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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 03:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are getting along fine again... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: MorphinexRomance [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Hmmm but no lemons or citrus in the last couple of chapters. That makes me sad.
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could, I would have rated everything above a 10! Such a great story, I couldn't even fathom I would like it so much. I like that you turned what I thought was a subplot into the main point with the whole hanyou thing. I can't wait for the next update... please don't make it too far from now because I really can't get enough of this story!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 03:44 PDT
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i was so glad to see that you had posted an up date. i'm glad that they came to some type of compromise, but 5 years? you will make he see the absurdity of waiting that long, won't you? i'm frustrated, already. thank you for a great chapter
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3(logged out) On: June 17, 2008 03:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyable[: I liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: mickiressa
Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember if I reviewed before or not but this story is absolutely amazing you are my inspiration to continue to write my own InuYasha fanfic. I just love how you seem to be inside the characters. You're a great writer and I really love this story. This chapter was really funny I couldn't help laughing at InuYasha for being jealous and Kagome for seeing Kagome as her brother. (It has to be gross having sex with someone who reminds you of your brother!) Anyway keep writing and I'll wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 03:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im still here ^_____^ had to go over the last chapter to get me thinking again :P but hmmmm their time is nearly up?? T-T
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Reviewed By: Ashayuni15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Hey! I reviewed your last chapter, a long time aho....in what, March? Ah well, when I said "effing", I put the word "fabulous" after it in italics. and it didn't turn up. So that's what happened there... Anyways. I love this story so nad! I was so scared when Inuyasha bumped into Kouga, and hell, it was funny. Oh and Ryu! He is so cute, lol. How old is Ryu anyway? I always wondered... All of that crap under the bed? Yea, that was scary. Lol. I have been dying fpr Kagome to find the letters, and hey! She did. I think she came to the wrong conclusion. The only reason Inuyasha won't kiss her is because he doesn't want to lead her on...and he believes she will grow out of him, nut she would never say because shes too nice and doesn't to hurt her feelings. I mean his. Arg...I gots tangled. Its sad, but he's right. Kagome WOULDN'T say anything if she got tierd of him. Not that she ever will. I wonder though...If Inuyasha got so mad over Kouga, what would he do if some guy back home tried to rape her? He'd have to come out of his room for that one. And Im betting Yami would get pissed too. Is Kagome going to bring the blood back to her professor? Okay sorry this is so long, I could type u a whole email on your story... Update ASAP please!
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 23:12 PDT
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I was so surprised! What a great little present. Don't worry about not updating - I recently got burned out from writing and had to take a hiatus. Bu tmy fans were really understanding, as I'm sure yours are. This was a great chapter; poor Kagome, always worried about Inuyasha, and poor Inuyasha, always second guessing Kagome. But, at least the Kouga-Inuyasha jealousy thing came out! That was fun. I'm a little worried about what will happen when Kagome has to leave, but that's up to you. I'm sure we'll love whatever ending you've chosen. Happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She sighed in disgust. It was always so difficult to understand the minds of the kamis so it was best to just ignore it all together unless a blatant sign came up. ***Should be kami's*** Brother... oh god it so funny!!!
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter! I loved his reaction to Kagome and Kouga! LOL...can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 18:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I was so thrilled to see an update! Once again, your characterization was terrific....and realistic. I really do love when these two are together. But kagoem is battling uphill to get Inuyasha to truly belive that they have a chance. But, not as uphill as she thought. Those letters were a dead giveway to Inuyasha's true feelings. He's just so afraid to trust her....but he definitely has good reasons for that. But, nevertheless, I'm glad she got some reassurance that her feelings are returned...even if she can't tell him about it. But, oh, to be a fly on the wall when he does finally sniff those letters, lol. I can't wait to see what happnes next. Please update as soon as you can.
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Title: LandraBlaze
Reviewed By: LandraBlaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. I am really hoping that you will complete it one day soon, the long chapters and great description are something that pulls me to it. Your characters are exceptional considering the AU setting. And the way you have the races involved into each other is really eye opening to our own society. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Title: First timer!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 19:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gosh! What an emotional roller-coaster ride this story has been so far! I swear, I want to cry with Kagome, rip down walls with Inuyasha, and strangle them both, lol. You came up with an excellent story, despite this originally being a one-shot. I would never have thought of a 'what-if' AU scenario. Great work. ^_^ I find a lot of mistakes - primarily grammar - and that usually turns me off a story. But your plot and characterizations are so good that I became entralled with this angsty story. I don't hold it against you; sometimes simply rushing through a story can mean lots of mistakes. But what's important is that it's quite enjoyable. With the situations and interactions, this is a great story to read. Thanks for sharing this story with us. ++++++ On a more personal note, I'm sorry for your medical problems. I can't believe you're still thinking of your fans when you have to deal with such things in real life. Although I sympathize - writing is an outlet for me, and if I had serious health problems, I would want to keep writing as well, both for myself and my fans. ;) I look forward to both the next chapter and the conclusion of this story. I remember you said this would be around 8 chapters, then upped it to 15... Now we're on 17. XD I wish you luck and health, Pita.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please update soon!
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