space in time. But this is a story that I find worth reading, not just another story where it goes no-where (kinda like mine sometimes) And considering that this was my first DBZ story that I've really read, I have to say it's my favorite ^.^ Anyways, I'll be writing again when you update, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: KNMom26 On: July 10, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a mom of six who is absolutely mad about Vegeta (and Dragonball Z)--totally the fault of my 15-year old daughter. I really enjoy your fics, and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter in "Always a First Time." Also have "Different" saved on my favs list. Thanks for keeping me entertained!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:20 EDT
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Yes the baby is coming, but to bad that Vegeta isn't there. I want more so get ta writing WOMAN!!!!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!!!! (Please Continue and Finish)
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please continue and finish it! This story seems pretty realistic, too, like those 3 years could have really happened. You got the meteor thing and turning Super Saiyan and everything!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 27, 2005 14:08 EDT
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good chapter... the story is going well...
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it seems vegeta really has a jealousy issue. he's always had an anger issue so there's no use commenting on that. pretty sad though, that he doesn't have enough faith in bulma to believe she would be faithful to him while he's gone, even when he said he wanted no attachments. in short what a bastard, but a really hot bastard at that. and yamcha's actually a good guy in this story, good for you, you don't find to many of those yamcha being the good guy stories. great job and keep it up.
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